she intonates the sentences well but she repeats the grammar mistake -these informations-several times, she explains Kadir has city museum in a good way.
she explains her film frankly with pictures.we could clearly comprehend it.however she says some words wrongly such as area,industry,recognize. she has also grammar mistake.for example,she uses "information" word as plural. moreover, she says "büyükşehir" word in turkish. nevertheless,she convinced me to go there.
her pronunciation is good, and she gives some information in her video about the museum informatively. maybe she can find an english word for the turkish word 'büyükşehir'.
earth, museum are some of the pronounciation mistakes. it is a good informative speech but it didnt persuade me to go there. also she didnt speak fluently. however, her intonation is well in general. her voice comes horse so ı couldnt understand every word.
I think it is a good presentation but there are some words such as english,listen that are pronounced mistakenly.And she used the word 'information' is used plural.
I think the place was presented well. And speech has such a suitable speed. Eventhough there are some words mispronounced like 'presentation' but the rest is all carefully chosen.
Generally, your video can be regarded as an ideal one thanks to your fluent speech... there are minor pronunciation mistakes but the well-chosen pictures make these mistakes ignorable.....
Your video would be a admirable one if it were supported with an authentic music.. you have few pronunciation mistakes like ''history'' (it should be ['hıstırı] ) but they are neutralized by your lively sound.. it was a good one, actually....
there are some pronunciation mistakes for example area, documentary, building... the tone of your voice is good. it is clear and vivid. ı wasnt bored while ı was listening to your presentation. your intonation is great
She pronounces the word ‘monitor’ wrongly. She uses the word 'information' plural.However, She talks rapidly but her voice is fluent. It is easy to understand what she says.
Your presentation , voice and intonation is very atractive.But you have some wrong pronounced words like monitor and square.It is persuasive according to me.
you talk fast but your vocie is clear. ı liked your video too much and you pronounce some words such as national,presentation,transport,documents wrongly. ıt is a good sample for informative speech ı want to visit it
Her voice is clear but there is some strange noise on the background ı think somebody is calling her:)) She's speaking a little bit fast at the beginnig but later it is ok. ''subject,architecture,programme and etc. '' are mispronounced. Good!
I think, although you are speaking fast, you are speaking understandable.I only cacth a grammar mistake and pronounce miskakes.I have visited there twice, but ı can visit there again because it is a wonderful place. you have told about it well.
First of all, this video was effective except for some pronunciation mistakes such as programme, benefit and recognized. But you could have made this video more enjoyable.
I really enjoyed with the end of the video.I have been to Kayseri but I didn't have the opportunity to visit there, for the next time I am sure I will visit K.H city museum.
you said ‘two thousand of three’. And the word presentation was pronounced incorrect. But your speaking was good and that museum is a good place to present.
2003 is pronounced wrongly..I always like you voice especially when you make presentationss.and here is also your voice is good but you the sacrifice of voice recorder
It is an effective informative speech and video. There is no music. I say continiously the video is a bit ineffective without musiz. ı hope you pay attention to it.
It is a good video apart from some pronunciation mistakes such as meter,recognized etc..Information can not be in plural form, I think.Your intonation might be better.Best regards:)
You give a lot of information about the place that you suggest us to go. It is an informative speech. sometimes, you used turkish words such as büyükşehir and Mini Kayseri that especially makes me laugh. there are some mispronounced words such as english, in front of, square and arhitectual. Music can be good choice.
There are some words mispronounced such as 'exhibit,monitor,and transport'.Her speech is fluent ,but I think she speaks a bit fastly.The intonation is good.
her presentation is good, but there are pronounce mistakes. For example she says the word 'programme' wrongly.
ReplyDeletethere are some pronunciation mistakes such as square, in front of. she says 'these informations' but the word, information is uncountable noun.
ReplyDeleteshe intonates the sentences well but she repeats the grammar mistake -these informations-several times, she explains Kadir has city museum in a good way.
ReplyDeleteshe explains her film frankly with pictures.we could clearly comprehend it.however she says some words wrongly such as area,industry,recognize. she has also grammar mistake.for example,she uses "information" word as plural. moreover, she says "büyükşehir" word in turkish. nevertheless,she convinced me to go there.
ReplyDeleteher pronunciation is good, and she gives some information in her video about the museum informatively. maybe she can find an english word for the turkish word 'büyükşehir'.
ReplyDeleteearth, museum are some of the pronounciation mistakes. it is a good informative speech but it didnt persuade me to go there. also she didnt speak fluently. however, her intonation is well in general. her voice comes horse so ı couldnt understand every word.
ReplyDeleteI think it is a good presentation but there are some words such as english,listen that are pronounced mistakenly.And she used the word 'information' is used plural.
ReplyDeleteI think the place was presented well. And speech has such a suitable speed. Eventhough there are some words mispronounced like 'presentation' but the rest is all carefully chosen.
ReplyDeletevisitors can find informations it is gramatically wrong we know that we use information as singular.generally it was a good presentation
ReplyDeleteGenerally, your video can be regarded as an ideal one thanks to your fluent speech... there are minor pronunciation mistakes but the
ReplyDeletewell-chosen pictures make these mistakes ignorable.....
Your video would be a admirable one if it were supported with an authentic music.. you have few pronunciation mistakes like
ReplyDelete''history'' (it should be ['hıstırı] ) but they are neutralized by your lively sound.. it was a good one, actually....
there are some pronunciation mistakes for example area, documentary, building... the tone of your voice is good. it is clear and vivid. ı wasnt bored while ı was listening to your presentation. your intonation is great
ReplyDeletePronounciation and intonation are very good but she could use her voice more effectively the sound continues in same level.
ReplyDeleteyour speech was a bit fast but it was in accordence with your photos.it persuadeed me to go there
ReplyDeleteexcept some words such as history and presentation I didnt catch mistakes. Speech is good and informative and photos are attractive. I like it.
ReplyDeletein general, it is good.
ReplyDeleteYour fluency is good and i like the tone of your voice.I couldn’t catch any earsplitting pronunciation mistake.
ReplyDeleteIt is a well prepared video. You introduce the museum well.The only mistake I could realize is that you say ‘these informations’. It is a wrong usage.
ReplyDeletethe speech is good i like it, you may have used music to make it more attractive.i couldnt hear a mistake
ReplyDeleteI saw a lot of pronunciation mistakes. you should have improved it. Yet, your speech is fluent. Cong. ;)
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really good.your speech is well organised. but you said informations, please check it.except it ı liked your video.
ReplyDeleteShe pronounces the word ‘monitor’ wrongly. She uses the word 'information' plural.However, She talks rapidly but her voice is fluent. It is easy to understand what she says.
ReplyDeleteI liked the video and I found it persuasive. It was a good informative video apart from a few mispronunced words.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation , voice and intonation is very atractive.But you have some wrong pronounced words like monitor and square.It is persuasive according to me.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was well-prepared but your speech was not fluent. You mispronunced building, area. But I liked your video.
ReplyDeleteyou talk fast but your vocie is clear. ı liked your video too much and you pronounce some words such as national,presentation,transport,documents wrongly. ıt is a good sample for informative speech ı want to visit it
ReplyDeleteHer voice is clear but there is some strange noise on the background ı think somebody is calling her:)) She's speaking a little bit fast at the beginnig but later it is ok. ''subject,architecture,programme and etc. '' are mispronounced. Good!
ReplyDeleteI think, although you are speaking fast, you are speaking understandable.I only cacth a grammar mistake and pronounce miskakes.I have visited there twice, but ı can visit there again because it is a wonderful place. you have told about it well.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, this video was effective except for some pronunciation mistakes such as programme, benefit and recognized. But you could have made this video more enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed with the end of the video.I have been to Kayseri but I didn't have the opportunity to visit there, for the next time I am sure I will visit K.H city museum.
ReplyDeleteDespite some mispronunced words you speak fluently.Every word is understandable.
ReplyDeletearea should be pronounced as /eəriə/ and you couldn't persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced some words wrongly but your video is well organised also your intonation is good
ReplyDeleteapart from some mispronounced words and wrong intonations this video is effective :D Good job.
ReplyDeletesorry but I cannot catch some words. but I think meter and document are pronounced incorrectly.
ReplyDeleteyou said ‘two thousand of three’. And the word presentation was pronounced incorrect. But your speaking was good and that museum is a good place to present.
ReplyDeleteI am not sure but 2003 and presentation are pronounced wrong. It is a beautiful informative presentation.
ReplyDelete2003 is pronounced wrongly..I always like you voice especially when you make presentationss.and here is also your voice is good but you the sacrifice of voice recorder
ReplyDeleteIt is an effective informative speech and video. There is no music. I say continiously the video is a bit ineffective without musiz. ı hope you pay attention to it.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video apart from some pronunciation mistakes such as meter,recognized etc..Information can not be in plural form, I think.Your intonation might be better.Best regards:)
ReplyDeleteIt is a good example of informative speech.there aren't many mistakes that attracts attention.you are speaking fluently.it is a well prepared video :)
ReplyDeleteYou give a lot of information about the place that you suggest us to go. It is an informative speech. sometimes, you used turkish words such as büyükşehir and Mini Kayseri that especially makes me laugh. there are some mispronounced words such as english, in front of, square and arhitectual. Music can be good choice.
ReplyDelete'monitor' is mispronounced. her speech is fluent. there is no problem with the intonation.
ReplyDeleteeven though you speak fastly, the speech is understandable,intonation is good,but you should care some more while pronounciating
ReplyDeleteyour video and pictures are very attractive apart from some pronounciation mistakes it is a good project congratulations:):):)
ReplyDeleteThere are some words mispronounced such as 'exhibit,monitor,and transport'.Her speech is fluent ,but I think she speaks a bit fastly.The intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteher video and intonation were good. however, there were some mispronounced words.
ReplyDeleteintonation is good and voice is understandable you say meter,documantary wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is perfect despite some pronounciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteyou have few pronuouncition mistake. You speak very persuasive and it is very fluent
ReplyDeleteYou should not make us awere of your reading the text. Apart from this, there is no problem with your presentation. I like it. Thank you Betül!
ReplyDeleteGenarally it has ben a good work if you had supported it with an ideal video.good
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