my honeybunch, your speech is not bad but you might use your intonoation more efficiently with the aim of convincing. the only mistake i could hear is "community"
ı liked your music very much.your intonation is generally good but at some parts you use it unnecessrily. your pronounciation is generally good you have only some minor mistakes.good job.
absolutely fantasitc music. your recorder is the problem. it makes your speech incomprehensible. your intonation is good in my opinion. you have just a few simple mistakes. good job congratulations.
your music is very well-chosen but it is hard to understand that it is you who is speaking, ı think there is a problem with your recorder however ı think that you use intonation effectively and your pronunciation is good except some minor mistakes.
Ur speech,music and pics were very nice.However,paying a bit more attention to ur intonation would make the video great. Despite everything, I liked ur video,it is well prepared. Good job dear :)
your recorder is not good ıt makes your voice incomprehensible. you try to speak fluently but you should add your feelings a bit ıt ıs very good in general thanks alot
You should have recorded your voices from a different device. Yet, as much as I heard, your pronunciation is very good. you should pay attention to intonation to persuade people. cong. :D
ı want to say that ı dont like your intonation. you vocalize word one by one. you could have spoken fluently. as to your pronounciation mistakes, you mispronounced the words "carbonate, community, and extraordinary"
kübra, why your voice was heard like this ıs there a problem with your recorder. ı know your intonation and pronunciation is effective but here ı am sorry but ı must say your vocie is irritating. your photos are effective.
my honeybunch, your speech is not bad but you might use your intonoation more efficiently with the aim of convincing. the only mistake i could hear is "community"
ReplyDeleteı liked your music very much.your intonation is generally good but at some parts you use it unnecessrily. your pronounciation is generally good you have only some minor mistakes.good job.
ReplyDeleteı liked yr music. intontion is good. carbonate was said wrongly it should be ˈ/kɑːr.bən.eɪt/ the rest is good.
ReplyDeleteabsolutely fantasitc music. your recorder is the problem. it makes your speech incomprehensible. your intonation is good in my opinion. you have just a few simple mistakes. good job congratulations.
ReplyDeleteyour music is very well-chosen but it is hard to understand that it is you who is speaking, ı think there is a problem with your recorder however ı think that you use intonation effectively and your pronunciation is good except some minor mistakes.
ReplyDeleteUr speech,music and pics were very nice.However,paying a bit more attention to ur intonation would make the video great. Despite everything, I liked ur video,it is well prepared. Good job dear :)
ReplyDeleteyour recorder is not good ıt makes your voice incomprehensible. you try to speak fluently but you should add your feelings a bit ıt ıs very good in general thanks alot
ReplyDeleteis this voice is yours:)ı think the recorder has aproblem but your intonation is good:)thnks my baby..
ReplyDeleteintonation is good and I couldn't find any pronunciation mistake. your voice recorder has a problem I think too. anyway good job. cong.
ReplyDeleteThe only bad thing is your voice recorder. I could not catch any mistakes. Good job!!!
ReplyDeleteit would be better if you had used a better voice recorder. pronunciation is good but you should have been lively.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronunciation is good however it would be better with a better recording
ReplyDeleteYou should have recorded your voices from a different device. Yet, as much as I heard, your pronunciation is very good. you should pay attention to intonation to persuade people. cong. :D
ReplyDeleteAcoording to me,your voice isnt so clear I think it is because of your recorder.But your pronunciation and photos aree good.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good.But if only you had used a better recorder.
ReplyDeletei liked your video generally but u can improve your intonation a bit.but the rest is ok.cong.:)
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is good but pay attention to intonation. In general it is a good one.
ReplyDeleteyour voice recorder is not good so,sometimes your voice is inaudibiltiy. but, in general, I liked your video.
ReplyDeleteyour recorder is problematic so sometimes it is not audible. community and carbonate is pronounced wrong moreover you should improve your intonation.
ReplyDeleteThe music is the one ı really liked.Your voice is not audible. ''community,establish''were misprnounced.Thanks..
ReplyDeleteı want to say that ı dont like your intonation. you vocalize word one by one. you could have spoken fluently. as to your pronounciation mistakes, you mispronounced the words "carbonate, community, and extraordinary"
ReplyDeletekübra, why your voice was heard like this ıs there a problem with your recorder. ı know your intonation and pronunciation is effective but here ı am sorry but ı must say your vocie is irritating. your photos are effective.
ReplyDeleteBoth of your presantation is really good:)I like your intonation and pronunciation but please check 'community' my honey:)
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