it is well organized video and speech is good.if only you added music to make it more attractive. you mispronounced the word byzantine.anyway it is good job
your speech and intonation are good. in additioni ı liked your video. but you mispronounced some words. they are continuous and again. congratulations :)
ı think the vide chould be moer pleasimng with a music for it, but in general I liked it. you are speaking both fluently and clearly. the intonation is also good. however, you should watch out the pronunciations of some words.
Your video could have been enriched with a music; yet it was still well prepared. Intonations are used but 'byzantine, persian' are mispronounced.
ReplyDeletebyzantine, persian are mispronounced. you could have added music. however you give enough information about it. thanks.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good and fluent enough. the only mistake i heard is "byzantine"
ReplyDeleteit is well organized video and speech is good.if only you added music to make it more attractive. you mispronounced the word byzantine.anyway it is good job
ReplyDeleteit is a good video ı think, you intonated the sentences and you have a good pronunciation except "byzantine"
ReplyDeleteIf only you had used music in the background. But, I liked your video, your speech and intonations. Good job!!!
ReplyDelete'byzantine' was told wrong but ı liked your speech and fluency.your video is really good.Good job,cong.:)
ReplyDeleteI didn't catch any word pronounced wrong. Your video is very good. Cong. =))
ReplyDeleteI liked your video, Dilek. ıt is a very good presentation. There are only minor pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteit is a well prepared video and would be great with a better voice record. your intonation is good. well done.
ReplyDeleteyou almost pronounce any word wrong I liked ur video very much. well-done
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good and fluent.but excavition is wrongly pronunced.It is a nice video.
ReplyDeleteYou speak fluently. Intonation is good and your pronunciation is ok.
ReplyDeletethere is no problem with pronunciation or intonation and her voice is clear...
ReplyDeletespeaking in frequency and using pronuncation are very succesfull.your clear voice makes understable. shortly,cong dilo:)
ReplyDeleteFirstly I couldn't find any mispronounced words,Her speech was really fluent.She intonated thee sentences very well.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and intonation is also good, it is a good presentation
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very clear and intonation is really effective. well done job.cong.=))
ReplyDeleteintonation is very good, I could only catch the mispronounced word byzantine,the rest is ok I think cong.
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking fluently.(02:26)you said /kʊldnt/ but it should be pronounced as /kʊdnt/
ReplyDeleteand byzantine was also said wrong.it is generally good.cong
your speech and intonation are good. in additioni ı liked your video. but you mispronounced some words. they are continuous and again. congratulations :)
ReplyDelete''build,building,byzantine,''were mispronounced.The rest is good. Good job!
ReplyDeleteı like your video in terms of intonation and pronunciation. cong, dilek :D
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear and also intonation is good but I think as maviş said ,build is mispronounced thanks dilek:)
ReplyDeleteI think there is a problem with your recorder,your voice is as if coming from a deepness,but in general ı liked your video.
ReplyDeleteı think the vide chould be moer pleasimng with a music for it, but in general I liked it. you are speaking both fluently and clearly. the intonation is also good. however, you should watch out the pronunciations of some words.
ReplyDeleteI think your voice is clear.It is well organized video.The photos are compatible with your speech.Best regards!!!Dilek::))
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