the informations are not boring but speech is a bit, as it is too slow. the most clear pronounciation mistakes you did are "kilometer and meter" be careful for them
the speech was boring because you speak always in the same intonation. your speach isnt so fluent. there are some pronouncitaion mistakes suzh as around, paradise, away, kilometer, environment. it didnt persuade me to go there.
you should use more intonation and in this way you can persuade us to go there,in my opinion.'meter,away' were pronounced wrong.also,you should avoid unnecessary pauses and be more fluent.
there were some pronounciation like km and meter.it would be better if u had spoken in accordance wth intnation.but the photos are nice and the place is very attractive. thank you
''mount,around,cola and meter'' were mispronounced and he should have use coke instead of cola and Baghdad instead of Bağdat.In addition If he had said paradise ıt doesn't sound like paradise..
You can speak a bit faster in the next time and you can be lively.You are not fluent in this video.Please,pay attention to the pronunciation.Develop yourself!!!
there are unnecessary pauses. ı think you could have spoken fluently. in respect to pronounciation mistakes, there are a few mispronounced words sch as around, enjoyable and dangerous.
the video is good but pictures can be better.voice is good and audible.pronunciation mistakes can be edited
ReplyDeleteYou're speaking disjointedly so your sentences cannot be understood. Enjoyable is the word you pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeletethe video is good but please speak faster for the next time;)
ReplyDeleteI hink you should speak a bit faster. In general it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeletethe informations are not boring but speech is a bit, as it is too slow. the most clear pronounciation mistakes you did are "kilometer and meter" be careful for them
ReplyDeleteYou sound like you're reading it. You give unnecessary pauses. Away, kilometer, environment are mispronounced.
ReplyDeletethe speech was boring because you speak always in the same intonation. your speach isnt so fluent. there are some pronouncitaion mistakes suzh as around, paradise, away, kilometer, environment. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteyou should use more intonation and in this way you can persuade us to go there,in my opinion.'meter,away' were pronounced wrong.also,you should avoid unnecessary pauses and be more fluent.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation wasn't effective enough. you could make it better. but I liked your video. your pictures were good.
ReplyDeleteYour speech doesnt sound natural. I mean it feels as if you were reading it. Please pay attention to it next time
ReplyDeletethere were some pronounciation like km and meter.it would be better if u had spoken in accordance wth intnation.but the photos are nice and the place is very attractive. thank you
ReplyDeleteI think like most friends, you did not pay attention to the kilometer and meter. Your intonation is good but, pronunciation can be better.thank you.
ReplyDelete''mount,around,cola and meter'' were mispronounced and he should have use coke instead of cola and Baghdad instead of Bağdat.In addition If he had said paradise ıt doesn't sound like paradise..
ReplyDeleteYou can speak a bit faster in the next time and you can be lively.You are not fluent in this video.Please,pay attention to the pronunciation.Develop yourself!!!
ReplyDeleteyou should use more intonation. meter is mispronounced. it was a bit boring. you can do better.
ReplyDeleteYou pronounce 'Meter' wrongly. I like your pronuncation generally,but you could have talked a bit faster.
ReplyDeletethere are unnecessary pauses. ı think you could have spoken fluently. in respect to pronounciation mistakes, there are a few mispronounced words sch as around, enjoyable and dangerous.
ReplyDeleteyou should pay attention to intonation and pronouncation.
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