his intonation must be studied. there are some wrongly pronounced words such as; nature, alcohol, rehabilitation, delicious, water, natural, mhytological, hospitable. but the speech was persuasive and it persuaded me to go there again.
your intonation was good.you especially pronounced natural weekend beauty wrongly and you have some grammer mistakes your speech was a summary of harbiye and its people it was very enjoyable.
Your intonations are really effective in general. You really persuaded me to visit there but you have some pronunciation mistakes such as alcohol, delicious, rehabilitation,and arabic. This video was so enjoyable with your intonations.
your intonation is really good and the pictures are attracting. but you pronounced some words such as alchol and natural and hospital wrongly, these are words ı hear. you could persuade me and also others to go there easily.
The speech and intonation are very good; that's, the pauses, emphasizes and low voices are very fascinating. The fluency is another positive view of the video.Also, you used the transition signals ver well. Yet, there are some pronunciation mistakes such as alcohol, incredable, mhytological.
I enjoyed while ı was watching it because it is very theatric which makes the video different. He started the video by asking question (that's very good), his intonation is good and he has soe problem with its pronounciation. '' delicious, nature,water,hospitable,derived,beautiful'' And i liked his examples by explainin the intonation there.love it,congratulations!
your entry is so finee i like it and smiled =) but you spoke a bit fast, your speech is convincing enough to make people wonder there and examples are funnyy. but i heard some mistakes in pronounciation such as, tone,arabic,nature
you started your speech fastly but then you went on according intonations rules.your speech is clear and fluent. some words are mispronounced. generally it is well prepared.
His speech and intonation are great.Giving speech examples from daily life made the video interesting.'said,mhytological'were said wrong but generally i liked it.
while you are talking about Harbiye, you are cold to me. the photographs are clear but there are a few pronuncaition mistakes such as delicious, mhytological, alcohol and originally.
your intonation is good. Also, it made your project enjoyable to start with asking questions. You pronuenced 'Arabic' wrongly. Anyway it was persuasive.
you described harbiye very well. and ı also have been to harbiye many times before.you described there succesfully.your intonation was also very good.however,you mispronounced some words wrong such as alcohol and natural.ı liked it
you described both harbiye and its people. ıt as a good point. you have some mistakes such as nature,arabic,delicious. your photos are good and you try to act the speech that the people there have. well done
you give a variety of information about the place and these persuade me to visit the place.. your photos are well-chosen..and there are some slight mistakes in your pronunciation..
I liked it because it is interesting and attractive. you start with questions you use your intonation well.but you have some pronunciation mistakes such as 'delicious,beauty,arabic,water'
you pronounce some words wrongly like "rehabilition" but listening to you is very funny because you add the intonation of Harbiye people it is effective your pictures are really marvelous and I want to go to harbye more now.
You should add musıc to your video. You should speak in a vivid, lively way. With a monotonus speech having no rising or declining tones, you cant draw attention to your listeners.
I really liked your video as I am familiar with the situations you mentioned. I liked your examples a lot on the language of arabs:) your video resembles to a theater play, but there are some pronunciation mistakes, but especially I remember 'natural'. your intonation is good and I liked your video
there are several mistakes in your speech such as alcohol,rehabilitation,delicious,tastes but your intonation is good.There are redundant halts in some sentences.It is generally well prepared.
this is a well prepared presentation, photos are good, intonation is also good but there are some pronounciaton mistakes such as "delicious and hospitable"
Your search is enouhg to make this presentation good. There is some words that you pronunced wrong except for this your speech is very good. Thank you.
you say '' I used to go there when i was in hatay, it is a rehabilitation centre for me etc.. ''. I think as this kind of expressions are subjective, they are not appropriate for the project.. to get our attention you should use intonation and speak lively.. you described the place really well and photos are charming.. I wished to be there after watching your video..
I liked the information, the questions and Turkish sentences make the speech different but next time I think pay attention your voice and recorder because it is irritating. water, hospitable, derived, delicious and rehabilitation are mispronounced.
you aren't speaking in the same tone this is so good.It was really enjoyable :) maybe you can add music then it would be more enjoyable but there are intonation mistakes such as 'hospitable, Arabic and expert.
Pronouncation of some words such as 'arabic' and 'delicious' are wrong. His intonation is good and photos are attactive. The tone of his voice is nice.
Some questions and some sentences chosen from daily life make the presentation funny but there are some pronounciation mistakes such as arabic, hospitable, expert, mythological, nature. I want to go there.
I can say that this video was the only one which I really enjoyed while watching .His intonation was very very good.The only problem was his pronounciation mistake like modern.
the speech and the intonations are good.the speaker knows how to make people fascinated.there are some pronouncation mistakes like:arabic, hospitable, expert, mythologicaletc.but overall,that is a good video.
it was striking taht u started with question...but ur question sentences dont look like question. you speak fast and dont breathe.in some parts u have used intonation in a wrong way...
at the start you are asking questions it is good but you must wait a little after each question. delicious,expert and hospitable are the words pronounced wrongly.
friend,you hevent used the intonations so effectively.the photos are ver nice.your speech is good but u heve made some pronounciations mistakes.it attracted me very much.thank u
There is a problem with the recorder and I couldn't understand some of the words because of it.Also,he could have spoken a bit slowly and the word'Arabic'is misspelled.However,I liked the video in general,the nice pictures really persuades the person to go there.
I think you used intonation truely.although there are some mistakes of pronuncations such as 'mhytological,arabic and nature',in general it is good job.
I liked your video a lot :) you persuaded me to visit there. your intonation is very good but next time please use a different voice recorder GOOD WORK congratulations;)
his intonation must be studied. there are some wrongly pronounced words such as; nature, alcohol, rehabilitation, delicious, water, natural, mhytological, hospitable. but the speech was persuasive and it persuaded me to go there again.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation was good.you especially pronounced natural weekend beauty wrongly and you have some grammer mistakes your speech was a summary of harbiye and its people it was very enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteYour intonations are really effective in general. You really persuaded me to visit there but you have some pronunciation mistakes such as alcohol, delicious, rehabilitation,and arabic. This video was so enjoyable with your intonations.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really good and the pictures are attracting. but you pronounced some words such as alchol and natural and hospital wrongly, these are words ı hear. you could persuade me and also others to go there easily.
ReplyDeleteThe speech and intonation are very good; that's, the pauses, emphasizes and low voices are very fascinating. The fluency is another positive view of the video.Also, you used the transition signals ver well. Yet, there are some pronunciation mistakes such as alcohol, incredable, mhytological.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed while ı was watching it because it is very theatric which makes the video different. He started the video by asking question (that's very good), his intonation is good and he has soe problem with its pronounciation. '' delicious, nature,water,hospitable,derived,beautiful'' And i liked his examples by explainin the intonation there.love it,congratulations!
ReplyDeleteyour entry is so finee i like it and smiled =) but you spoke a bit fast, your speech is convincing enough to make people wonder there and examples are funnyy. but i heard some mistakes in pronounciation such as, tone,arabic,nature
ReplyDeleteyou started your speech fastly but then you went on according intonations rules.your speech is clear and fluent. some words are mispronounced. generally it is well prepared.
ReplyDeleteoverall, you need to pay attention to your pronunciation but u could really persuade me to go and drink something there. :) good job!
ReplyDeleteThe speech is very clear and intonation is very good but pronunciation should be improved
ReplyDeleteHis speech and intonation are great.Giving speech examples from daily life made the video interesting.'said,mhytological'were said wrong but generally i liked it.
ReplyDeleteıt was really persuasive,it made me wanna see there.Although some mistakes in pronunciation like hospitable and arabic,the video was fascinating.
ReplyDeletewhile you are talking about Harbiye, you are cold to me. the photographs are clear but there are a few pronuncaition mistakes such as delicious, mhytological, alcohol and originally.
ReplyDeleteHis intonation is very effective. there are some words which are pronounced wrongly. For example 'alcohol and delicious'.
ReplyDeleteMaybe he can give importance to his pronunciation a bit but overall it was good.video wasn’t boring thanks to his intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good. Also, it made your project enjoyable to start with asking questions. You pronuenced 'Arabic' wrongly. Anyway it was persuasive.
ReplyDeleteyou described harbiye very well. and ı also have been to harbiye many times before.you described there succesfully.your intonation was also very good.however,you mispronounced some words wrong such as alcohol and natural.ı liked it
ReplyDeletehe makes the entrance with a question so it is very nice and his intonation is also good but he makes some mistakes in pronounciation.
ReplyDeleteyou described both harbiye and its people. ıt as a good point. you have some mistakes such as nature,arabic,delicious. your photos are good and you try to act the speech that the people there have. well done
ReplyDeleteyou give a variety of information about the place and these persuade me to visit the place..
ReplyDeleteyour photos are well-chosen..and there are some slight mistakes in your pronunciation..
I liked it because it is interesting and attractive. you start with questions you use your intonation well.but you have some pronunciation mistakes such as 'delicious,beauty,arabic,water'
ReplyDeletethank you friends, but didn't you hear the word bury I pronounced it as /bɜːri/ but it should be pronounced as /beri/
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you pronounce some words wrongly like "rehabilition" but listening to you is very funny because you add the intonation of Harbiye people it is effective your pictures are really marvelous and I want to go to harbye more now.
ReplyDeleteYou should add musıc to your video. You should speak in a vivid, lively way. With a monotonus speech having no rising or declining tones, you cant draw attention to your listeners.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your video as I am familiar with the situations you mentioned. I liked your examples a lot on the language of arabs:) your video resembles to a theater play, but there are some pronunciation mistakes, but especially I remember 'natural'. your intonation is good and I liked your video
ReplyDeletethere are several mistakes in your speech such as alcohol,rehabilitation,delicious,tastes but your intonation is good.There are redundant halts in some sentences.It is generally well prepared.
ReplyDeletethis is a well prepared presentation, photos are good, intonation is also good but there are some pronounciaton mistakes such as "delicious and hospitable"
ReplyDeleteYour search is enouhg to make this presentation good. There is some words that you pronunced wrong except for this your speech is very good. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteplace is described well but intonation could be better and there are also some mispronounced words: arabic, delicious
ReplyDeleteI find the video very effective and funny.Besides this, your intonation is very good. Maybe it can be much better not to use turkish sentence.
ReplyDeleteyou say '' I used to go there when i was in hatay, it is a rehabilitation centre for me etc.. ''. I think as this kind of expressions are subjective, they are not appropriate for the project.. to get our attention you should use intonation and speak lively.. you described the place really well and photos are charming.. I wished to be there after watching your video..
ReplyDeleteHis video is funny. He begins the speech by asking a question and this is very nice. Also, his intonation is fairly good.I liked very much.
ReplyDeleteit is generally good except for the wrong pronounciation of 'mhytological'
ReplyDeleteI liked the information, the questions and Turkish sentences make the speech different but next time I think pay attention your voice and recorder because it is irritating. water, hospitable, derived, delicious and rehabilitation are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteYou have some pronounciation mistakes such as delicious...A detiled description of place is included.well..
ReplyDeleteyou aren't speaking in the same tone this is so good.It was really enjoyable :) maybe you can add music then it would be more enjoyable but there are intonation mistakes such as 'hospitable, Arabic and expert.
ReplyDeletePronouncation of some words such as 'arabic' and 'delicious' are wrong. His intonation is good and photos are attactive. The tone of his voice is nice.
ReplyDeletehe asked questions before he began to his presentation. this is good. area is wrongly pronounced. it is an interesting presentation.
ReplyDeleteSome questions and some sentences chosen from daily life make the presentation funny but there are some pronounciation mistakes such as arabic, hospitable, expert, mythological, nature. I want to go there.
ReplyDeletegenerally it is a good video and attractive. intonation and photos are good also.
ReplyDeleteI can say that this video was the only one which I really enjoyed while watching .His intonation was very very good.The only problem was his pronounciation mistake like modern.
ReplyDeletethe speech and the intonations are good.the speaker knows how to make people fascinated.there are some pronouncation mistakes like:arabic, hospitable, expert, mythologicaletc.but overall,that is a good video.
ReplyDeleteit was striking taht u started with question...but ur question sentences dont look like question. you speak fast and dont breathe.in some parts u have used intonation in a wrong way...
ReplyDeleteintonation is good, very different from other videos. ı liked it. delicious,mythological, arabic were said wrongly .
ReplyDeleteat the start you are asking questions it is good but you must wait a little after each question. delicious,expert and hospitable are the words pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteThere is no problem with the intonation for me but pay attention to pronounciation. Good work.
ReplyDeletefriend,you hevent used the intonations so effectively.the photos are ver nice.your speech is good but u heve made some pronounciations mistakes.it attracted me very much.thank u
ReplyDeleteThere is a problem with the recorder and I couldn't understand some of the words because of it.Also,he could have spoken a bit slowly and the word'Arabic'is misspelled.However,I liked the video in general,the nice pictures really persuades the person to go there.
ReplyDeleteintonation is very good and generally pronounciation is good except for natural and alchol
ReplyDeleteIt is a good job except for some intonation and pronounciation mistakes like 'water, nature, hospitable...
ReplyDeleteok maybe you are not like TRT1 but you can pay attention your pronounciation. I don want to repeat same mistakes.also you are rude.
ReplyDeleteI think you used intonation truely.although there are some mistakes of pronuncations such as 'mhytological,arabic and nature',in general it is good job.
ReplyDeleteYou start with question and this is a good idea because in this way, you can draw attention.While watching video,I was not bored.good work!
ReplyDeleteI liked your video a lot :) you persuaded me to visit there. your intonation is very good but next time please use a different voice recorder GOOD WORK congratulations;)
ReplyDeletehis intonation is very good. the video is good except for some pronounced mistakes such as nature, alcohol.
ReplyDeletethere are some mistakes on your pronouncation like 'mhytological, nature' the intonation is good in general
ReplyDeleteı like your video and your pronunciation but ı think there is a problem with your recorder.
ReplyDeleteyou could be a bit away from the recorder. intonation is good. 'mhytological'pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeletevideo is good and there is a interesting intonation and pictures are good but there are some pronunciation mistakes.
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