her intonation is very good but there are some wrongly pronounced words like; princess, magnificient complex, considered, architecture. she used photos as a proof while she is speaking. for example while she speaking about enterance she used the photo of enterance. she understood the project very well and prepared a good work.
your presentation could be better. you used some photes while speaking about them and this provides a good proof to your presentation. but there is hardly any intonation in your presentation
she starts her film "hello,my friends" and finishs "thanks for your attention". I think it is wrong because it is not only presentation but also introduction film so it should have been compatible for everbody.besides,she has pronunciation errors such as magnificient,primary.however, as she explains pictures one by one,it is effective.
You could speak much more fluently, your speech is disconnected. There are some pronunciation mistakes.Also, you should have spoken by focusing on intonation.
your photos are not enough and you talk very slowly. you pronounce some words wrongly like whole,construction,exhibit. Anyway it is good in general it is an informative speech. thanks
It's well-prepared but not efficent. Altough she made some pronounciation mistakes she used the intonation well.I couldn't understand some words and her voice a little bit low.
she speaks fluently there were some words pronounced wrongly such as magnificient and ı think it was both in terms of intonation and pronounciation ,it was good by the way you dont have to say yes my friends every times
it is a good work. it is a good choice to focus on photos and match the photos with your speech. there are some pronouncition mistakes. you speak slowly,but generally that can be said it is good.
"hi Friends!Today ,I will..." This is not proper, I guess.you just speak as if you get it slowmotion. there is no persuasion. your part of informative speech and the photos are in accord. ı like it.
You really speak slow and it adds a boring atmosphere on your video. You really paid attention to the intonation rules. On the other hand you made some mistakes with some words. And it is thruly acceptable
you shouldn't have said 'hello friends' or' yes friends'.You said that a few times and it does not sound good.Also, there is much pause between sentences or vocabularies but there is not a serious problem with pronounciation.
Speech could be more fluent because people may get bored when watching the video. The speech is consistent and she uses intonation well however there are mistakes in pronunciation like 'hospital'.
Responsible, hospital is spelled wrongly. I think you are so slow like me. Sadly,this makes the listeners bored and so presentation of the video will not get attention of them.
first of all, her speech is so slow. you say the words one by one. secondly, there are some pronunciation mistakes. for example outer,appearance and primary. lastly, you started the speech by saying "hello my friends" however, that video isnt only for us. it was downloaded in google earth. so ı think you shouldnt have started by saying it.
I didn't like that she started her presentation with a sentence "Hello,my friends" and finished "her presentation with a sentence "thanks for attention ".And aoart from this,her voice sound me unwilling.
You did not preapere this video just for us, so you should not use ''hello my friends'' ath the beginning of the video. On the other hand, the speech is vell prepared and you searched extensively.
the begginning ''hi friends'' and the ending''thanks for your attention'' these are not appropriate for this video.and there are some mispronounced words like princess, magnificient complex and considered.
'hello my friends! I will talk about..', 'thanks for attention' and adding your name etc at the end of the video are not suitable for such videos. However, photos are chosen perfectly, they are really very nice.
contruction, costume, primary are mispronuonced. she should stress some parts but I didn't see that. Her voice should be attractive to persuade us to visit there
I agree with my friends, I could have speak fluently,so it could have been better.Apart from some mistakes such as the pronuncation of the word 'magnificient', I liked my speech. And I wish I hadn't used some sentences such as ' Hello my friends..'. Thanks for your comments.
you havent paid attention to intonation rules and you have started by saying 'hi friends...' The words princess, primary, magnificient are mispronounced..ur voice is not so fluent and some words such as ' yes friend' have been repeated..
primary and variety are pronounced wrongly.you started with hi friends.you said 'after you enter the madrasa you will see inside of it'. of course we will see inside of it :)
the usage of hi friend is not suitable for this video l think.you could speak more fluently.you shouldnt have given some unnecessary stops.it was a bit boring but thank you for informing us about the place you have chosen.for the last,you shouldnt have said ...attention at last part
I liked your choice and intonation but adding some frequency in your speech and beginning with other words would be better:)apart from this detail.I liked your prentatation.
ı like that you back up what you say with pictures. nevertheless,it isn't persuasive and you should pay more attention to intonation. you proved us that you can do better...
primary and build are the some words which are mispronounced.Also your voice can be more impressive. you should be more careful about intonation.I like the details you gave about the subject.
I think you shouldn't start your speech 'hello friends. your voice is fluent but very slow and also some words pronounced wrongly. for example magnificient and primary
her intonation is very good but there are some wrongly pronounced words like; princess, magnificient complex, considered, architecture. she used photos as a proof while she is speaking. for example while she speaking about enterance she used the photo of enterance. she understood the project very well and prepared a good work.
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronounce mistakes. For example she says the word 'primary' wrongly.
ReplyDeletewhen she starts her presentation she says hello. I think she shouldn't have start her presentation like this. Her voice is audible
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand some words, but generally her speech is understandable.
ReplyDeleteyour voice was a bit low.you gave some irrelevent information about it it was a bit boring but your speech was in accordence with your photos
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, you speak too slowly. You pronounce 'princess, monument, variety, appearance' wrong.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation could be better. you used some photes while speaking about them and this provides a good proof to your presentation. but there is hardly any intonation in your presentation
ReplyDeleteShe could speak more fluwntly.There are some pronounciation mistakes like magnificient,build,primary.
ReplyDeleteshe starts her film "hello,my friends" and finishs "thanks for your attention". I think it is wrong because it is not only presentation but also introduction film so it should have been compatible for everbody.besides,she has pronunciation errors such as magnificient,primary.however, as she explains pictures one by one,it is effective.
ReplyDeleteYou could speak much more fluently, your speech is disconnected. There are some pronunciation mistakes.Also, you should have spoken by focusing on intonation.
ReplyDeleteshe makes a good presentation she has some pronunciation errors like architecture. however her voice pitch is very good.
ReplyDeleteyour photos are not enough and you talk very slowly. you pronounce some words wrongly like whole,construction,exhibit. Anyway it is good in general it is an informative speech. thanks
ReplyDeletei think the speech is too slow and you stress the words a lot, it sounds tiring. the pronounciation of treat is wrong
ReplyDeleteIt's well-prepared but not efficent. Altough she made some pronounciation mistakes she used the intonation well.I couldn't understand some words and her voice a little bit low.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks fluently there were some words pronounced wrongly such as magnificient and ı think it was both in terms of intonation and pronounciation ,it was good by the way you dont have to say yes my friends every times
ReplyDeleteit is a good work. it is a good choice to focus on photos and match the photos with your speech. there are some pronouncition mistakes. you speak slowly,but generally that can be said it is good.
ReplyDeleteHer speech is a bit slow.There are some pronounciation mistakes such as primary,princess,construction.Bu generally it is good.
ReplyDelete"hi Friends!Today ,I will..." This is not proper, I guess.you just speak as if you get it slowmotion. there is no persuasion. your part of informative speech and the photos are in accord. ı like it.
ReplyDeleteYou really speak slow and it adds a boring atmosphere on your video. You really paid attention to the intonation rules. On the other hand you made some mistakes with some words. And it is thruly acceptable
ReplyDeleteyou shouldn't have said 'hello friends' or' yes friends'.You said that a few times and it does not sound good.Also, there is much pause between sentences or vocabularies but there is not a serious problem with pronounciation.
ReplyDeleteSpeech could be more fluent because people may get bored when watching the video. The speech is consistent and she uses intonation well however there are mistakes in pronunciation like 'hospital'.
ReplyDeleteShe shouldn’t have often used ‘yes friends’ .Pronounciation mistakes are monument,appearance.
ReplyDeleteResponsible, hospital is spelled wrongly. I think you are so slow like me. Sadly,this makes the listeners bored and so presentation of the video will not get attention of them.
ReplyDeletefirst of all, her speech is so slow. you say the words one by one. secondly, there are some pronunciation mistakes. for example outer,appearance and primary. lastly, you started the speech by saying "hello my friends" however, that video isnt only for us. it was downloaded in google earth. so ı think you shouldnt have started by saying it.
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ReplyDeletewhat your video lacks is the liveliness of your voice.. you sound unwilling.. futhermore, you ignore intonation strikingly..
ReplyDeletethe entrance is wrong. 'corridor and monument are some of the words mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is too slow. If only you had talked a little more lively. However, you used your photos in a good way according to your speech.
ReplyDeleteI think it isn't a presentation it is a persuasive speech, so ı think you shouldn't use "hello my friends" and you should be more willing to talk
ReplyDeleteyou speak slowly.. the pronunciatons of some words wrong but the photos are well-chosen.
ReplyDeleteI didn't like that she started her presentation with a sentence "Hello,my friends" and finished "her presentation with a sentence "thanks for attention ".And aoart from this,her voice sound me unwilling.
ReplyDeleteYou did not preapere this video just for us, so you should not use ''hello my friends'' ath the beginning of the video. On the other hand, the speech is vell prepared and you searched extensively.
ReplyDeletethe begginning ''hi friends'' and the ending''thanks for your attention'' these are not appropriate for this video.and there are some mispronounced words like princess, magnificient complex and considered.
ReplyDeleteIllustrating the presentation is a good choice. But you should speak a bit swiftly.I find this video very funny.
ReplyDeleteher speech is a bit slow also there are some proouciation mistakes but her intonation is good
ReplyDelete'hello my friends! I will talk about..', 'thanks for attention' and adding your name etc at the end of the video are not suitable for such videos. However, photos are chosen perfectly, they are really very nice.
ReplyDeleteExcept introduction and some pronunciation mistakes, I liked the video. She prepared well for the presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour voice tone is perfect. A good preparation.Well done...
ReplyDelete'build' and 'primary' are some of the pronounciation mistakes. and it could be more fluently.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is really very slow.. ı was about to sleep...monument, variety, appearance are pronounced wrong...you should be a bit faster
ReplyDeletecontruction, costume, primary are mispronuonced. she should stress some parts but I didn't see that. Her voice should be attractive to persuade us to visit there
ReplyDeleteSpeaking by one by doesn't mean intonation and you paused unnecessarily. Princess, apperance , primary, complex are some of mispronunced words.
ReplyDeleteI agree with my friends, I could have speak fluently,so it could have been better.Apart from some mistakes such as the pronuncation of the word 'magnificient', I liked my speech. And I wish I hadn't used some sentences such as ' Hello my friends..'. Thanks for your comments.
ReplyDeletebecause she speaks a bit slowly, her speech is understandable. so it was easy to follow her. however i found it a little boring.
ReplyDeleteexcept some words there aren't mistakes.she could be more fluent.In all it is good..
ReplyDeleteyou spoke very slowly but voice is good and clear its understandable.it was a good video. you say 'costume' like in turkish.
ReplyDeleteyou havent paid attention to intonation rules and you have started by saying 'hi friends...' The words princess, primary, magnificient are mispronounced..ur voice is not so fluent and some words such as ' yes friend' have been repeated..
ReplyDeleteprimary and variety are pronounced wrongly.you started with hi friends.you said 'after you enter the madrasa you will see inside of it'. of course we will see inside of it :)
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion there are some unnecessary pauses and wrong pronounciations such as 'magnificient and complete.'She could have spoken more fluently.
ReplyDeletethe usage of hi friend is not suitable for this video l think.you could speak more fluently.you shouldnt have given some unnecessary stops.it was a bit boring but thank you for informing us about the place you have chosen.for the last,you shouldnt have said ...attention at last part
ReplyDeleteYou should have been more careful about intonation and there is not a serious problem about the words' pronounciations.
ReplyDeleteI liked your choice and intonation but adding some frequency in your speech and beginning with other words would be better:)apart from this detail.I liked your prentatation.
ReplyDeletethe speech is very slow and the ıntonation is not good because of this.complete is pronounciated wrongly
ReplyDeleteı like that you back up what you say with pictures. nevertheless,it isn't persuasive and you should pay more attention to intonation. you proved us that you can do better...
ReplyDeleteprimary and build are the some words which are mispronounced.Also your voice can be more impressive. you should be more careful about intonation.I like the details you gave about the subject.
ReplyDeleteshe spoke slowly so I got bored while watching. There were some mispronounced words such as magnificient
ReplyDeleteYour voice is too slow.You are telling the words one by one.You are speaking in a monotonous way.You might be better.Develop yourself!!!
ReplyDeleteI think you shouldn't start your speech 'hello friends. your voice is fluent but very slow and also some words pronounced wrongly. for example magnificient and primary
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is very good I also liked your video cong.;)
ReplyDelete'primary' is wrong pronouncation her speech is good and understandable but, your voice is low I lıke it:)
ReplyDeletethe video is understndable and pictures are harmony with the video.there are some pronunciation mistakes like coridor.it is god.
ReplyDeletegood but she is tooo slow she say yes friends as a presentation. This not a presentation.
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