your intonation is well in general. however, the words; situated, portal, patriach are pronounced wrongly. ı couldnt understand some wrods. it didnt persuade me to go there.
your speech is good in general, a theme music would certainly make it more esthetic.But there are some mistakes, you say /buildiŋ/ it is /bɪldɪŋ/, you say /purpose/ it is /pɜːpəs/ (0:57), you again say /dʒeəlri/ it is /dʒu:əlri/
your vşideo was a bit long and you have some pronouncation mistakes while,victory,old,necklece but your photos was fascinating ang ı could understand what you meant in the video
your intonation is very good, but if you added music it could be more charming.you pronounced the word situated wrongly.however the end is better than the begining when you increase your voice pitch,in my opinion.
You were very successful in terms of explanation.Except some pronunciation mistakes, I think your project is good because you intonate the words when it is neccessary. The pronuncitaion mistakes are " victory, monumant, building, internal, external,besides."
The video is very good.It is a good sample of informative.Intonation is used well,as well.Although I couldn't understand some words,'while,hair' are pronounced wrong.
you give some information so it is a sample of information speech. your photos are good on the on the other hand they pass slowly. you say some words wrongly like first,purpose,exactly,exhibited. but your intonation is good all in all ı really want to see it
the photos you have chosen are very good. intonation is good and that enhanced ur speech. there is few mistakes in pronounciation. but generally it is well prepared.
ı know u can use ur intonation very well, but here its kinda poorer than normal, but it's a good informative speech. ı just liked your photos and ı know wat and where there are. good job!
Intonation is good but there are mistakes in pronunciation of some words like 'organisation' 'purchased' and 'about' however in general the speech is persuasive and effective.
The fluency is good and it is good generally but it could be more effective.The video is prepared well but there are some mistakes in pronounciation like christ, necklace.
you are talking too slow, you say the words one by one. and there are a lot of pronunciation mistakes. for example, jewellry, monument, building, library, ottoman, vistorious... but in fact, if you had spoken more fluently, your video would have been so successful because you used clear photographs and your speech is very informative.
His intonation is good but there are some words whose pronunciations are wrong. For example; purpose and victory. In general it is a good presentation.
Your intonation and voice are really satisfactory. The visualization of the video is also clear and good. However you pronuenced some words wrongly such as building and hair etc.
your intonation and pronounciation are good in general however,there were soe mispronounced words such as exhibition ,exhibited. by the way,the pictures are well -chosen
your speech is clear but slower that it should be..the pronunciations of monument, building, library, ottoman, vistorious are wrong...your potos ae well-chosen..
your video is good but photos can be kept shorter.because it can't draw listeners' attention.you have some pronunciation such as exhibition..however your intonation is good.
your voice pitch is good and you use intonation in your sentences but there are some wrong-pronounced words like building but you can affect your listeners I think it is good
generally, the video looks better than average,actually. you intonate the sentences, which is rather good. you should be a bit more fluent in your speech, the words come out of your mouth one by one.. it is evident that your photos are well-chosen..
This could be a very very very... good presentation if you just speak a bit fluently but there are some word that were pronounced wrong as patriach, situated and portal... Actually, your speech is very good. Thank you.
in general the video is good.the speech is fluent,intonations are good.but there are some mispronunced words like: situated, portal, patriach exhibition monument, building, library, ottoman...
there are some words that pronounced wrongly such as 'byzantine,jewellary and situated' but fluency is good.Also,it is a good example of informative speech and your photos are attractive.
Firstly, he shouldn't have written to the beginning of the video 'oral communications skill'.There were some mispronounced words such as patriarch,exhibition,jewelry and in accordance with.Despite the fact that it was a bit long ,the photos in his video were really good and his voice was understandable.
it is a place l always want to visit.. the photos were very nice. you have paid attention to intonation rules. l have heard hardly any mispronounced words so, i think it was good.
your presentation is rather successful.in addition to this,intonation adds your speech to attractiveness.apart from few pronunciation faults,I think it is one of the most successful example of informative speech I watched.
it is far from being a persuasive speech.It wasn't fluent.You make too man pauses during your conservation and there are some pronounciation mistakes while saying the words like situated, purposes, community... You could have done better ı think
your intonation is well in general. however, the words; situated, portal, patriach are pronounced wrongly. ı couldnt understand some wrods. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good in general, a theme music would certainly make it more esthetic.But there are some mistakes, you say /buildiŋ/ it is /bɪldɪŋ/, you say /purpose/ it is /pɜːpəs/ (0:57), you again say /dʒeəlri/ it is /dʒu:əlri/
ReplyDeleteyour vşideo was a bit long and you have some pronouncation mistakes while,victory,old,necklece but your photos was fascinating ang ı could understand what you meant in the video
ReplyDeleteThis is an informative video.The end is better than the beginning. You pronounce 'monument, christ and jewellery' wrong.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is very good, but if you added music it could be more charming.you pronounced the word situated wrongly.however the end is better than the begining when you increase your voice pitch,in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is understandable in general although I couldn't understand some words. additionally the word islamic is pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteYou were very successful in terms of explanation.Except some pronunciation mistakes, I think your project is good because you intonate the words when it is neccessary. The pronuncitaion mistakes are " victory, monumant, building, internal, external,besides."
ReplyDeleteThe video is very good.It is a good sample of informative.Intonation is used well,as well.Although I couldn't understand some words,'while,hair' are pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeletesituated,avenue,portal,patriach,community,purposes,thousand.. are mispronounced. But it's a good informative video.But it could be better.
ReplyDeleteyou give some information so it is a sample of information speech. your photos are good on the on the other hand they pass slowly. you say some words wrongly like first,purpose,exactly,exhibited. but your intonation is good all in all ı really want to see it
ReplyDeleteyour speech is understandable apart from some words.there are some mistaken words such as cooperative, victory and purpose.
ReplyDeletethe photos you have chosen are very good. intonation is good and that enhanced ur speech. there is few mistakes in pronounciation. but generally it is well prepared.
ReplyDeleteı know u can use ur intonation very well, but here its kinda poorer than normal, but it's a good informative speech. ı just liked your photos and ı know wat and where there are. good job!
ReplyDeleteIntonation is good but there are mistakes in pronunciation of some words like 'organisation' 'purchased' and 'about' however in general the speech is persuasive and effective.
ReplyDeleteThe fluency is good and it is good generally but it could be more effective.The video is prepared well but there are some mistakes in pronounciation like christ, necklace.
ReplyDeleteGenerally it is understandable but ‘situated,hair,christ’ are pronounced wrong.It is good in terms of informative but it could be persuasive, as well.
ReplyDeleteyou are talking too slow, you say the words one by one. and there are a lot of pronunciation mistakes. for example, jewellry, monument, building, library, ottoman, vistorious... but in fact, if you had spoken more fluently, your video would have been so successful because you used clear photographs and your speech is very informative.
ReplyDeleteHis intonation is good but there are some words whose pronunciations are wrong. For example; purpose and victory. In general it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation and voice are really satisfactory. The visualization of the video is also clear and good. However you pronuenced some words wrongly such as building and hair etc.
ReplyDeletehis words are clear. pictures are attractive but 'situated and hair' are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation are good in general however,there were soe mispronounced words such as exhibition ,exhibited. by the way,the pictures are well -chosen
ReplyDeleteyour speech is clear but slower that it should be..the pronunciations of monument, building, library, ottoman, vistorious are wrong...your potos ae well-chosen..
ReplyDeletethe word building is pronounced wrong it should be /bɪldɪŋ/, the rest is good, but maybe you can try a bit more to persuade me
ReplyDeleteyour video is good but photos can be kept shorter.because it can't draw listeners' attention.you have some pronunciation such as exhibition..however your intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteyour voice pitch is good and you use intonation in your sentences but there are some wrong-pronounced words like building but you can affect your listeners I think it is good
ReplyDeletePurpose, especially, about are said wrongly. In the vidoes having no persuasion and vividness, I think listeners get bored
ReplyDeletegenerally, the video looks better than average,actually. you intonate the sentences, which is rather good. you should be a bit more fluent in your speech, the words come out of your mouth one by one.. it is evident that your photos are well-chosen..
ReplyDeleteThis could be a very very very... good presentation if you just speak a bit fluently but there are some word that were pronounced wrong as patriach, situated and portal... Actually, your speech is very good. Thank you.
ReplyDeletein general the video is good.the speech is fluent,intonations are good.but there are some mispronunced words like: situated, portal, patriach exhibition monument, building, library, ottoman...
ReplyDeletethis is a good video because his speech is clear, his explanations are good and the photos are well chosen
ReplyDeleteyour speech is clear enough to understand but there are mispronounced words but in general it is good.
ReplyDeleteThis video is attractive.Also I like your last sentence.But there are some pronunce mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHis speech is clear. The video is well-prepared. However, he misspelt some words.
ReplyDeletethere are some words that pronounced wrongly such as 'byzantine,jewellary and situated' but fluency is good.Also,it is a good example of informative speech and your photos are attractive.
ReplyDeleteIt is a well-prepared video but there were some pronounciation words like monument, building.
ReplyDeleteWith a word, effective speech,welldone
ReplyDeleteı liked it really very muchhh...you are speaking like bbc presenter:):) I want to visit this museum as soon as possible
ReplyDeletein accordance with, again are wrogly pronounced. his voice is audible and it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteportal, patriach, situated are wrongly pronounced. In general, it is a good informative speech. It persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeletePhotos are very good and I liked his intonation.
ReplyDeleteSome words such as 'victory' and 'purpose' are pronounced wrongly. Video could have been shorter.
it was easy to understand him.intonation is good. it was intersting to listen him. the word building is wrong pronounced
ReplyDeletesome words such as monument,building are mispronounced but the video is very good and with intonation and photos it really attracts people.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, he shouldn't have written to the beginning of the video 'oral communications skill'.There were some mispronounced words such as patriarch,exhibition,jewelry and in accordance with.Despite the fact that it was a bit long ,the photos in his video were really good and his voice was understandable.
ReplyDeletethe photos in the video, intonation in your speech is very good. exhibited:/ig-'zi-b/ and jewellery:/dʒuː.əl.ri/ are pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteit is a place l always want to visit.. the photos were very nice. you have paid attention to intonation rules. l have heard hardly any mispronounced words so, i think it was good.
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced expecially and jewellery wrong.in general it was a good video
ReplyDeleteI think he is speaking too fastly without intonation and the words 'accordance,building and monument'are mispronounced.
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ReplyDeleteThere were some words that mispronounced: situated,portal,community,purposes. You could be more fluent.
ReplyDeleteit was a bit long and u spoke at the same tone.there were nice photos.it was good but there were two mispronouncued word.good work u have done.cong..
ReplyDeleteafter a long time and about might be pronounced better and at first the the intonation is good but to the and it gets worse
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is rather successful.in addition to this,intonation adds your speech to attractiveness.apart from few pronunciation faults,I think it is one of the most successful example of informative speech I watched.
ReplyDeleteit is far from being a persuasive speech.It wasn't fluent.You make too man pauses during your conservation and there are some pronounciation mistakes while saying the words like situated, purposes, community... You could have done better ı think
ReplyDeleteI like the information about the subject.Although it is a informative speech I want to go there.build,purpose,situated are mispronunced.
ReplyDeletehe prounounced some words such as while,patriach, jewellery, exhibited.the speech wasn't fluent.
ReplyDeleteI think the video is good apart from some pronunciation mistakes.You could be better a bit,but your speech is clear.Best regards:)
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good I caught every word you said. I also liked your pictures and video you persuaded me to go there
ReplyDeletegood work:) comgratulations
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ReplyDeleteYour photos and presentation is good but you pronounced building wrongly. Your intonation is also good.
ReplyDeletein general, the intonation is good but there are some pronouncation mistakes like victory I must say that the photos are impressive
ReplyDeleteı would love to go there it persuaded me.pictures are well chosen. Generally it is good....
ReplyDeleteexcept for somepronunciation mistakes it is a good video but more pictures cuold be shown.
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