you are too slow to understand what you are saying. while you were talking, ı heard one word and after a pause ı heard other word. this is not good. and you emphasize some word alot. it irritates me. but your pronunciation is really great. ı found only two mispronounced words. these are estimated and regularly.
Sometimes you use word stresses in a disturbing way and you speak really slowly. I liked the video in general and there are some pronunciation mistakes such as ceiling and christian.
i think you just focus on not to make a mistake in pronounciation but on the other side you should have paid attention to the intonations then your video would be better.
you speak too slowly and at some parts ı got bored and you increase your voice pitch at some parts unnecesarily.but ı liked your charming photos and hormonious music.ı couldn't find any misspelled words.
Her pronounciation is really good but ı think her intonation isn't well. She emphasized the words with a really high voice and unnecessarily. But ı liked it,that's very good.
I think stress to some words very much is unnecessary and this strees bothers to listener.I think it would be better if you spoke frequently and you didn't stop unnecesarily
the high voice and unnecessary stressed words irritates me. I think you should improve you intonations and pronouncations. the music is good. It will be better next time if you pay attention your speech :D
your pronunciation is good, mate but you speak word by word. this might be kinda tiring. and ı think there is a prob with ur recorder. nothin more :) thnx.
You shouldn't talk word by word and emphasize the words by an unnecessary way.you should introduce it a bit vividly.constructed, monument, church, christian and Jesus are said in incorrect way.
what you need is to give up emphasizing the words too much.. emphasize is needed in speeches but not in ever word or sentence you know... you should emphasize sentences and words which are of vital importance to us..
You speak slowly and that makes the video understandable but your speech should be a bit fluent. Apart from this, your presentation is very good. Thank you Esra!
I think she emphasizes the words very much.
ReplyDeleteher voice isn't audible and she speaks very slowly
ReplyDeleteShe speaks very slowly,says the words one by one,so it is distracting.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks very slowly,sometimes it can bother person.she pronounced 'apart from' word wrongly.but it is generally good.
ReplyDeleteshe stresses some words a lot, but her pronunciation is good, but the word 'catholic' pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks slowly and emphasizes the words very much and these makes her presentation irritating her pictures are good
ReplyDeleteshe speaks like a robot. she isnt fluent. intonation was bad. estimated pronounced wrongly. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteSome parts in the video are inaudibleand I wish she would speak a bit faster.
ReplyDeleteyou are too slow to understand what you are saying. while you were talking, ı heard one word and after a pause ı heard other word. this is not good. and you emphasize some word alot. it irritates me. but your pronunciation is really great. ı found only two mispronounced words. these are estimated and regularly.
ReplyDeletesaying the sentences by one by is not good.Please pay attetion your intonation.Also,christian is mispronounced.
ReplyDeletethe video presentation is well prepared but in some parts there are unneeded intonation and mispronunciation
ReplyDeleteSometimes you use word stresses in a disturbing way and you speak really slowly. I liked the video in general and there are some pronunciation mistakes such as ceiling and christian.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation was effective and your speech was clear and your speech was in harmony with your photos it was a goo presantation
ReplyDeletei dont this your speech is fluent, it is too slow and trying to say the word correct hindered your fluency. i didnt hear a wrong pronounced word.
ReplyDeletei think you just focus on not to make a mistake in pronounciation but on the other side you should have paid attention to the intonations then your video would be better.
ReplyDeleteYour speech could be fluent. Also, your intonation isn't correct and the pauses are unneccesary. High voice doesn't mean intonation.
ReplyDeleteWhile she pronounced the words,she emphasized them more than they must be .she said them one one by but her photos were good.
ReplyDeleteyou speak too slowly and at some parts ı got bored and you increase your voice pitch at some parts unnecesarily.but ı liked your charming photos and hormonious music.ı couldn't find any misspelled words.
ReplyDeleteThe music choice is good,but there is a problem in the record,I think.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks slowly and some parts aren't heard but with pictures and music it is good.
ReplyDeleteyou speak rather slow and put stress on some words in unnecessary points.we may get bored easily after a while.
ReplyDeleteHer pronounciation is really good but ı think her intonation isn't well. She emphasized the words with a really high voice and unnecessarily. But ı liked it,that's very good.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too high and there are unecessary pauses. You speak very slowly. The photographs are good. You paid attention to your pronunciaton.
ReplyDeleteShe talks slowly, hesitating so much, stressing on a word unnecessarily. Her intonaion is not good.
ReplyDeletestressing words one by one and unnecessarily is irritating. on the other hand photos and their organizations are marvellous.
ReplyDeleteYou stressed some words a lot and there are unnecessary pauses. But I like photos and pronunciation is good.
ReplyDeletedo not wait so long between two words
ReplyDeletethere are unnecessary stops at the video and you stress the words too much but your photos are wonderful
ReplyDeleteI think stress to some words very much is unnecessary and this strees bothers to listener.I think it would be better if you spoke frequently and you didn't stop unnecesarily
ReplyDeletethe high voice and unnecessary stressed words irritates me. I think you should improve you intonations and pronouncations. the music is good. It will be better next time if you pay attention your speech :D
ReplyDeleteIf only you didn't use high voice.There are some unecessary pauses. But in general I like this video and music.
ReplyDeletemy dear friend, ı think you spoke slowly like me:( you stress the sentences so much during your speech. ı hope you will speak faster next time;)
ReplyDeleteyou speak in a way irritating the listener...not fluent I mean.... there are mispronounced words
ReplyDeletewhen ı listened your vide I scared ...you are exagreate the pronouncation of words..
ReplyDeleteYou are speaking so slowly and voice pitch is so high.maybe you can use more suitable a music.And also,you are emphasizing some words unnecessarily.
ReplyDeleteYour pronounciation is good in general but you sometimes exaggrate, I think. You mustn't speak slowly if you want to be listened.
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is good, mate but you speak word by word. this might be kinda tiring. and ı think there is a prob with ur recorder. nothin more :) thnx.
ReplyDeleteYou shouldn't talk word by word and emphasize the words by an unnecessary way.you should introduce it a bit vividly.constructed, monument, church, christian and Jesus are said in incorrect way.
ReplyDeleteyou have used unnecessary intonation, and this bothered me a little while listening..almost all of the words are stressed
ReplyDeleteI agree with Çiğdem completely.Best regards,Esra:)
ReplyDeletewhat you need is to give up emphasizing the words too much.. emphasize is needed in speeches but not in ever word or sentence you know... you should emphasize sentences and words which are of vital importance to us..
ReplyDeletewhy do you stress words a lot ıt is very irritating and you speak too slowly the photos are good in general it is good thanks
ReplyDeleteher pronounciation is ok. she stresses some words too much but words are clear, the pictures are intresting.
ReplyDeleteeventhough the speech is slow, it is fluent and understable, intonation is good also
ReplyDeleteI do not understand why you speak by word by. I think you should be carefull about intonation
ReplyDeletethere are unnecessary pauses but Iliked the whole well done;)
ReplyDeleteshe spoke word by word. This made her video boring. the word "christian" was mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteshe speak too slow and emphasizing words intonation too much.
ReplyDeletefluency and intonation must be studied.stressng was used unnecessary.in general it ok.
ReplyDeleteif you spoke faster, would be better . generally its ok voice is clear ı couldnt find any pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyou had better speak a bit faster.
ReplyDeleteI like your speech butI think you should speak a bit faster and you should pay attention to intonation
ReplyDeleteI think the intonation is bad , you sould careful about your intonation and I thınk the music isn't suitable
ReplyDeleteYou speak slowly and that makes the video understandable but your speech should be a bit fluent. Apart from this, your presentation is very good. Thank you Esra!
ReplyDeleteın general it is good job,but you should be more careful in intonation,so it will be better.
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