it is a very interesting music and joyful. your voice is hard to hear. ı could not understand very well some parts and your intonation must be improved. you used charming photos.it is a persuasive speech,and ı want to go there.
I found it difficult to understand your voice but it is not your fault but recorder's. You can use intonations in a better way. You have some pronunciation mistakes such as 'basilica, together,and carve' But this video still made me want to visit there one day.
I watched her video 3 times ( ı can't believe it!) her voice is so slow that it's nearly impossible to hear what she was saying. Monastery,basilica,necropolis and sculpture are mispronounced and the intonation is really poor.
it was really good. u speak fluently in fact, but u need to turn your voice up honey. btw, the word "sculpture" sounded wrong to me.. apart from these, it was ok.
if your voice hadnt been too low, your presentation would have been better. in addition, you mispronounced the words of building and mountain. apart from them, your presentation is good. you talk fluently.
Because of low volume of your voice, it is hard to listen carefuly. as ı could listen to it, it was ok, no pronunciation mistake and you could persuade me to go there.i liked ur intonation much.. pay attention to ur voice's volume honey :)
The music was really enjoyable but your voice was too low. I could not catch many parts. The photos are good. If you spoke loudly, your video could be more attractive as your intonation was really good.
ohh my god! ı couldnt hear anything. your voice is very very very low. ı only could hear the word construction and you said wrongly :)) however your musıc ıs perfect ı liked it and so are the photos.
as most of my friends said,the level of your voice is rather low. ı couldnt catch some points but your video was good in general.by the way the music you used in your video is really enjoyable.
your photos are attractive.but your voice is low so I couldn't understand in spite of my listening a few times.I liked your music.it was nice to write site that you took photos.
your voice is too low, you can raise your voice by the movie maker. right click your mouse on your voice's part and click the volume than you can raise it by hand.
it is hard to hear you but I think it is due to recorder she has pronunciation mistakes too. however she uses intonation efefctively. I liked her pictures they are really good and music- at the beginning and at the end- is good.
the music was great in the beginning, it would do better if you did not turn it off when you start your speech.. I think you made the speech in the distance that is why it is so low.. Monastery and sculpture are the words pronounced incorrectly. your intonation is not so poor but you can improve it..
because of low voice, I couldn't understand some parts. the music and your intonations are effective but you mispronounced necropolis, monastery, basilica and valley. ı liked it :D
The voice was low so I couldn't listened it completely but the intonation is good generally. However the pronounciations of sculpure and kilometer are wrong.
she wrote at the beginning of her presentation monestary but I think she sholud write monastery. her voice isn't audible. the photos and the music of her presentation is very good.
I generally liked it but I think you have a problem with your sound recorder your voice is too low to understand.Music is perfect choice. kilometer was wrongly pronounced.
I am sorry to say that her voice was too low to understand for me .So,I couldn't hear some part altough I was focused on the video.However ,I liked the photos in the video.
the music and other insturments are good.but the voice is low,hard to understand.but as i can hear there is no remarkable mistakes.it's not a bad video.
it could better if there wasnt problem with your sound.but it is good after all.the photos have been well chosen.and the intonations you ve used could be better
it would be better if your voice wasnt very low. but it was a nice music and photos so yr video was good. intonation was also good.you speak fluently . construction and value were pronounced wrongly.
I am sorry but ı couldnt understand it clearly.maybe it is a bit higher,I can make some comments but now I dont want to write wrong things about your presentation:(
the music is very nice. the video is interesting and intonation is good except for it was hard to understand you because of your voice as it is too low
Kübra, background music is very good, I like it. There is just a problem with your recorder. Your intonation, sentences and searching is good. Thank you.
your intonation was good but your voice was too low so ı could't understand your speech clearly alhough ı listened 2 times
ReplyDeleteit is a very interesting music and joyful. your voice is hard to hear. ı could not understand very well some parts and your intonation must be improved. you used charming photos.it is a persuasive speech,and ı want to go there.
ReplyDeletethe music is very nice. your intonation is well in general but the level of voice low. you speaks fluently. it persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteI found it difficult to understand your voice but it is not your fault but recorder's. You can use intonations in a better way. You have some pronunciation mistakes such as 'basilica, together,and carve' But this video still made me want to visit there one day.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is too low for me to catch in your speech. Therefore, I can't comment on your pronunciation and intonation.
ReplyDeleteI watched her video 3 times ( ı can't believe it!) her voice is so slow that it's nearly impossible to hear what she was saying. Monastery,basilica,necropolis and sculpture are mispronounced and the intonation is really poor.
ReplyDelete:( my voice is too low.I will pay attention to the second video much more :(
ReplyDeletei loved the music you should use it as theme music behind the speech kübra. you have some mistakes: valley,basilica,argue but it was a good video :))
ReplyDeleteWe're critizing not to upset you but show your minuses and i think it'll help you to improve. Don't be sorry:)have a good night:)
ReplyDeletethe video is good. the photos and the music are not bad. but your voice is low and because of that it cannot be understood easily.
ReplyDeleteI am so sorry but I cannot hear the voice clearly so I have no idea about pronunciation but the intonation sounds good
ReplyDeleteit was really good. u speak fluently in fact, but u need to turn your voice up honey. btw, the word "sculpture" sounded wrong to me.. apart from these, it was ok.
ReplyDeleteIn fact ı liked it.however,ı couldn't hear some parts.there were some mistakes in pronunciation such as kilometer,basilica,sculpture.The rest is well.
ReplyDeleteif your voice hadnt been too low, your presentation would have been better. in addition, you mispronounced the words of building and mountain. apart from them, your presentation is good. you talk fluently.
ReplyDeleteThe music is very enjoyable but yuor voice is too low. It is very hard to hear you.
ReplyDeleteBecause of low volume of your voice, it is hard to listen carefuly. as ı could listen to it, it was ok, no pronunciation mistake and you could persuade me to go there.i liked ur intonation much.. pay attention to ur voice's volume honey :)
ReplyDeleteKübük :) the music was good. a few words were pronounced wrongly. your voice could be a little higher but it is good. good job Kübük :Ç
ReplyDeleteThe music was really enjoyable but your voice was too low. I could not catch many parts. The photos are good. If you spoke loudly, your video could be more attractive as your intonation was really good.
ReplyDeleteyour video is good in general, but I want to say sth. about your voice as you can guess:) your voice is too low. but your speech is good.
ReplyDeleteThough I liked your video in general,your voice was very low so I couldn’t catch some parts.Maybe you can improve your intonation.
ReplyDeleteohh my god! ı couldnt hear anything. your voice is very very very low. ı only could hear the word construction and you said wrongly :)) however your musıc ıs perfect ı liked it and so are the photos.
ReplyDeleteas most of my friends said,the level of your voice is rather low. ı couldnt catch some points but your video was good in general.by the way the music you used in your video is really enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteit is difficult to understand the words clearly.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too low to understaend..the music and photos are suitable and additionally you mispronounce some words such as sculpture, valley..
ReplyDeleteyour photos are attractive.but your voice is low so I couldn't understand in spite of my listening a few times.I liked your music.it was nice to write site that you took photos.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too low, you can raise your voice by the movie maker. right click your mouse on your voice's part and click the volume than you can raise it by hand.
ReplyDeleteand as I could hear intonation is good
ReplyDeleteit is hard to hear you but I think it is due to recorder she has pronunciation mistakes too. however she uses intonation efefctively. I liked her pictures they are really good and music- at the beginning and at the end- is good.
ReplyDeleteApart from your low voice, It is a good video. Your pronunciation, intonation is fine. The music is entertaining:)A good example of informative video
ReplyDeleteyour voice is low but intonation is good also photos and music are wonderful
ReplyDeletewhat is the name of the music? I really like it. I wish music had gone on during your video.
ReplyDeleteThe music is nice. However, I couldn't understand anything from the speech because of her speaking with a very low voice. It could have been better.
ReplyDeletethe music was great in the beginning, it would do better if you did not turn it off when you start your speech.. I think you made the speech in the distance that is why it is so low.. Monastery and sculpture are the words pronounced incorrectly. your intonation is not so poor but you can improve it..
ReplyDeletebecause of low voice, I couldn't understand some parts. the music and your intonations are effective but you mispronounced necropolis, monastery, basilica and valley. ı liked it :D
ReplyDeleteThe voice was low so I couldn't listened it completely but the intonation is good generally. However the pronounciations of sculpure and kilometer are wrong.
ReplyDeleteı listened it three times to understand..your voice is very low..monastery and sculpture are pronounced wrong..
ReplyDeleteThe tone of her voice is very slow,there isn't stress on her speech, sentences. Music is perfect.
ReplyDeleteshe wrote at the beginning of her presentation monestary but I think she sholud write monastery. her voice isn't audible. the photos and the music of her presentation is very good.
ReplyDeleteI generally liked it but I think you have a problem with your sound recorder your voice is too low to understand.Music is perfect choice. kilometer was wrongly pronounced.
ReplyDeleteI think music is great but her voice is very low..
ReplyDeleteI am sorry to say that her voice was too low to understand for me .So,I couldn't hear some part altough I was focused on the video.However ,I liked the photos in the video.
ReplyDeletethe music and other insturments are good.but the voice is low,hard to understand.but as i can hear there is no remarkable mistakes.it's not a bad video.
ReplyDeleteit could better if there wasnt problem with your sound.but it is good after all.the photos have been well chosen.and the intonations you ve used could be better
ReplyDeleteit would be better if your voice wasnt very low. but it was a nice music and photos so yr video was good. intonation was also good.you speak fluently . construction and value were pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteIt is almost impossible to find mispronounced words because your voice is too low! You spoke fluently but would be better if you did it louder.
ReplyDeletebasilica and monastery were pronounced wrongly. and your voice was too low. your speak is fluent . it was a good video
ReplyDeleteHer voice is too low to catch what she is saying therefore sometimes the listener may get bored.
ReplyDeletethe voice is low:( as ı can hear intonation is good
ReplyDeleteup your voice and it will be better=) It was good to be honest.Cong.
ReplyDeleteI am sorry but ı couldnt understand it clearly.maybe it is a bit higher,I can make some comments but now I dont want to write wrong things about your presentation:(
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really good. You can speak a bit loud but I admit that you persaude me to go there.THANKS
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too low but your video is great
ReplyDeleteIt didn't understand your speech.Your voice is too low.:):)
ReplyDeletethe music is very nice. the video is interesting and intonation is good except for it was hard to understand you because of your voice as it is too low
ReplyDeletethe music is very entertaining:) but your voice is low in general it is good I like it very much:)
ReplyDeleteKübra, background music is very good, I like it. There is just a problem with your recorder. Your intonation, sentences and searching is good. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteas everyone said voice is low except for it it is a good video I liked it but musıc could continue to play.
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