In my opinion, his pronunciation is already good, but the music is a bit higher than his voice, so while listenning I sometimes had difficulty in concantreting on his voice.
it is a good and fluent speach and your intonation is very good. but the music isnt suitable for this video. sometimes ı couldnt concentrate on you video because of music. pronounciation is good. it persuaded me to go there.
your presentation is really good. yet, there is a few pronunciation mistakes. for example, mediterranean, language. except these, there is no problem. maybe you could be careful about your intonation.
First of all, I dont understand people who say the music is higher than his voice because it isnt. The laptops or computers have different voice qualities and it is because of this that you cannot hear some videos really well! Mustafa I could understand all of it and found a pronunciation mistake: egyptian(2:41). You were persuasive and I can say you can give more importance to the intonations.
there arent't many mistakes but in some parts of the video when the music gets louder, i think it effects the audibility of your voice. the pronouncitaion of "Egyptian and clever(3:44)" are wrong ones i heard.
ı really liked your video. your intonation is good but improve a bit.photos and music are well-organized but sometimes ı concerate only to your music..your speech is persuasive.and ı couldn't find any mispelled word.
your pronunciation is really good but u had a poor intonation my firend. it is a good informative one.ı liked the video but, ı couldnt unerstand the point of telling who Cleopara was. maybe you should have mentioned it at the entry part but not at the end. :)
Your voice and pronunciation is really good. I could not catch any word pronuenced wrongly. Your intonation could be well. The photographs are really attractive.
generally, you have prepared a good presentation but in some parts of the video you make minor mistakes in pronunciation and you could choose a better music...
I didn't catch any word except from 'corrupt' and his pronounciation is great. The music is nice but a bit loud. His words are clear but Be fluent Musti :)it is a good video.
In terms of pronunciation it was one of the best ones but your music is too high and the quality of the sound was really low.. it was a good one, actually..
background music is higher than your voice. You should change the volume of the music. Your speech is very good, I nearly understood every word. Thnak you Mustafa!
his vioce is audible. somestimes the music voice is high.
ReplyDeleteI think his pronunciation is very good but there should be a bit intonation.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, his pronunciation is already good, but the music is a bit higher than his voice, so while listenning I sometimes had difficulty in concantreting on his voice.
ReplyDeletehis music is distracting because it is higher than his voice but he has a good pronunciation and he can intonate well.
ReplyDeleteHe has a fluent speech but the music could be a little lower. the ending is too sudden.
ReplyDeletehis pronunciation is rather good.but he speaks slowly. ıt persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeletein my opinion it was a good and fluent speech however,the music he used is a bit high so ı sometimes had difficulty in understanding it.
ReplyDeleteit is a good and fluent speach and your intonation is very good. but the music isnt suitable for this video. sometimes ı couldnt concentrate on you video because of music. pronounciation is good. it persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteİntonation might be a bit better. Pronunciation is almost perfect. Also, the speech is very fluent.
ReplyDeleteThe speech is clear and understandable but he could be more fluent. there are only small mistakes in pronunciation and intonation.
ReplyDeletethe speech is in a harmony with the photos. it is well organized. your pronounciation is good. but intonation could be better.
ReplyDeleteI like the music choice.His pronunciation is generally good but his intonation can be improved.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is really good. yet, there is a few pronunciation mistakes. for example, mediterranean, language. except these, there is no problem. maybe you could be careful about your intonation.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I dont understand people who say the music is higher than his voice because it isnt. The laptops or computers have different voice qualities and it is because of this that you cannot hear some videos really well! Mustafa I could understand all of it and found a pronunciation mistake: egyptian(2:41). You were persuasive and I can say you can give more importance to the intonations.
ReplyDeletethere arent't many mistakes but in some parts of the video when the music gets louder, i think it effects the audibility of your voice. the pronouncitaion of "Egyptian and clever(3:44)" are wrong ones i heard.
ReplyDeleteyour speech was clear but your musıc volume was a bit high
ReplyDeleteı really liked your video. your intonation is good but improve a bit.photos and music are well-organized but sometimes ı concerate only to your music..your speech is persuasive.and ı couldn't find any mispelled word.
ReplyDeleteAmazing, there are nearly no pronounciation mistakes. But ı wish he had spoken more fluently,but it's really good,,,
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is really good but u had a poor intonation my firend. it is a good informative one.ı liked the video but, ı couldnt unerstand the point of telling who Cleopara was. maybe you should have mentioned it at the entry part but not at the end. :)
ReplyDeleteit is a well organized video. his speech is fluent.however,maybe music could be different song.
ReplyDeleteI found his speech a bit slow but his pronounciation was perfect except for mediterranean.I liked his photos in the video.
ReplyDeleteYour voice and pronunciation is really good. I could not catch any word pronuenced wrongly. Your intonation could be well. The photographs are really attractive.
ReplyDeletegenerally, you have prepared a good presentation
ReplyDeletebut in some parts of the video you make minor mistakes in pronunciation and you could choose a better music...
Video is well-organized. I couldn't catch any words pronuenced wrongly. It is a good job.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any mistake and the music choice is very good, cong.
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is good, your photos and music are also good, it is a well organised video
ReplyDeleteSometimes the music beats your voice down, but I liked your video, intonations and pronouncation :D
ReplyDeletemusic and pictures are harmonious and well organized,speech is good.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is good.There is no mistake in your pronunciation. One problem is that the music is a bit loud.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is understandable.Music is interesting.It is an attractive video.
ReplyDeleteıt is well prepared work. your pronounciation is so good and effective.
ReplyDeleteHe speaks fluenly. His pronouncation is really good, there is not any problem with his speech.
ReplyDeleteYour pronounciation is rather well.It is an interesting and attractive video and your fluency is also good but music may not have been so loudly.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video so I couldn't find much more mistakes in your intonation and pronounce.but I liked best the pronuncation of cleopatra.
ReplyDeleteyes Mustafa it is reallt a god job..word by word sentence by sentence it is understandable..But the music makes me sleep:D
ReplyDeletehis pronounciation was very good. However, he spoke slowly at first.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video except unexpected finish and high volumed music. Pronounciation and intonation are good
ReplyDeleteI didn't catch any word except from 'corrupt' and his pronounciation is great. The music is nice but a bit loud. His words are clear but Be fluent Musti :)it is a good video.
ReplyDeleteIn terms of pronunciation it was one of the best ones but your music is too high and the quality of the sound was really low.. it was a good one, actually..
ReplyDeleteyou have a fluent speech but the volume of the music should have been lower...there was not any problem with ur pronounciation and intonation..
ReplyDeletethere are a few pronunciation mistakes but you have a fluent speech.thanks
ReplyDeleteI like your video and your speech. I cannot hear any mispronounced words.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently ı liked your video, intonation and pronounciation except from the music :)) everything is perfect congrulationss
ReplyDeletethe speech is fluent and you pronounced well but the music is not proper for this speech
ReplyDeleteI think,the words 'equally and deliver' are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteI think you could choose more suitable music for this video.And there are some unnecessary duration but I admit that your intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very good ı could not find any mistake well done this is a god work;)
ReplyDeletethe music is not suitable with that place.but pictures which show the gate before restoration were good and hard to find
ReplyDeleteit was informative but not persuasive and did not attract so much.fluency and intonation was ok
ReplyDeleteyour speech and pronounciations are good but the music is a bit low
ReplyDeleteı liked yr pronounciation. almost no mistakes good work
ReplyDeleteI think the music is higher than his voice so I couldn't understand you sometimes
ReplyDeletebackground music is higher than your voice. You should change the volume of the music. Your speech is very good, I nearly understood every word. Thnak you Mustafa!
ReplyDeletewell done job,the intonation and voice are nice.cong.Mustafa
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