when I compare this video of yours with the former one, this one is really superior. your pronunciation is almost perfect but you should be wiiling and lively in your speech to persuade us.
a good place choice. ı liked yr video very much. but you should pay attention to intonation. you say one of the 'turks' wrongly. the rest is ok.bravo :)
I can say that this one was much better than his first video.He speak fluently and his speech was clear and understandable .finally the music was so suitable with the topic ,I liked it .Thanks Rahman
te music s attrective. you have take attention to the some important points about that war instead of the monument. you have made some pronunciation mistakes. well prepared.
Entrance music is really suitable with the subject. You mispronounce 'England'starting with /e/ sound but it should be /ɪŋglənd/
ReplyDeleteGood job:)there are hardly any mispronounced words.Also,you should be lively while speaking.Thank you!!!
ReplyDeleteemphasize is mispronounced. I could not catch any other mistake. the music is great. it is a good video conratulations.
ReplyDeleteI liked your music and video.I couldn't find wrongly pronunced words.It is a nice video.
ReplyDeleteı couldn't hear any mispronounced word,ı liked your music and intonation.cong. :)
ReplyDeletethe music is well chosen,suitable for the topic, i like your video and the only mistake i heard is "monument"
ReplyDeletewhat first attract me to your video is the music, really good.ı could not catch and mispronounced words but only England.
ReplyDeleteyour both pronunciation and voice pitch is good you have chosen a good music cong.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and hardly make pronunciation mistakes, music is suitable for the video.well-done
ReplyDeletewhen I compare this video of yours with the former one, this one is really superior. your pronunciation is almost perfect but you should be wiiling and lively in your speech to persuade us.
ReplyDeleteBackground music is really suitable for the subject you are explaing. Thank you Rahman!
ReplyDeletethere is no irritating mispronunciation. your intonation is okay and ı liked the tone of your voice. good video mate. tnx.
ReplyDeleteyour video is really good and I can't find any mistakes
ReplyDeleteIt is a well prepared work. So better than the other.thank you rahman:)
ReplyDeletea good place choice. ı liked yr video very much. but you should pay attention to intonation. you say one of the 'turks' wrongly. the rest is ok.bravo :)
ReplyDeleteYour pictures and music is in a harmory. I think your video is a very good one:)
ReplyDeleteThis video is more succesful than your first one.moreover your photos and music are impressed me deeply. Congradulations, it is a very good video.
ReplyDeleteThe musics,pics and the place u've choosen are very effective. Good job
ReplyDeletethe subject is expressive and the music is very nice. I didn't catch any word mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteit is a great subject and the music was really effective. i liked it so much. well done.
ReplyDeleteThe music at the beginning of the video is well-chose. Also, I like your photos and your pronunciation is good.
ReplyDeleteI liked your choice of subject and music.and I couldn't catch any mistake to criticize.it is good job.thanks:)
ReplyDeleteI can say that this one was much better than his first video.He speak fluently and his speech was clear and understandable .finally the music was so suitable with the topic ,I liked it .Thanks Rahman
ReplyDeleteI just caught the word '' Turks''(00:40) was mispronounced. The rest is very good. Good job!
ReplyDeleteyour video and music is really in harmony. ı liked your speech and intonation. but you have a few pronunciation mistakes. for example, ottoman, turks.
ReplyDeletemusic is good and suitable with your speech and photos.It is good an effective.
ReplyDeleteit is a good job and music is harmonios with the subject but you should talk in a vivid way.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video and it is better than former one. your music and photos are perfect. congrulations Rahman!
ReplyDeleteyou paid attention to your speech in terms of intonation and pronunciation. the music is also good :D ı liked it
ReplyDeleteI liked his photos and music. it is a very good presentation. his voice was clear.
ReplyDeletewaooow :o it is really well prepared video. your music is very very nice and suitable for such a video.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the music,it is very impressing.Your tone of the voice is also good.I couldn't find any mispronounced words.Thank you rahman:))
ReplyDeletemonument is pronunced wrongly I think,you shoould speak lively,generally good thanks
ReplyDeleteI like your speech.It gives details about subject.I coul not find any mispronounced word.
ReplyDeleteI liked your photos and music. there are a few mispronounced words. however, it is a good video.
ReplyDeletete music s attrective. you have take attention to the some important points about that war instead of the monument. you have made some pronunciation mistakes. well prepared.
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