Dear friend, it is a well-prepared video but there are some mistake and deficiencies. For example, your intonation could be a bit better. There are unneccessary pauses and you should try to speak naturally, not artificially. "mosque" is pronounced wrong. cong. =)
your speech synchoronizes with your video, ı liked your music but you increase your voice unnecessarily in some parts of the video, you have choosen suitable photos.
your voice is a bit disturbing i dont know why,may be bcz of the recorder. but the speech is good, "during and Byzantine" are the pronunciation mistakes i heard
I think the pronunciations of 'Macedonian, Byzantine and mosque' are wrong.maybe you can use your intonation more effectively.however,generally i liked your video.photos are very good.
the word Byzantine is pronounced incorrectly.it should be 'bızən,taın] I think. your voice recorder is probably problematic. your pronunciation and video is better than average.. I was persuaded.
I liked your video generally but there are some pronunciation mistakes. Macedonian must be like {,mæsı'dəʋnjən} and population must be like {,pɒpjə'leıʃən}.
I think this video is much better than the other one because your intonation is good and the music is harmony with video. there are some mispronunciations like mosque. :D
''byzantine'' is not being mispronounced, there are two forms of pronounciation but on the other hand ''population,Macedonian and another'' are being mispronounced. But I liked this video more than the former one. Good job!
your intonation is good , ı think. your speech is understandable. ı likd your video. you gave us advantageous information about Büyükada. however, you mispronounced a word. it is Macedonian. except that, ı couldnt catch any mispronounced word.
your video is better than former one. I liked it but again you have unneccessary pauses. moreoverr, you have pronunciation mistakes such as population,macedonian.
Dear friend, it is a well-prepared video but there are some mistake and deficiencies. For example, your intonation could be a bit better. There are unneccessary pauses and you should try to speak naturally, not artificially. "mosque" is pronounced wrong. cong. =)
ReplyDeleteyour speech synchoronizes with your video, ı liked your music but you increase your voice unnecessarily in some parts of the video, you have choosen suitable photos.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is a bit disturbing i dont know why,may be bcz of the recorder. but the speech is good, "during and Byzantine" are the pronunciation mistakes i heard
ReplyDeleteSoı liked your speeech .your photos and music in harmonious.But, 'byzantine and mosque' are wrongly pronunced.
ReplyDeleteI think the pronunciations of 'Macedonian, Byzantine and mosque' are wrong.maybe you can use your intonation more effectively.however,generally i liked your video.photos are very good.
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is generally good but your voice is abit shaking maybe the reason is voice recorder.you speak fluently.
ReplyDeletethe word Byzantine is pronounced incorrectly.it should be 'bızən,taın] I think. your voice recorder is probably problematic. your pronunciation and video is better than average.. I was persuaded.
ReplyDeleteyour voice pitch is good you have chosen good music and pictures you pronounce the word byzantine wrongly
ReplyDeleteYour speech is a good one but there is a problem with recorder. Anyway, I like it very much. Thank you Esra!
ReplyDeletevery good video. ı agree with Erdem on that your recorder has a problem. ı couldnt hear any mispronunciation but "byzantine". welldone mate . tnx.. :)
ReplyDeleteI think yuo pronounced byzantine wrongly. I could not catch any other pronunciation mistakes. The fluency and photographs are good
ReplyDeletebyzantine is mispronounced. I think you have a recorder problem. thanks for your effort.
ReplyDeletewell done work.. There are few mispronunciations but your intonation is good. thanks :)
ReplyDeletea well prepared work, ı liked it. yr pronunciation is good apart from some minor mistakes.
ReplyDeletethe word 'byzantine' is pronounced wrongly. I think it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteByzantine and mosque is mispronouced but I think it is a good video
ReplyDeleteI liked your video generally but there are some pronunciation mistakes. Macedonian must be like {,mæsı'dəʋnjən} and population must be like
ReplyDelete{,pɒpjə'leıʃən}.
I think this video is much better than the other one because your intonation is good and the music is harmony with video. there are some mispronunciations like mosque. :D
ReplyDeleteYou're well-prepared and I like your photos.Despite some pronunciation mistakes, it's a good video.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good but I think there is a problem with your recorder.
ReplyDeleteI agree with nur.I think this video,frequency,and your voice are more successful and effective than your other video.cong:)
ReplyDelete'macedonian' is the word mispronounced. She speaks fluently and her voice is clear...
ReplyDeleteApart from some pronounciation mistakes ,her video was good and her rvideo was better than the other one.
ReplyDelete''byzantine'' is not being mispronounced, there are two forms of pronounciation but on the other hand ''population,Macedonian and another'' are being mispronounced. But I liked this video more than the former one. Good job!
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good , ı think. your speech is understandable. ı likd your video. you gave us advantageous information about Büyükada. however, you mispronounced a word. it is Macedonian. except that, ı couldnt catch any mispronounced word.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good although there are some pronunciation mistakes, it is well done job..
ReplyDeleteexcept for some pronounciation mistakes your music is very good and photos are well chosen so it is a good video
ReplyDeleteyour sound recorder is problematic I think but your music and your information about it are enough to go there.
ReplyDeleteyour video is better than former one. I liked it but again you have unneccessary pauses. moreoverr, you have pronunciation mistakes such as population,macedonian.
ReplyDeleteyou dont have a lot of pronounciation mistakes
ReplyDeletethe music and photos are good.
there are some mispronounced words, but I liked your photos and musıc.
ReplyDeleteit is better than your first video, you are more careful in terms of pronouncation and intonation.
ReplyDeleteintonation is good and speech is fluent but in some parts the speech is inaudible because of the recorder ı think
ReplyDeleteyour speech s fluent. and you use intonation wel . apart from some pronunciation mistakes the video is godd for me . your photos are clear, too.
ReplyDeleteSome words are mispronounced, but music and photos are harmonious.
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