the video is so fantastic. intonation is well in general. important, history, memorial, war, interms are the wrods wrongly pronounced. sometimes ı didnt understand the sentence. because of the motherlanguage of her sometimes she promounced words in a different way like "that". but what she said and her photos are atractive and persuaded me to go there.
your photos were good but your speech wasn't clear enogh you have some pronouncation problems such as pathriotic,educational,statueı watched your video 3 times to understand what you want to mean
it is a very interesting video maybe because ı have never been there. you pronounced some words wrongly and sometimes ı coul not understand what you said probably because of your mother language.your intonation could be better.
You sound some exciting but you made me want to go and visit this museum. 'importance, memorial, photograph(2:44) and victory' are pronounced wrong. Photographs chosen are very interesting. Intonation is used well generally.
Victoria, you prepared very fantastic video. In my opinion, your voice are very balanced. There are some pronunciation mistakes. Also, you are exciting in the some parts of speech so you are speaking very fast.
the pictures are marvellous, i was impressed. the speech and tone are good but there are some mistakes i know bcz of your russian accent. no matter how hard it is you should give more importance to them
It's a fantastic video but just because ı have never been there. And memorial,war, in terms,weapon,nowadays,measure and photograph are misprnounced. On the other hand, her mother tounge makes the video so cute, liked it:)
your speech is fast.there is some pronunciation mistakes such as memorial,nowadays and measure.you should be careful your intonation.but it is generally prepared well.
The speech is too fast to understand some words and there are mistakes in pronuncition as the other people mentioned above. anyway the speech is persuasive and well organized.
The museum really interesting,I want to go there one day.However,her speech was lack of fluency.The photos were very attractive.'war' was said wrong but generally good.
ın general, your speech is effective but some of the part you did not use intonations so effectively. and war, weapon, victory are some of the mispronounced words.
you are perfect. your speech is fluent. although ı dont understand some parts, overall it is a good job. ı found a pronunciation mistake. it is equipment.
Your photos are really good and persuaded me to go there. Your intonation is good and your speech is lively. I could not catch any mistakes apart from some pronunciations of words(memorial, photograph, war....)
you have prepared the presentation well.. but there are some minor pronunciaation mistakes... in generall, your speech is fluent and clear. it is a good one..
your photos are very nice.but you pronounced some words wrongly'measure,memorial'you could speak more fluently.I felt that while you are speaking,you excited.however,it is good video,one day I want to go there.
your pronunciation is getting better but there arre some mistakes, for example; the word hecrtare is mispronounced it sould be pronounced as /hekteər/ and the word established is mispronounced it is as /ɪstæblɪʃt/
I think her pictures are very good. In spite of her motherlanguage she can make me go there her voice pitch is good there are pronunciation mistakes like memorial and sometimes I couldn't understand some words but in general it is a good one
That's fine you have begun with a question. Hectar, areas is mispronunced. You are speking as if you would like to finish your speech quickly. You should slow down a little. But not as much as my speech:)The rest is ok.
I found the content of your video somehow absorbing, as one interested in Soviet history and I was persuaded to go there upon seeing the content.. your voice is balanced and your fluency did not bore me.. pictures were really charming...
although there are some mispronounced words, your intonation is good when I consider the rest of the video. I liked the photos that you used in your video. In my opinion it is a good presentation. but I wish you could speak a bit lively
in general the video is good.the speech is not bad,the information is rewarding. i wannna see that place after that video:D.intonations are not bad.the speech is not very clear and there are some mispronunced words like:important, history, memorial, war.etc.
photos are perfect and in harmony with rhe speech.statue is miss pronounced but in general it is prepared well and now I am really curios about that place thanks to you.
Her speech is perfect.She speaks fluently. However, in some parts she speaks so fast that I can't catch what she is saying.Apart from this. everything is ok.
while speaking it comes as if you were excited. it made you lack of fluency.anyway its a good and well prepared job. 'photographs','hectar' are said wrongly
I think the video was prepared well and it was understandable.but ı couldn't catch some parts.And her accent of Russian was more effective than english.Howevr,ıt wasn't bad. Unlikely,It had a different effect on her video.
you dont speak fluently.. it was a nice place and the photos were charming, so l was impressed by it..'importance, memorial weere werent pronounced correectly..you repeated 'the mother, mother land' oftenly.
the video is well- prepared and as it is ur country and town, you could give the information very well. asking question at the beginning realy gets me persuased to listen to it all. cong. ViCa :)
the photas are nice but l didn't like the intonations you ve used.there were a lot of mispronounced words such as liberation, measure,photographs,..etc.you gave some unnecessary stops.it didnt get my attention.but thanks for it.
a fantastic video it is one of tje most well prepared video ı have watched you carnly persuade me to go ukrania except some pronous mistake photographs.memorial
the video is so fantastic. intonation is well in general. important, history, memorial, war, interms are the wrods wrongly pronounced. sometimes ı didnt understand the sentence. because of the motherlanguage of her sometimes she promounced words in a different way like "that". but what she said and her photos are atractive and persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteyour photos were good but your speech wasn't clear enogh you have some pronouncation problems such as pathriotic,educational,statueı watched your video 3 times to understand what you want to mean
ReplyDeleteit is a very interesting video maybe because ı have never been there. you pronounced some words wrongly and sometimes ı coul not understand what you said probably because of your mother language.your intonation could be better.
ReplyDeleteYou sound some exciting but you made me want to go and visit this museum. 'importance, memorial, photograph(2:44) and victory' are pronounced wrong. Photographs chosen are very interesting. Intonation is used well generally.
ReplyDeleteVictoria, you prepared very fantastic video. In my opinion, your voice are very balanced. There are some pronunciation mistakes. Also, you are exciting in the some parts of speech so you are speaking very fast.
ReplyDeletethe pictures are marvellous, i was impressed. the speech and tone are good but there are some mistakes i know bcz of your russian accent. no matter how hard it is you should give more importance to them
ReplyDeleteIt's a fantastic video but just because ı have never been there. And memorial,war, in terms,weapon,nowadays,measure and photograph are misprnounced. On the other hand, her mother tounge makes the video so cute, liked it:)
ReplyDeletealthough you made some mistakes in pronounciation, you succeeded to make a good project.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is fast.there is some pronunciation mistakes such as memorial,nowadays and measure.you should be careful your intonation.but it is generally prepared well.
ReplyDeleteThe speech is too fast to understand some words and there are mistakes in pronuncition as the other people mentioned above. anyway the speech is persuasive and well organized.
ReplyDeleteThe museum really interesting,I want to go there one day.However,her speech was lack of fluency.The photos were very attractive.'war' was said wrong but generally good.
ReplyDeleteın general, your speech is effective but some of the part you did not use intonations so effectively. and war, weapon, victory are some of the mispronounced words.
ReplyDeleteyou are perfect. your speech is fluent. although ı dont understand some parts, overall it is a good job. ı found a pronunciation mistake. it is equipment.
ReplyDeleteI think the video is very good. There are some pronunciation mistakes such as war and weapon. In general it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteShe could use more intonation and she shouldn’t have been paused in some parts.except for the word of ‘war’,the mistakes didn’t disturb me.
ReplyDeleteYour photos are really good and persuaded me to go there. Your intonation is good and your speech is lively. I could not catch any mistakes apart from some pronunciations of words(memorial, photograph, war....)
ReplyDeleteshe makes pronounciation mistakes but they don't irritate me,I found the museum very interesting
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are very attarcting.there were some mispronounced words such as photograph,weapon,war.anyway,ıt was agood video.ı liked it
ReplyDeleteı couldn t understand very celarly but ıt is an informative speech. the photos are good ı want to visit this museum thankss viki :))
ReplyDeleteyou have prepared the presentation well.. but there are some minor pronunciaation mistakes...
ReplyDeletein generall, your speech is fluent and clear. it is a good one..
Her tone was a bitdifferent cuz of her russian accent. She could be faster but ı liked the video,it draws attention and makes people want to go there.
ReplyDeleteyour photos are very nice.but you pronounced some words wrongly'measure,memorial'you could speak more fluently.I felt that while you are speaking,you excited.however,it is good video,one day I want to go there.
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is getting better but there arre some mistakes, for example; the word hecrtare is mispronounced it sould be pronounced as /hekteər/ and the word established is mispronounced it is as /ɪstæblɪʃt/
ReplyDeleteI think her pictures are very good. In spite of her motherlanguage she can make me go there her voice pitch is good there are pronunciation mistakes like memorial and sometimes I couldn't understand some words but in general it is a good one
ReplyDeleteThat's fine you have begun with a question. Hectar, areas is mispronunced. You are speking as if you would like to finish your speech quickly. You should slow down a little. But not as much as my speech:)The rest is ok.
ReplyDeleteI found the content of your video somehow absorbing, as one interested in Soviet history and I was persuaded to go there upon seeing the content.. your voice is balanced and your fluency did not bore me.. pictures were really charming...
ReplyDeletealthough there are some mispronounced words, your intonation is good when I consider the rest of the video. I liked the photos that you used in your video. In my opinion it is a good presentation. but I wish you could speak a bit lively
ReplyDeletein general the video is good.the speech is not bad,the information is rewarding. i wannna see that place after that video:D.intonations are not bad.the speech is not very clear and there are some mispronunced words like:important, history, memorial, war.etc.
ReplyDeletethis is a good presentation, her photos are good and intonation is also good but there are some pronounciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteAsking questions is a good for strating your speech... Your intonation is not very good I think but pictures are very good. Thank you.
ReplyDeletephotos are perfect and in harmony with rhe speech.statue is miss pronounced but in general it is prepared well and now I am really curios about that place thanks to you.
ReplyDeleteI think that it is a good presentation.But sometimes your voice isn't neat enough to understandIn general,it is one of the good presentations.
ReplyDeleteHer speech is perfect.She speaks fluently. However, in some parts she speaks so fast that I can't catch what she is saying.Apart from this. everything is ok.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good presentation, moreover teh watchers get the impression that it will be good to see there in the future.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is too fast at the beginning so I couldn't catch some parts of it.You also mispronounce 'war and photograph' but your photos are well.
ReplyDeleteYour sentences are some complicated.You have a few mistakes.Generally good presentation...
ReplyDeleteit is really fascinatingg...the best i think..good enoughhh
ReplyDeleteI think she was a bit excited. her photos are interesting. I liked her presentation. she persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteThe word 'war' is pronounced wrongly. Photos are very attarctive. Her pronouncation is good.
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of mispronounced words because of her accent. Her photos are really attractive to go there but she is excited I think.
ReplyDeletealthough some parts aren't understantable and there are some mispronounced words, I found the video really good and want to go there:)
ReplyDeletewhile speaking it comes as if you were excited. it made you lack of fluency.anyway its a good and well prepared job. 'photographs','hectar' are said wrongly
ReplyDeleteI think the video was prepared well and it was understandable.but ı couldn't catch some parts.And her accent of Russian was more effective than english.Howevr,ıt wasn't bad. Unlikely,It had a different effect on her video.
ReplyDeleteyou dont speak fluently.. it was a nice place and the photos were charming, so l was impressed by it..'importance, memorial weere werent pronounced correectly..you repeated 'the mother, mother land' oftenly.
ReplyDeleteyou were excited. war and measure were pronounced wrongly but in general it was good.
ReplyDeletethe video is well- prepared and as it is ur country and town, you could give the information very well. asking question at the beginning realy gets me persuased to listen to it all.
ReplyDeletecong. ViCa :)
the photas are nice but l didn't like the intonations you ve used.there were a lot of mispronounced words such as liberation, measure,photographs,..etc.you gave some unnecessary stops.it didnt get my attention.but thanks for it.
ReplyDeleteYou only have problems with the pronounciation. The video was pretty good and congratulations.
ReplyDeleteI think she is talking a bit fastly and ın my opinion if she had added a nice music to the video it would more better.
ReplyDeleteeven though the speech is fast, intonation is good.measure is mispronounced,but generally pronounciation is not bad,ı liked the photos
ReplyDeletebecause you should say cultural not cultur. you pronounced photograpf wrongly. But in general it was a good work
ReplyDeleteyour photos are very impressive and I was not bored while watching it.At the first opportunity I want to go there.Thank you
ReplyDeleteapart from some mistakes of pronuncation such as 'photograps,war',your presentation is very well-prepared and attracted me to visit there.
ReplyDeleteı liked her video and photos. there were some mispronounced words because of her accent.however, it was not important.
ReplyDeleteı liked your video and photos the museum is very interesting cong:)
ReplyDeleteyour presentation and photos are very good. however I think you should have added a music.ı like your video and I want to go there.
ReplyDeletether are some pronouncation mistakes, your speech isn'nt clear but the presentation is good ,thank you:)
ReplyDeletea fantastic video it is one of tje most well prepared video ı have watched you carnly persuade me to go ukrania except some pronous mistake photographs.memorial
ReplyDeletethe video is good and about an important subject like museum.intonation is good . there are pronunciation mistakes.
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