she has some pronunciation mistakes such as commercial,area.. moreover she doesn't completely finish her presentation. her background music was fine and I liked it.
There are some pronunciation mistakes. For example, she says the word 'metropolits' in wrong form. Also her video finishes between 2nd and 3th minutes, it is a short video.
the presentation is short and she has some pronunciation errors like "commercial activities, meter" but in general she can make me to listen to her. she intonates the sentences well.
The video is very short when it is compared with the other ones. The voice record is not good,there happens echo in the record,so it is a distraction for the listeners.
it is too short. boarder, antioch, massive, center, commercial, empierer are some of her pronounciation mistakes. her intonation was bad and speach isnt flluent. it didnt persuade me to go there.
the presentation wasnt finished completely. it seems as if you cut the last part. the video is too short. there is almost no speech. ı didnt like ı am sorry my friend. but it could be better.
Ooops... Why did you cut your speech? I couldn't understand it. Therefore, there is disjointed in the video. Also, your intonation could be better and there are some pronunciation mistakes such as commercial, activity.
your presentation is really short and what happened to the last part?it finished suddenly.your music volume is higher than your voice generally in this video.also you made some pronounciation mistakes such as commercial activity,built and emperor.it could be better.but your intonation is very well.
Your presentation is short. There are unnecessary pauses and you pronuenced some words wrongly commercial... I do not understand why you cut your presentation without finishing it.
This video is short for this project and I think because of your recorder, there are echos and in some parts of the video. the music is good choice but it beats your voice down. some words like ancient, emperor,meter are mispronounced. the voice outage is not good.:(
the music stands in the forefront while your speech should be so. your words like ahead,commercial,ancient are mispronounced. ı think you ended your video in a wrong time.You had better pay attention next time.
the first "ancient" sounded incorrect to me. and a lil bit short video. ı liked the photos. its a good informative one Emine. an you use ur intonation well.. good job !
you have a short video which has a lot of mispronounciation mistakes such as ancient, significant, commercial, necropolis, Roma, period, hundred, emperor.Moreover, it is too short. Intonation should be improved. I hope your second project will be better.
the volume of the music is very high, so in some parts, it is hard to have your voice...there were many mispronounced words such as 'ancient,commercial,hundred,necropolis,period.......
the musıc ıs attractive ı liked it and your photos. you have some mistakes such as ancient and commercial however you try to speak fluently thanks ıt ıs good presentation in general
ı liked your music and the photos. you speak a bıt slowly and have some mistakes such as commercial and ancient. ıt is not too bad in general thanks anyway
your speech is fluent.you pronounced some words wrong such as activity, period ,role.... you have finished it suddenly. it has anegative effect to your well- going project.
the music is suitable for this video and your voice. but your presentation a little short and your voice a bit slow. generally, presentation is well-organized
Pronunciation of ''ancient'' is wrong and the volume of bacground music is high... Apart from these problem, your presentation is very good. Thank you Emine!
the music voice is high. her presentation is short.
ReplyDeleteshe has some pronunciation mistakes such as commercial,area.. moreover she doesn't completely finish her presentation. her background music was fine and I liked it.
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ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes. For example, she says the word 'metropolits' in wrong form. Also her video finishes between 2nd and 3th minutes, it is a short video.
ReplyDeletethe presentation is short and she has some pronunciation errors like "commercial activities, meter" but in general she can make me to listen to her. she intonates the sentences well.
ReplyDeleteshe made some pronunciation mistakes such as 'period and among'. I suppose there is a problem at the end of the video as it finished suddenly.
ReplyDeleteThe video is very short when it is compared with the other ones. The voice record is not good,there happens echo in the record,so it is a distraction for the listeners.
ReplyDeleteit is too short. boarder, antioch, massive, center, commercial, empierer are some of her pronounciation mistakes. her intonation was bad and speach isnt flluent. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletethe quality of the record is bad,the video is short and I couldn't understandwhy she cut the video before it finished.
ReplyDeleteshe has some pronounciation mistakes such as built,commercials and it was a bit short.ıt would be better ı think
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and you chose the music well... there are some minor mistakes in pronunciation and you did not complete the
ReplyDeletelast sentence.
you are fluent and the music is great but there are some pronunciation mistakes. period ['pıırııd], commercial [kı'm3:rŞ?ıl
ReplyDeletethe presentation wasnt finished completely. it seems as if you cut the last part. the video is too short. there is almost no speech. ı didnt like ı am sorry my friend. but it could be better.
ReplyDeleteshe is fluent but there are mistakes in pronunciation as other people mentioned above.
ReplyDeleteYou cut your video while talking. I didnt like the video in general and you pronounce 'commercial and interior' wrong.
ReplyDeleteyour video was a bit short period was pronounced wrongly and your photos weren't harmony with your speech and ı could not hear the end of your speech
ReplyDeleteur conclusion is not good as it stopped suddenly. and i heard some mistakes of pronounciation such as : ancient, christianity, during, kilometres
ReplyDeleteHer voice was too little to hear for me .And she pronounced 'period,commercial' mistakenly.Besides,her voice was cut at the end of her presentation.
ReplyDeletenot your speech but the music took my attention.
ReplyDeleteOoops... Why did you cut your speech? I couldn't understand it. Therefore, there is disjointed in the video. Also, your intonation could be better and there are some pronunciation mistakes such as commercial, activity.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is really short and what happened to the last part?it finished suddenly.your music volume is higher than your voice generally in this video.also you made some pronounciation mistakes such as commercial activity,built and emperor.it could be better.but your intonation is very well.
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronounced words such as christianity and we couldn't hear last part of the video.intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteShe has some pronunciation mistakes such as significant,hundred and commercial. it is a short video.
ReplyDeleteThe word ‘in ancient time’ is used wrongly. It should be ‘In ancient times’
ReplyDeleteYour presentation is short. There are unnecessary pauses and you pronuenced some words wrongly commercial... I do not understand why you cut your presentation without finishing it.
ReplyDeleteI didn't like the end of video because I was waiting to contunie,it finished suddenly.in the some part of the video,I liked your intonation.
ReplyDeletethere were some pronounciation mistakes such as commercial, period.and she didn't complete her speech
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and music is funny :))but I think it is a bit shoter than the avarage. Also you finish the video suddenly which is not good.
ReplyDeleteThere are mispronunced words.Also I didn't like the ending of the video. It finished suddenly.It could be better.
ReplyDeletewhat is "five hundren six" I think you should write down the numbers :)
ReplyDeleteyour video is a bit short and there are some pronounciation mistakes but you speak fluently
ReplyDelete''ancient,commercial,emperor,hundred,necropolis,period'' are mispronounced. And I didn't like her voice dissapearing. Not good!
ReplyDeleteThis video is short for this project and I think because of your recorder, there are echos and in some parts of the video. the music is good choice but it beats your voice down. some words like ancient, emperor,meter are mispronounced. the voice outage is not good.:(
ReplyDeleteSound of music is higher than your voice.It is a little distracting.'ancient' is wrongly prnounced.But I like your photos.
ReplyDeletethe music stands in the forefront while your speech should be so. your words like ahead,commercial,ancient are mispronounced. ı think you ended your video in a wrong time.You had better pay attention next time.
ReplyDeleteit is too short I think..but I know that the second will be better :D
ReplyDeleteThe music is on the same level with your voice. It irritated me. It is short and finishes suddenly!
ReplyDeleteThe voice record is not good.there are problems :( and you say ancient and commercial wrongly.
ReplyDeletethe first "ancient" sounded incorrect to me. and a lil bit short video. ı liked the photos. its a good informative one Emine. an you use ur intonation well.. good job !
ReplyDeleteyou have a short video which has a lot of mispronounciation mistakes such as ancient, significant, commercial, necropolis, Roma, period, hundred, emperor.Moreover, it is too short. Intonation should be improved. I hope your second project will be better.
ReplyDeleteI agree with ÇİĞDEM again and again:):):)Dear my friend, Best regards:)
ReplyDeletethe volume of the music is very high, so in some parts, it is hard to have your voice...there were many mispronounced words such as 'ancient,commercial,hundred,necropolis,period.......
ReplyDeletethe musıc ıs attractive ı liked it and your photos. you have some mistakes such as ancient and commercial however you try to speak fluently thanks ıt ıs good presentation in general
ReplyDeleteı liked your music and the photos. you speak a bıt slowly and have some mistakes such as commercial and ancient. ıt is not too bad in general thanks anyway
ReplyDeleteI think 'commercial and emperor' are mispronounced. the music is very nice.
ReplyDeletecommercial and ancient are mispronounced,the speech shoul be longer and better, but intonation is not bad
ReplyDeleteThe words kilometer and period were said wrongly.There some pauses that distract the listener.
ReplyDeleteyou have some minor mistakes but your pictures are good well done;)
ReplyDeletesyria,period and kilometer were pronounced inccorrectly.and don't record the speech sentence by sentence.it could be better.
ReplyDeletecommercial was said wrongly. u make sometimes pauses,but voice is understanble.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is fluent.you pronounced some words wrong such as activity, period ,role.... you have finished it suddenly. it has anegative effect to your well- going project.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is short but your speech is fluent
ReplyDelete'commercial' is mispronunced.There are also unnecessary durations but I like the video and I want to visit there.THANKS
ReplyDeletethe music is suitable for this video and your voice. but your presentation a little short and your voice a bit slow. generally, presentation is well-organized
ReplyDeletePronunciation of ''ancient'' is wrong and the volume of bacground music is high... Apart from these problem, your presentation is very good. Thank you Emine!
ReplyDeletethe words syria,period , kilometer pronounced wrongly.however it could have been a bit longer.your intonation ia good i think.
ReplyDeleteıt is very short,it would be much better if it is a bit longer,but ı Iiked it.
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