Music could be lower. Also, you have two pronunciation mistakes; these are "about" and "princess". Yet, in general your speech is clear and understanble so you have a good job. C:
Your speech is nice and fluent and also, I liked your intonation.Although the music you chose is suitable for the video, during your speech it distracted me. I mean it could be lower. Good job anyway.
your intonation and frequency is perfect and your lively voice doesnt bore the listeners.But I think 'sultan' is mispronunced word.apart from this,it is a well-prepared job.cong:)
you are speaking fluently. ı liked your video. you share a history about this tower. while you are telling it, your intonation is really good. but as to your pronounciation mistakes, ı caught a few mistakes. these mispronounced words are ottoman ( ı know it is pronounced with just a "t" but you pronounce it double t), sultan ( you pronounce it as if it was a turkish word but it is pronounced as /ˈsʌl.tən/, construction, and location.. apart from these mistakes, your video and intonation are attractive:)
Kadir:))) Your voice is attractive.. Your music is awesome.... The story is perfect.... Good intonation ..... When they all combined together, there weren't so much left to say.As I said before you must speak English all the time:) But unfortunately; ''island,built,sultan and princess were mispronounced. But who cares, I loved it. Cong..:))))
I'm effected by the harmony between your voice and the music, your intonation is very good, I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake but If I could have,I wouldn't write it, because your video is very good
Although there some mispronounced words such as'built and memorable',I want to say that it is much more better than your first video and ı really liked your intonation.Also,the music and the photos are very good.Thank you kadir:))
the music is so high, I can't hear you very well, but is it suitable for your video. your speech sound fluent. in this video you are more good at intonation.
This story has always been the most popular one. Your presentation was well prepared and you try to use intonations. 'princess' is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteexperience is mispronounced. you have a good intonation. music is also great. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteMusic could be lower. Also, you have two pronunciation mistakes; these are "about" and "princess". Yet, in general your speech is clear and understanble so you have a good job. C:
ReplyDeletei liked your speech and i like this story. the only mistake i cought is "cafeteria"
ReplyDeleteit is an interesting story and a good choise also the music is perfect.but you mispronounced the word about wrongly.generally well organized.
ReplyDeletethe story is really charming you mispronounced the word"princess" wrongly but in general you have done a good job.
ReplyDeleteThe music is in harmony with the place you are talking about, due to the secrets of tower. The story is really good and you spoke in a good way.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is nice and fluent and also, I liked your intonation.Although the music you chose is suitable for the video, during your speech it distracted me. I mean it could be lower. Good job anyway.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is really effective.I liked your video but music could be lower.also photos are good.cong.:)
ReplyDeleteIf your music is at back drop, it will be better. but your way of using intonation is fine. it is a well prepared and an informative video.thanks.
ReplyDeleteI think music is perfect choice and you use intonation effectively. I like your presentation.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video, story and intonation. you prepared it well. there is only mispronounced word. 'princess'. ıt is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteapart from few mispronounced words it is well-prepared project.. additionally your intonaton is well...
ReplyDeleteit is a really well organized presentaion. some words are misprononced 'sultan,princess'. well done, body. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteexperience and princess are the words that are misspronounced. your story was a good one to listen.. good video mate! :)
ReplyDeleteexperience is pronunced wrongly.But you intonation is good.music and photos are in harmonious.
ReplyDelete'sultan' is mispronounced but the music is very nice and his voice is clear. Good...
ReplyDeleteThe music is suitable for this video. It's a good choice. Besides, intonation is effective.Except princess there is no mispronunced word.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and frequency is perfect and your lively voice doesnt bore the listeners.But I think 'sultan' is mispronunced word.apart from this,it is a well-prepared job.cong:)
ReplyDeleteHis music,story,photos and intonatio was perfect .Apart from some minor mispronounced words,Every thing was okey.
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking lively and it is a good video.I like your music,cong.:))
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking fluently. ı liked your video. you share a history about this tower. while you are telling it, your intonation is really good. but as to your pronounciation mistakes, ı caught a few mistakes. these mispronounced words are ottoman ( ı know it is pronounced with just a "t" but you pronounce it double t), sultan ( you pronounce it as if it was a turkish word but it is pronounced as /ˈsʌl.tən/, construction, and location.. apart from these mistakes, your video and intonation are attractive:)
ReplyDeleteyour voice is audible and you speak fluently.the story is attractive.I think it is a well prepared video in terms of everything:):)
ReplyDeleteprincess is said wrong. I am affected by your music it is very effective and the story is really interesting. intonation is good. cong friend :)
ReplyDeleteKadir:)))
ReplyDeleteYour voice is attractive..
Your music is awesome....
The story is perfect....
Good intonation .....
When they all combined together, there weren't so much left to say.As I said before you must speak English all the time:) But unfortunately; ''island,built,sultan and princess were mispronounced. But who cares, I loved it. Cong..:))))
I'm effected by the harmony between your voice and the music, your intonation is very good, I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake but If I could have,I wouldn't write it, because your video is very good
ReplyDeleteKadir I say only one sentence:
ReplyDeleteIt is a perfect project in terms of music and speech :D
Although there some mispronounced words such as'built and memorable',I want to say that it is much more better than your first video and ı really liked your intonation.Also,the music and the photos are very good.Thank you kadir:))
ReplyDeleteexcept for minor pronunciation mistakes your video is perfect.
ReplyDeletethe music is so high, I can't hear you very well, but is it suitable for your video. your speech sound fluent. in this video you are more good at intonation.
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