the photos of the presentation are good, in contrast her voice is not high enough to be haerd. she speaks a bit slow, but apart from these point, I liked the video.
it is too short and your voice is so horsee and bad ı couldnt understand even a word. also ı think your intonation is bad i general. you didnt persuade me to go there.
Your voice is very hoarse and irritating. You should have used another device to record your voice. Also, intonation doesn't mean to scream. You could do it better.
it is hard to understand what you are saying. intonation is not bad. your presentation isn't long enough to persuade someone. but it is well organized.
your intonation is really wonderful:) but ı cant understand clearly what you are saying because of your voice recorder. as ı understood your speech, ı couldnt catch any pronunciation mistakes. ıt is a good job
your speech is already slow, why did you make your video so short? on the other hand the sound cannot be heard well so i only heard that "present" said wrongly.
the video and presentation is really short.you speak too slowly and it lacks intonation.your music is in harmony with your photos.but you speak hoarsely at some parts so ı could not understand very well.
She is speaking so hoarsely that ı could not understand a lot of parts but ı can say that area is mispronounced and again she is speaking sentence by sentence..
your voice is not clear friend,so ı couldnt understand exactly wat you said. ı suppose that its bec of your recorder. you could do it better by adding intonation and life to your speech.
your project is short. Unfortunately, your voice is not distinct. You did not use your intonation well.But Your photos were in harmony with your music.
Her voice wasn't clear .Therefore,I couldn't understand some parts of the video.There must be a problem with the recorder.Inspite of these, the photos were good.
your presentation is in harmony with music and photos,they add attrattive to your video.but voice because of the recorder isn't clear so I couldn't catch the pronunciation and intonation.
your voice is not clear so many of the sentences couldn't be understood and your photos aren't clear,either.If these problems were corrected, it would be a better video.
Your voice can't be heard clearly because of the recorder.I couldn't catch any pronounciation mistake.Apart from this,I can say that in the second time you should pay attention to the intonation.
Firstly, you should change your voice recorder. Your intoaion and pronunciation are very good but the time of the video is a bit short. Anyway, I really like it, thank you Nagihan!
her presentation is very short. the photos of her presentation is harmonious with her speech.
ReplyDeleteThe presentation and the pictures are good but Her voice isn't audible.
ReplyDeleteI couldnt understand what she said because of the recorder.
ReplyDeletethe photos of the presentation are good, in contrast her voice is not high enough to be haerd. she speaks a bit slow, but apart from these point, I liked the video.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is short.your voice and recording is not clear.the pictures are in a good order.
ReplyDeleteshe doesn't speak very fluently. but her pictures and music is very good
ReplyDeleteher voice recorder isn't good and irritating so it affects her speech.as far as I could understand,there is no pronunciation mistake.
ReplyDeletethere must be a problem with her recorder.she speaks so slow .the pictures she used are good enough for us to understand what kurşunlu is like.
ReplyDeleteit is too short and your voice is so horsee and bad ı couldnt understand even a word. also ı think your intonation is bad i general. you didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is very hoarse and irritating. You should have used another device to record your voice. Also, intonation doesn't mean to scream. You could do it better.
ReplyDeletethe sound is not clear enough to make comments about pronunciation but she intonated the sentences well.
ReplyDeleteit is hard to understand what you are saying. intonation is not bad. your presentation isn't long enough to persuade someone. but it is well organized.
ReplyDeleteThe video is very short and it is so hard to hear her speech,so I couldn’t understand if the words are pronounced wrong or correct.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really wonderful:) but ı cant understand clearly what you are saying because of your voice recorder. as ı understood your speech, ı couldnt catch any pronunciation mistakes. ıt is a good job
ReplyDeleteVoice isn't audible and the video is too short to persuade us. I cannot understand even to say you have pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is already slow, why did you make your video so short? on the other hand the sound cannot be heard well so i only heard that "present" said wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour voice was not audible and some of your photos were not clear but your photos were in accordence with your speech
ReplyDeletethe video and presentation is really short.you speak too slowly and it lacks intonation.your music is in harmony with your photos.but you speak hoarsely at some parts so ı could not understand very well.
ReplyDeleteShe is speaking so hoarsely that ı could not understand a lot of parts but ı can say that area is mispronounced and again she is speaking sentence by sentence..
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not clear friend,so ı couldnt understand exactly wat you said. ı suppose that its bec of your recorder. you could do it better by adding intonation and life to your speech.
ReplyDeleteher speech is very irritating as the recorder is not good. so I did not understand anything.She can improve her intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour project is short. Unfortunately, your voice is not distinct. You did not use your intonation well.But Your photos were in harmony with your music.
ReplyDeleteHer voice wasn't clear .Therefore,I couldn't understand some parts of the video.There must be a problem with the recorder.Inspite of these, the photos were good.
ReplyDeletespeech is short and I didnt catch some parts in the video but she explains place well and photos make it attractive with the music.
ReplyDeletealthough the presentation is good and the photos are in harmony with your speech it is a shorter one than average...
ReplyDeletePhotos are very nice.but it s not very understandable because of the recorder.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not clear but your photos are perfect and they are in harmony with your speech
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is in harmony with music and photos,they add attrattive to your video.but voice because of the recorder isn't clear so I couldn't catch the pronunciation and intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very short and I think your recorder has a problem, so I couldn't catch any mistake
ReplyDeleteYour voice is not clear enough but apart from this, the music and the photos are in harmony with each other. They are attractive.
ReplyDeletebecause of your recorder, your voice irritates me and I think your video is short for this project, you should pay attention to your intonations.
ReplyDeletethe voice wasn't clear so it is hard to catch the mistakes. It is a goog tactic not to show the mistakes I'll use this... :)
ReplyDeleteı think your recorder is problematic. kilometers is mispronounced
ReplyDeleteHer voice could have been louder..It was difficult for me to understand her sentences. The video is very short.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not clear so many of the sentences couldn't be understood and your photos aren't clear,either.If these problems were corrected, it would be a better video.
ReplyDeleteit is short but the photos are good..But you could have used a better voice recorder ı think.
ReplyDeleteIt is too short and I think she has problem with sound recorder so I couldn't understand anything
ReplyDeletebut pictures are good.
although her video is short, it is very nice. However, I couldn't understand her voice clearly.
ReplyDeleteyour video is very short and your voice is not clear enough.. your music is one of my favourites.. pay more attention to intonation :)
ReplyDeleteyour voice was not so audible..maybe that was because of ur recorder, but this bothered me....
ReplyDeletepresentation is very short and there is problem with the voice. It's not audible enough.
ReplyDeleteyou could speak more persuasively to attract and it was a bit short.l couldn understand all of ur speech but it was not bad.
ReplyDeletenagiş sorry but I cannot understand so I cannot comment about your video.
ReplyDeleteı didn t like your photos they are not clear. your intonation could be better the music is good it is good presentation in general thanks
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ReplyDeleteit is a bit short and the voice is not clear.as ı could hear, intonation was good
ReplyDeleteYour voice can't be heard clearly because of the recorder.I couldn't catch any pronounciation mistake.Apart from this,I can say that in the second time you should pay attention to the intonation.
ReplyDeletethe voice isn't audible but the intonation is ok and the music is very nice.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation could be better but you speak clearly and I like the pictures and information about it.Thanks
ReplyDeletewoooow.there is no incorrect pronounced word. Cause I didn’t catch your words. This is not your fault. It is recorders fault :)
ReplyDeleteI think the problem with your voice stems from the quality of the voice recorder but your pictures are very nice I liked them ;) well done
ReplyDeletethe music and other insturments are good.the speech is not bad,but the voice is hoarse.and the intonations could be better.
ReplyDeleteı think there is a problem with your recorder but I like your video and your intonations.
ReplyDeletethe sound is not clear enough to make comments about pronunciation,butstyle of telling the story is good.
ReplyDeleteI think she doesn't speak very fluently but the music is good::)
ReplyDeleteFirstly, you should change your voice recorder. Your intoaion and pronunciation are very good but the time of the video is a bit short. Anyway, I really like it, thank you Nagihan!
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