there are pronounciation mistakes.for example: development is wrongly pronounced.however her intonation is great. I liked it. she should have added music. that would be great.
it is very good example of persuasive speach. ı like it but it can be better with a music. your intonation is well in general. you speaks fluently. development and the name of your topic must be studied more because ı think you did some pronounciation mistakes while saying those words. you persuaded me to go there.
she pronounces words well.but sometimes she speaks fast so I couldn't catch some things.the word'peninsula' is pronounced wrong.there is no music.therefore listeners can bore.besides,it shouldn't be started "hi,guys" because it is broadcasted in youtube and google earth.it is not available to start by saying this word.
first of all, you are talking so fast. ı cant catch some sentences . ı dont understand what you r saying. secondyl, your intonation is really great.your video is good. but you could have added a music. ı think it could be really great. thirdly, you mispronounced some words such as development, photograph and peninsula. lastly, you started talking by saying Hi guys. ı think it shouldnt have been said in that video because as you know, those videos were downloaded in google earth. this sentence is wrong, ı think.
Nur, your intonation is very good but you exaggerate it sometimes. You speak too fast. You dont have much pronunciation mistake. period(1:19) is pronounced wrong but the speech was effective in general.
i heard different pronounciations of "emperor", you should decide on /empərər / i think =] "peninsula,Byzantine" are wrong pronouncitaions i heard. i liked your speech but sometimes you stressed too much, on the whole it was veryy good
you use intonation effectively and your entrnce is good.but sometimes you exeggerate intonation.you should speak a bit slowly.you pronounced the word peninsula wrongly.it could be better and more attracting if you added music in harmony with your photos.generally ı liked your presentation.it is persuasive.
you speak really fluently.. your intonation is good enough. but like me, you get faster at some parts so ı cant get wat u said. :)ı guess the word "about and settlement" are mispronounced. you get me to want to see there. good job friend !
her intonation is very good. she has just pronunciation mistakes like avenue, development.her photographs were good,as well.Generally,a good sample of persuasive speech.
you paid attention to your intonation in your speech, there are also some pronunciation mistakes the same with other friends said.but generally your video is good.
this is the best video I watched. Your intonation, speech is really good. But there are some pronunciation mistakes such as mosaic, byzantine...Anyway it was good.
Her intonation was good and effective.Her voice was understandable.Her presentation became good except for some mistakenly pronounced words such as peninsula ,period,mosaic.
your speech is not irritating. you persuade the readers to visit the place. I mean it is an effective video but we see some prononciation mistakes in your speech. it is a good one,actually
You say byzantine and peninsula wrongly but your intonation really influential.You lenghten 'bad' I think it doesn't sound well but still I liked it :)
'peninsula' is pronounced wrongly. However, her intonation is very good. I also liked the beginning of her speech. Furthermore, She focuses on some words unnecessarily.
Beginning of hi guys isnot suitable for the video broadcasted in googleearth. It is unnecessary. Peninsula, byzantine, theatre, towards are spelled wrong. you can add music to be funny as you said to me. ;) You intonated some words in unnecessary way. but generally it is not bad.
I think the expression ''hi there'' is not appropriate for a googleearth project.. it is an evident fact that your intonation is better than average.. your video would be in my top 5 if it was ornamented with a theme music but it is still one of the well-prepared ones nur!
The beginning and the final of the video are wonderful.It is different from other videos.There is hardly any pronunciation mistakes.Meanwhile,byzantine is correctly pronounced :)Your intonation is great but your speech is a bit fast.Best regards:)
your intonation was really good ,but in some parts you spoke very fastly so I couldn't understand what you were saying.Also,your pronounciation was good except from some words;as my friends said.
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ReplyDeleteher pronounciation is good but she emphasize some words too much and this is irritating
ReplyDeleteHer intonation is very good. There is pronunciation mistakes. For example; she says the word 'peninsula' in wrong form.
ReplyDeletethere are pronounciation mistakes.for example: development is wrongly pronounced.however her intonation is great. I liked it. she should have added music. that would be great.
ReplyDeleteher voice pitch is very good and she can affect her listeners easily I liked this presentation she intonate the sentences well
ReplyDeleteit was really a good presentation both in terms of intonation and pronounciation.ı liked it.
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ReplyDeleteI liked the introduction part very much.It was really effective.Although there are some pronunciation mistakes,it was good in general. Cong.
ReplyDeleteit is very good example of persuasive speach. ı like it but it can be better with a music. your intonation is well in general. you speaks fluently. development and the name of your topic must be studied more because ı think you did some pronounciation mistakes while saying those words. you persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeletePronunciation is very good in general except some words. Also intonation is very effective. Congrulations. ;)
ReplyDeleteshe pronounces words well.but sometimes she speaks fast so I couldn't catch some things.the word'peninsula' is pronounced wrong.there is no music.therefore listeners can bore.besides,it shouldn't be started "hi,guys" because it is broadcasted in youtube and google earth.it is not available to start by saying this word.
ReplyDeleteyou pay attention to intonations and it makes your video good. there are some mistakes pronounciation. in general, it is good.
ReplyDeletedevelopment , emperer and photograph were not pronunced correctly but in general the speech is well prepared and intonated.
ReplyDeletefirst of all, you are talking so fast. ı cant catch some sentences . ı dont understand what you r saying. secondyl, your intonation is really great.your video is good. but you could have added a music. ı think it could be really great. thirdly, you mispronounced some words such as development, photograph and peninsula. lastly, you started talking by saying Hi guys. ı think it shouldnt have been said in that video because as you know, those videos were downloaded in google earth. this sentence is wrong, ı think.
ReplyDeleteNur, your intonation is very good but you exaggerate it sometimes. You speak too fast. You dont have much pronunciation mistake. period(1:19) is pronounced wrong but the speech was effective in general.
ReplyDeletei heard different pronounciations of "emperor", you should decide on /empərər / i think =] "peninsula,Byzantine" are wrong pronouncitaions i heard. i liked your speech but sometimes you stressed too much, on the whole it was veryy good
ReplyDeleteyour intonation was very good mainland pronounced was pronounced wrongly but it was a good video
ReplyDeleteyou use intonation effectively and your entrnce is good.but sometimes you exeggerate intonation.you should speak a bit slowly.you pronounced the word peninsula wrongly.it could be better and more attracting if you added music in harmony with your photos.generally ı liked your presentation.it is persuasive.
ReplyDeleteyou speak really fluently.. your intonation is good enough. but like me, you get faster at some parts so ı cant get wat u said. :)ı guess the word "about and settlement" are mispronounced. you get me to want to see there. good job friend !
ReplyDeleteIt's a good sample except for some mispronounced words such as emperor,sand an peninsula'' I liked her voice pitch and intonation.Good job..
ReplyDeleteher intonation is very good. she has just pronunciation mistakes like avenue, development.her photographs were good,as well.Generally,a good sample of persuasive speech.
ReplyDeleteyou paid attention to your intonation in your speech, there are also some pronunciation mistakes the same with other friends said.but generally your video is good.
ReplyDeletethis is the best video I watched. Your intonation, speech is really good. But there are some pronunciation mistakes such as mosaic, byzantine...Anyway it was good.
ReplyDeleteHer intonation was good and effective.Her voice was understandable.Her presentation became good except for some mistakenly pronounced words such as peninsula ,period,mosaic.
ReplyDeleteI think the entrance is wrong. 'monument, photograph, peninsula and emperor' are mispronounced but her intonation is great
ReplyDeleteyour speech is not irritating. you persuade the readers to visit the place. I mean it is an effective video but we see some prononciation mistakes in your speech. it is a good one,actually
ReplyDeletea lovely voice, fluent speech, intonation...
ReplyDeleteIt is a good job:)
I think it is a bit fast but her voice is effective.It is well prepared.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't find a mistake, a good work but maybe you can add music. cong.
ReplyDeleteit is a well prepared presentation except for some mistakenly pronounced words
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is perfect.It is well-prepared.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation and intonation is very good.I think that It is persuasive.
ReplyDeletethe intonation is very good. there are just some pronunciation mistakes like avenue, development.
ReplyDeleteavenue,towards,theatre are some of the words mispronounced.you should have had music in the beginning to catch attention of listeners.
ReplyDeleteYou say byzantine and peninsula wrongly but your intonation really influential.You lenghten 'bad' I think it doesn't sound well but still I liked it :)
ReplyDelete'peninsula' is pronounced wrongly. However, her intonation is very good. I also liked the beginning of her speech. Furthermore, She focuses on some words unnecessarily.
ReplyDeletewith intonation and frequancy,it is the one of the most succesful video which I watched.I liked it very much.cong:)
ReplyDeleteyour speaking has always been awesome!!!!It is really one best videos I have watced up to now......JUst the WORD PHOTOGRAPH is abit problematic
ReplyDeleteBeginning of hi guys isnot suitable for the video broadcasted in googleearth. It is unnecessary. Peninsula, byzantine, theatre, towards are spelled wrong. you can add music to be funny as you said to me. ;) You intonated some words in unnecessary way. but generally it is not bad.
ReplyDeleteI think the expression ''hi there'' is not appropriate for a googleearth project.. it is an evident fact that your intonation is better than average.. your video would be in my top 5 if it was ornamented with a theme music but it is still one of the well-prepared ones nur!
ReplyDeleteThe beginning and the final of the video are wonderful.It is different from other videos.There is hardly any pronunciation mistakes.Meanwhile,byzantine is correctly pronounced :)Your intonation is great but your speech is a bit fast.Best regards:)
ReplyDeletei think u shouldnt have started by saying 'hi......' The word peninsula was misprounced.you speak fluently.
ReplyDeleteAlthough there were some mispronounced words, I liked it as you were fluent and had a good intonation.
ReplyDeleteemperer was pronouncued wrongly.u hve streessed some word unnecessarily.in general it was good to watch
ReplyDeletewoowww congrulations! you have a little mistakes but everything is perfect well done
ReplyDeleteyour intonation was really good ,but in some parts you spoke very fastly so I couldn't understand what you were saying.Also,your pronounciation was good except from some words;as my friends said.
ReplyDeletein some sections the speech is fast and ı can not understand,intonation is not bad,except for photograph and peninsula, pronounciation is good
ReplyDeleteYou could speak a bit slow.Except from this I like your intonation.
ReplyDeleteperiod and geometric are the words pronounced wrongly.but your video is good an I want to go there.
ReplyDeleteI liked your speaking a lot very nice voice and intonation;) congratulations :)
ReplyDeletethe video is very good.speech is fluent and the voice is excellent.there isn't any remarkable mistakes.
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ReplyDeleteI think you shouldn't start your speech with 'hi there' however your speech and your intonation are perfect.Congratulations!
ReplyDeletevery good video. almost no pronounciation mistake
ReplyDeletepeninsula/pəˈnɪnt .sjʊ.lə/ and across/əˈkrɒs/ were said wrongly
her pronouncation is very good and you speak very fluently I think 'no comment' it is very good:))
ReplyDeleteYou should change the beginning of the video. You should not start with ''hi'' I think. The rest is very good. Thank you Nur!
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