the music is perfect,but ı think it isnt appropriate. because it is not in harmony with yr voice.music is hgher than yr voice. you should speak more effectively. barbecue/ˈbɑːr.bɪ.kju/ː, quality/ˈkwɒl.ɪ.ti/or/ˈkwɑː.lə.t ̬i were said wrongly. you told us the place very well. very beautiful place.
rıdvan ı think your music is good but it isnt suitable for your speech. but ı liked your video. your pictures are really good to introduce this place. as to your pronounciation mistakes, you mispronounced some words such as barbecue, development and available.
I wanted to dance because of the music u clubber:)) Anyway, temperature and barbecue weremispronounced ı think and ı wish you had spoken livelier. Your voice didn't suite your music:( Good music!
it is some irritating because of the recorder but generally it is good. you should speak more lively.
ReplyDeletetemprature is the only mistake in your pronunciation i heard. it is good but rıdwan the music is a bit high :))
ReplyDeleteyour music wakes me up, good choice but it is a bit higher than your voice.your intonation is really good. and your voice is clear.speak more lively.
ReplyDeleteı liked your video you intonate the sentences effectively but ı wish you had turn off the voice of music ıt would have been very good
ReplyDeletethe music is perfect,but ı think it isnt appropriate. because it is not in harmony with yr voice.music is hgher than yr voice. you should speak more effectively. barbecue/ˈbɑːr.bɪ.kju/ː, quality/ˈkwɒl.ɪ.ti/or/ˈkwɑː.lə.t ̬i were said wrongly. you told us the place very well. very beautiful place.
ReplyDeletemusic is good but your voice isn't clear enough,ı think.also,video is interesting with your music:)well done.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is in harmony with your music, I couldn't catch any mistake good job. cong.
ReplyDeleteThe music is a bit higher than your voice. But I liked your video and your intonation. It was prepared well.
ReplyDeleteYou chose a good music. Yet it is a bit high. also you have some pronunciaton mistakes such as "kingdom" and "chance".
ReplyDeleteintonation is good however I cannot say same thing for the recording :( but I could not catch any clear mistakes in pronunciation
ReplyDeleteYour presentation is good but Your woice should be a bit higher than the music. ıt is a good work.
ReplyDeleteI liked your music and photos.But your voice isnt so audible because of your recorder.generally it is a nice video.
ReplyDeletegenerally your video is good. But your voice is not very clear because of your recorder.
ReplyDeleteyour photos are wonderful, your music is also good but isn't harmonious with your speech
ReplyDeleteUr music choice is great dear friend. U've got it ;) I liked the video in general. good job
ReplyDeletetemperature is wrongly pronounced and your music is fantastic ı liked it :)
ReplyDeleterıdvan ı think your music is good but it isnt suitable for your speech. but ı liked your video. your pictures are really good to introduce this place. as to your pronounciation mistakes, you mispronounced some words such as barbecue, development and available.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to dance because of the music u clubber:)) Anyway, temperature and barbecue weremispronounced ı think and ı wish you had spoken livelier. Your voice didn't suite your music:( Good music!
ReplyDeletewhat a lively music but if you spoke more lively, it would be more suitable. your photos are good.
ReplyDeleteyour voice should have been a bit higher but in general I like your ıntonation and pronunciation
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