his accent is incomprehensible and there is no intonation in his speech.he speaks hoarsely especially while he is finishing his speech.he starts with music but music lasts long. his pictures are good.
the enterance of the video is too long. he speaks so fast and unfluently. there are some pronounciation mistakes. ı feel like you are reading from somewhere. your intonatioan is bad in general. the video didnt persuade me to go there.
rahman you are speaking too fast.there is no intonation. you are talking as if you were reading an informative speech by yourself. in addition, you mispronounced some words like observing, anatolian and astronomy
why did you keep the music long at the beginning? You speak really too fast which prevents me from understanding all by watching just once. You dont use intonations or stresses at all.
i searched for the word "medresse" but couldnt find it, there are "Medresseh or madrasa" for what you mean.you said column, rather wrongly. you spoke soo fast that i really had difficulty in understanding and then evaluating the sentences. your speech may be slower.
ı agree with my friends that your speech was too fast it was hard to chatch your sentences and you han some pronouncation mistakes like coloum, medresse
it is a long entrance.and you should speak slowly for us to understand you clearly.also you should pay attention to your intonation. ı caught only one wrong word,astronomy,however the video is well but you could do better.
Wow..too fast speech. ı couldnt understand some parts of it. you should add some intonation and get it slower friend. its a good example of informative speech. and you kept saying "column" incorrectly.pls pay attention to these friend :)
Yes,he's speaking fast but i liked the video because of its photos. They're quite good and well-chosen. I don't think he could pronounce ''door and meter'' properly. İ think there is more left but i couldn't decide if they are ok. And one of the thing that I got; he should have pronouns instead of repeat the same words. Good..
you are very fast you should pay attention to make intonations. you made a grammar mistake "there are eight door" you should say doors, and you mispronounce the word "door" it should be pronounced as /dɔr/ not /dur/ and the word "small" should be pronounced as /smɔːl/ not /smal/
However you speak too fast you present a variety of information about the place.. your photos are really attractive and you do not pronounce some words correctly...
I wish you had started earlier.Music lasts 40 seconds. speech is a bit fast.Photos are good and in harmony with your speech. In general it is a good work.
Altough your pictures are attractive, you spoke very fast and you didn't use intonations. I think your music at the beginning is unnecessary. ınstead of this, you could use it while speaking. you paused unnecessarily.
You spoke fastly.Yet I like your music in spite of being a bit long .I also like your pictures. There are some pauses.If only you didn't use thesee pauses.
you are so fast. but in fact your speech is fine. you should slow down as you give information. There are a few pronounciation mistakes. the musics in the beginning and at the beginning are different. ı think the last one is more relevant for a medrese
I couldn't catch many of the sentences because you know you are speaking a bit fast:( and you started the speech after fortieth seconds, it is late I think but your photos and music is well.
music is too long. You needn't have to use it so long. You are talking fast. Madrasah, column are said wrong. I think you must study intonation immediately and I didn't catch many parts of it. :(
you start your speech after waiting 40 seconds, which is not good for your video.. you should speak a bit more loudlier and use a theme music... you are really fluent and pictures are great..
you speak very fast, so it is hard to catch the words.. you should be pauses between sentencess...there are some pronunciation mistake such as door and small..
You should have start earlier. In the beginning you were fast but it was ok then. The voice is so clear which I liked the most but pay attention to intonation.
your voice is low and you speak fluently sometimes ı couldn t understand. you had some grammar and pronounciation mistakes however your photos and the music are good
Your speech is really too fast, I couldn't understand some parts of it.There are some words said wrongly.For example'cosrtuct,period,decoration and column.'You should be more careful about the intonation.
thank you for advices.ı will do my second video considering this advices.but some guys said 'ı didn't understand the speech'. I spoke too fast but I think it is understandable. some guys also says 'there is no intontion at all' :)It is impossible. at least they didnt say there is no video at all:) thanks again. my second video will be good thanks to your advices.
century was pronouncued.you stopped between some sentencess unnecessarily.it would be better if u had spoken attractively and in a way that fits with the intonations.photos were well chosen
THe speech is incomprehensible and very very fast. I could not understand it.
ReplyDeletehe starts his speech after 40 seconds. I think he should starts earlier. I couldn't hear his voice properly.
ReplyDeletehis accent is incomprehensible and there is no intonation in his speech.he speaks hoarsely especially while he is finishing his speech.he starts with music but music lasts long. his pictures are good.
ReplyDeleteHe starts to speak very late. I think his intonation should be better.
ReplyDeletehis voice is too low to be heard, that's to say he could speak a bit louder. apart from that the video is good in my opinion.
ReplyDeletethe speech was very fast and ı had difficulty in understanding the video.his voice is also very low.
ReplyDeleteThere is no intonation. You spoke very fast so I couldn't get in what you said.Also, some words were pronunced wrong.
ReplyDeletehe waits very much before starting his presentation and his speech is very fast and his voice is not so audible
ReplyDeletethe enterance of the video is too long. he speaks so fast and unfluently. there are some pronounciation mistakes. ı feel like you are reading from somewhere. your intonatioan is bad in general. the video didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteyou start to speak late. you speak very fast. you should have paid attention to intonation
ReplyDeleteI am sorry I couldn't catch up with your speech to make a comment but the video is well prepared.
ReplyDeleterahman you are speaking too fast.there is no intonation. you are talking as if you were reading an informative speech by yourself. in addition, you mispronounced some words like observing, anatolian and astronomy
ReplyDeletewhy did you keep the music long at the beginning? You speak really too fast which prevents me from understanding all by watching just once. You dont use intonations or stresses at all.
ReplyDeletei searched for the word "medresse" but couldnt find it, there are "Medresseh or madrasa" for what you mean.you said column, rather wrongly. you spoke soo fast that i really had difficulty in understanding and then evaluating the sentences. your speech may be slower.
ReplyDeleteı agree with my friends that your speech was too fast it was hard to chatch your sentences and you han some pronouncation mistakes like coloum, medresse
ReplyDeleteit is a long entrance.and you should speak slowly for us to understand you clearly.also you should pay attention to your intonation. ı caught only one wrong word,astronomy,however the video is well but you could do better.
ReplyDeleteWow..too fast speech. ı couldnt understand some parts of it. you should add some intonation and get it slower friend. its a good example of informative speech. and you kept saying "column" incorrectly.pls pay attention to these friend :)
ReplyDeleteYes,he's speaking fast but i liked the video because of its photos. They're quite good and well-chosen. I don't think he could pronounce ''door and meter'' properly. İ think there is more left but i couldn't decide if they are ok. And one of the thing that I got; he should have pronouns instead of repeat the same words. Good..
ReplyDeleteHis speech was too fast so I couldn't understand many parts of the video exactly but in my opinion 'column' was said wrong.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is too fast. You could pay attention to your intonation. The photographs are good.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't hear exactly what he said because he talks fast.But i can say that there were no intonation at all.
ReplyDeleteHis voice was too low ,so it wasn't audible for me.I couldn't understand some words but his photos were very good .I liked them.
ReplyDeleteMr.Saglam speaks fastly but the music and the pictures are attractive
ReplyDeleteyou are very fast you should pay attention to make intonations. you made a grammar mistake "there are eight door" you should say doors, and you mispronounce the word "door" it should be pronounced as /dɔr/ not /dur/ and the word "small" should be pronounced as /smɔːl/ not /smal/
ReplyDeleteHowever you speak too fast you present a variety of information about the place.. your photos are really attractive and you do not pronounce some words correctly...
ReplyDeleteI wish you had started earlier.Music lasts 40 seconds. speech is a bit fast.Photos are good and in harmony with your speech. In general it is a good work.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is fast and this make the video difficult to understant but photos and music are well chosen
ReplyDeleteı agree with friends, he speaks fastly and some words mispronounced.but with photos and music it is good job.
ReplyDeletethe speech was too fast so I couldn't understand many parts of the video. bur there are some words o which pronounciation were wrong. :(
ReplyDeleteAltough your pictures are attractive, you spoke very fast and you didn't use intonations. I think your music at the beginning is unnecessary. ınstead of this, you could use it while speaking. you paused unnecessarily.
ReplyDeleteDespite of the fact that content and your photos are enchanting,you spoke very fast.Intonation could be used better.Best regards:)
ReplyDeleteYou spoke fastly.Yet I like your music in spite of being a bit long .I also like your pictures. There are some pauses.If only you didn't use thesee pauses.
ReplyDeleteyou are so fast. but in fact your speech is fine. you should slow down as you give information. There are a few pronounciation mistakes. the musics in the beginning and at the beginning are different. ı think the last one is more relevant for a medrese
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch many of the sentences because you know you are speaking a bit fast:( and you started the speech after fortieth seconds, it is late I think but your photos and music is well.
ReplyDeleteHe begins to talk too late. His speech is very fast. He could have pay attention to pronouncation more.
ReplyDeleteI am soory but I didn't catch the sppech,too. so, I coudln't understand the pronouncation.but I realized that there was no intonation in your sppech.
ReplyDeletemusic is too long. You needn't have to use it so long. You are talking fast. Madrasah, column are said wrong. I think you must study intonation immediately and I didn't catch many parts of it. :(
ReplyDeleteyou start your speech after waiting 40 seconds, which is not good for your video.. you should speak a bit more loudlier and use a theme music... you are really fluent and pictures are great..
ReplyDeleteI wish he hadn't spoken very fast. His sayings weren't understood easily and clearly.
ReplyDeleteyou speak very fast, so it is hard to catch the words.. you should be pauses between sentencess...there are some pronunciation mistake such as door and small..
ReplyDeletethe speech is not good.voice is hoarse.speaker speaks so fast,its hard to follow and understand his words.
ReplyDeleteYou should have start earlier. In the beginning you were fast but it was ok then. The voice is so clear which I liked the most but pay attention to intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is low and you speak fluently sometimes ı couldn t understand. you had some grammar and pronounciation mistakes however your photos and the music are good
ReplyDeletethere is some points but I think they are not important.also you should correct construct, enourmous and symbolize
ReplyDeleteYour speech is really too fast, I couldn't understand some parts of it.There are some words said wrongly.For example'cosrtuct,period,decoration and column.'You should be more careful about the intonation.
ReplyDeletethe speech should be slower and intonation should be better.the speech is a bit smooth
ReplyDeleteI did not understand why you started to speak late.You could start earlier.You should be careful about your intonaiton.THANKS
ReplyDeleteyou speak vey fluently I liked your video and pictures good work congratulations;)
ReplyDeletethank you for advices.ı will do my second video considering this advices.but some guys said 'ı didn't understand the speech'. I spoke too fast but I think it is understandable. some guys also says 'there is no intontion at all' :)It is impossible. at least they didnt say there is no video at all:) thanks again. my second video will be good thanks to your advices.
ReplyDeletecentury was pronouncued.you stopped between some sentencess unnecessarily.it would be better if u had spoken attractively and in a way that fits with the intonations.photos were well chosen
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very fast so ı cannot understand some parts. However ı think your intonation is not bad. ı will go Kırşehir to visit there
ReplyDeleteyou should speak a bit slower. ı agree with u its understandable.yr speech is clear and fluent. you say astronomy like in turkish ı think its wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou speak vey fast because of this, I couldn't understand you ver clearly:(
ReplyDeleteYour speech is very fast... You begin your speech in 40 seconds, that makes the video a bit boring... Anyway, it is a good video. Thank you Rahman!
ReplyDeleteyou spoke too fast.i cant follow you. you could have given less details by speakiing slowly.the words cosrtuct,enourmous.. are mispronounced.
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