her voice is horsee ı couldnt understand everyword what she said. miracle, talent, constructions, mountain, kilometers are pronounced wrongly. intonation is well in general. photos axplain the topic. it has a fluency like speaking in daily life i like it. but quality of voice must be improved. all in all unfortunately it didnt persuade me to go there.
ı think you could have spoken more fluently. there are long pauses between every word. intonation is good. you informed the place very well and ı think there is no pronunciation mistakes. overall it is a good job
your intonation is good and the orders of the informations are well prepared. However I couldnt understand some of your speech. Kilometer and meter are pronounced wrong.
ı couldn't understand some parts because of the hoarse voice.but generally presentation well organized. there are some pauses that prevents its running.your intonation is well.but you mispronounced some words such as construction and meter.
it wasn't a bad video but some parts couldnt be understood. at the beginning of 3rd minute ur sentences lacked of fluency but then improved. "monastery and meter" are the wrong pronounciations i heard.
tthe photos you chose are reaaly good to describe there .however,ı had difficulty in understanding some words.ı think ıt stems from your recorder .anyway,it was good in general
It is a good presentation except of fast speech.Using transition words is very nice.Yet there some words mispronounced. Also I like your music and photos.
Although it is good in general but she mispronounced '' 33,monastery,impressed'' and by the way; is ''Simon''really pronounced like that?? I think it's not correct but not sure..
I didn't understand your speech clearly. Maybe, this problem results from your recorder.Still,kilometers and meters are wrongly pronounced.Using transition signals are a good idea.Also,you are speaking fluently but a bit fast.You could be better if you spoke slower.Have a nice day,my dear friend :)
your voice is clear and you speak fluently ı think you have some mistakes suc as kilometer,mountain,monestry you say these words wrongly. ı liked your video in general esp photos well done thanks :)
it is hard to hear because the record is bad, so I couldn't catch any mistake. and I think it is good for you :). but as I could hear your intonation is good
I think there must be a problem in her recorder.Therefore,I couldn't understand some parts of the video and miracle,kilometer, mountain were mispronounced.but in general she spoke fluently.If her recorder had been better, her presentaion could have been better.
I have difficulty in understanding due to sound recorder.you started in a wrong way you shouldn't have done. Yes Maviş, I looked up Simon.it is spelled as /saɪmən/ or /siˈmɔ̃n/ she said it in correct way.You should watch out your voice to intonate the words properly.
the low of quality of the sound makes your video look amateurish but your intonation changes depending on the sentences which is so good.. I could not find any striking pronunciation mistake..
thank you friends for your comments.ı will take into consideration your thoughts.yes you are right ı spelled some words incorrectly,but in my second presentation ı will pay attention to your cautions.ın generally ı lıked my presentation ı hope ı persuaded you to visit our city and its historical places:)
You corrected the words in your speech, but you should cut these parts. Apart from this and scratchy sound caused by recorder, there is no problem with your presentation. Anyway, I like it. Thank you Esra!
I liked the way she pronounced the words and the transitions she used such as ‘At first, now let’s talk about’ etc.
ReplyDeleteher voice is horsee ı couldnt understand everyword what she said. miracle, talent, constructions, mountain, kilometers are pronounced wrongly. intonation is well in general. photos axplain the topic. it has a fluency like speaking in daily life i like it. but quality of voice must be improved. all in all unfortunately it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteI think the quality of the recorder is not good,because it is hard to hear some words she said.
ReplyDeletethe intonation and the information are very good, but it is difficult to understand some words because of the recorder.
ReplyDeleteI think your presentation is good but your voice is very low. The intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteı think you could have spoken more fluently. there are long pauses between every word. intonation is good. you informed the place very well and ı think there is no pronunciation mistakes. overall it is a good job
ReplyDeleteShe intonated the sentences correctly but she mispronounced 'kilometres' and parts of the video is not clear enough to understand.
ReplyDeleteI cannot hear words clearly but found, construction and meter are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good and the orders of the informations are well prepared. However I couldnt understand some of your speech. Kilometer and meter are pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation was good and your speech was effective your photos were in harmony with your speech
ReplyDeleteı couldn't understand some parts because of the hoarse voice.but generally presentation well organized. there are some pauses that prevents its running.your intonation is well.but you mispronounced some words such as construction and meter.
ReplyDeleteIn general I liked your video, but you could speak louder. Though I caught the same pronunciation mistakes, the video is good.
ReplyDeleteit wasn't a bad video but some parts couldnt be understood. at the beginning of 3rd minute ur sentences lacked of fluency but then improved. "monastery and meter" are the wrong pronounciations i heard.
ReplyDeletei think your voice can be heard easily. but every part of speech cannot be understood clearly.
ReplyDeleteYour speech isn't clear due to the bad recorder.Also, High voice doesn't mean intonation. you could focus on intonation much more.
ReplyDeleteHer pronunciation sounds good and I liked her sentence intonations.I think she uses word stresses in the right places.
ReplyDeletefast speech but intonation good I think. although there are some words mispronounced, it is good.
ReplyDeletetthe photos you chose are reaaly good to describe there .however,ı had difficulty in understanding some words.ı think ıt stems from your recorder .anyway,it was good in general
ReplyDeleteIt was not bad. Your intonation, voice is distinct apart from in some parts. You pronuenced the words well except from the word monastery.
ReplyDeleteyour photos and music is nice but your voice recorder is not good. it is irritating.nevertheless,in general,it is good.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good presentation except of fast speech.Using transition words is very nice.Yet there some words mispronounced. Also I like your music and photos.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but you pronounce the word "monastry" wrongly but your music is really a very good-chosen one
ReplyDeleteusing intonation,transtition words are very successful.regardless of some faults, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteAlthough it is good in general but she mispronounced '' 33,monastery,impressed'' and by the way; is ''Simon''really pronounced like that?? I think it's not correct but not sure..
ReplyDeleteI didn't understand your speech clearly. Maybe, this problem results from your recorder.Still,kilometers and meters are wrongly pronounced.Using transition signals are a good idea.Also,you are speaking fluently but a bit fast.You could be better if you spoke slower.Have a nice day,my dear friend :)
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear and you speak fluently ı think you have some mistakes suc as kilometer,mountain,monestry you say these words wrongly. ı liked your video in general esp photos well done thanks :)
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand what she said. She spoke very fast. there were some pronounciation mistakes such as meter,kilometer
ReplyDeleteThough there are some mispronunced words, your intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteit is hard to hear because the record is bad, so I couldn't catch any mistake. and I think it is good for you :). but as I could hear your intonation is good
ReplyDeleteyour voice a bit low but your intonation is good also your informations are enough
ReplyDeleteconstruction, monastry and meter are wrongly pronounced. her pronounciation is good. I liked her transitions.
ReplyDeleteSome words such as 'mountain' 'talent' 'kilometer'are pronounced wrongly. I couldn't understand every word she says.
ReplyDeleteThere is an echo in your video.Although there are some mispronunciations, as a whole i liked your speech and intonation
ReplyDeletesome parts of your video are inaudible but your music and photos are suitable...
ReplyDeletethere is an echo and that is so irritating but except a few mispronunced words it is good
ReplyDeleteYour pronounciation is ok and it is good that you use transitions well. But voice is of low quality, unfortunately.
ReplyDeleteI think there must be a problem in her recorder.Therefore,I couldn't understand some parts of the video and miracle,kilometer, mountain were mispronounced.but in general she spoke fluently.If her recorder had been better, her presentaion could have been better.
ReplyDelete1.04- "kilometers" is mispronounced. and your voice is not audible mate. you use ur intonation good enough, ı think. tnx.
ReplyDeleteI have difficulty in understanding due to sound recorder.you started in a wrong way you shouldn't have done. Yes Maviş, I looked up Simon.it is spelled as /saɪmən/ or /siˈmɔ̃n/ she said it in correct way.You should watch out your voice to intonate the words properly.
ReplyDeleteit was a little hard to understand, becase the record was not good..there was not any striking mistakes l found.
ReplyDeletethe low of quality of the sound makes your video look amateurish but your intonation changes depending on the sentences which is so good.. I could not find any striking pronunciation mistake..
ReplyDeletethe voice isn't clear but the intonation is good.
ReplyDeletealthough voice is low, as I could hear intonation is good and the speech is fluent
ReplyDeleteAs I could hear the words 'meters and exist'were misspelled,but in general I liked the video.It is persuasive.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video but the quality of the voice recorder makes your speech hard to catch congratulations;)
ReplyDeletekilometers and mountain were pronounced incorrectly.you spek fluentand pictures are good
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently but voice isnt clear . construction,meters were said wrongly
ReplyDeleteyou liked your pronounce. you are speaking fluently. I don't know how to pronounce Simon. e xcept for some pronounce mistakes, it is good.
ReplyDeleteI think there is a problem with your recorder but your intonation is good
ReplyDeleteyour voice should be higher but I like your intonation you give the sense of persuasive speech.
ReplyDeleteI agree asıye it is persuasive it is good
ReplyDeletethank you friends for your comments.ı will take into consideration your thoughts.yes you are right ı spelled some words incorrectly,but in my second presentation ı will pay attention to your cautions.ın generally ı lıked my presentation ı hope ı persuaded you to visit our city and its historical places:)
ReplyDeleteYou corrected the words in your speech, but you should cut these parts. Apart from this and scratchy sound caused by recorder, there is no problem with your presentation. Anyway, I like it. Thank you Esra!
ReplyDeleteexcept from your sound recorderi think you have achieved presenting it
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