Mosque is wrongly pronounced."this complex has been done." is wrong, has is not used here. North, south and east is wrongly pronounced.Construction is wronly pronounced.The beginning and end are sudden.
the pronunciatio of mosque is wrong. he speaks with a low voice pitch. however he explains his topic with details and these makes the listeners to learn more about that place in that respect it is a good presentation
complex, situated, restored, mosque, bazaar, kitchen are the words pronounced wrongly. your intonation isnt changing anywhere in the video. you didnt speak fluently. it didnt persuade me to go there.
he has some pronunciation mistakes such as area,mosque,entrance,construction...his voice is a bit low,he could speak in an effective voice. in addition,there is no music.
there are a few mispronounced words such as complex, mosque, surround, accomodation, square. but when we look at your pictures, they are very clear and you explain this place successfully.
You sound as if you're a robot. You could have used the intonations. You have pronunciation mistakes such as mosque, attention, square,and accommodation. You also have grammar mistakes.
you should beutify your video with a music an introduction part and a jeneric may be. your tone lacks of effectiveness,too. ı heard some grammatical mistakes like that one:the complex HAS been done IN 1575 and 1575. also there are some pronouniation mistakes: situated, mosque,caravan,community,north adn south
your voice is not audible.and if you added a music this video, then, would be more attracting.also you pronounced some words such as south, restored and mosque.and ı could not understand why the video finished suddenly.you could do better.
at 0.24 u say "kitchen" and ı heard as "kiTchen". you pronounce the "T" ı guess. Also, ı couldnt hear any intonation. you should pay attetion to that. your voice is low and stable.
your voice is low and you could speak more lively. Hoever you talked about your place in a detail way and you used your photographs according to your speech and these were good.
you speak fluently in your video, but you could speak louder. you could use your intonation more effectivelly. the photos and your speech were in harmony, though.
I think you should be spoken more fluently.There are some words which are mispronounced. These are mosque,kitchen,women and area but your presentation's content is well organized.
you mispronounced the word 'mosque' continuously. also, community, accommodation,north and high are misprononuced. you should improve your speaking and intonation. you have better pay attention not to speak in a smooth way.
the speech is not bad.but there is no effective use of intonations and there are some mispronounced words like: mosque,community ,situated, caravan etc.
it is good but if u had not spoken at the same tone it would be better.it end like how u stardedil hope u see what l mean.l think there is wrong with mosque.
your voice is too low and there is almost no tonation in your speech.Also you should pay attentiion to pronounciation ,because the words 'build,mosque,condition'were misspelled.if you speak more vividly,it would be better,I think.
you speak a bit slow but your speech is clear and I like your intonation.You should be careful while pronuncing some words such as complex,mosque.thank you
: you are starting to speak with the start of video it is not good I think. Situated and mosgue are pronounced incorrectly.pictures are good and except this mistakes it is a good work.
thanks for all your comments and suggestions as you said my voice is low because of the voice recorder and yes there are some pronounciation mistakes but the photos are really good also the informations that I gave and the photos are in harmony. I will try to be better at the second presentation
Firstly, you should pause at the begging of the video... You start as sson as the video starts. You should change this. Anyway, the rest is good and I understood nearly all the sentences you said. Thank you Yakup!
Mosque is wrongly pronounced."this complex has been done." is wrong, has is not used here. North, south and east is wrongly pronounced.Construction is wronly pronounced.The beginning and end are sudden.
ReplyDeletewideness, square and accommodation are wrongly pronounced.
ReplyDeleteHis voice isn't audible and there are some pronunciation mistakes such as; mosque.
ReplyDeleteit would be better if he paid attention to intonation and the pronounciation of some words his voice is very slow
ReplyDeleteYour voice is too low. Also, your intonation could be better. There are some pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDelete'mosque' word was pronounced wrongly. he started and finished suddenly.I couldn't hear exactly because of his low voice.
ReplyDeletethe pronunciatio of mosque is wrong. he speaks with a low voice pitch. however he explains his topic with details and these makes the listeners to learn more about that place in that respect it is a good presentation
ReplyDeletecomplex, situated, restored, mosque, bazaar, kitchen are the words pronounced wrongly. your intonation isnt changing anywhere in the video. you didnt speak fluently. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletehe has some pronunciation mistakes such as area,mosque,entrance,construction...his voice is a bit low,he could speak in an effective voice. in addition,there is no music.
ReplyDeleteyou speak monotonously from the beginning to the finish. mosque is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteas the other people mentioned there are mistakes in pronunciation but intonation is okey
ReplyDeletethere are a few mispronounced words such as complex, mosque, surround, accomodation, square. but when we look at your pictures, they are very clear and you explain this place successfully.
ReplyDeleteYou sound as if you're a robot. You could have used the intonations. You have pronunciation mistakes such as mosque, attention, square,and accommodation. You also have grammar mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyou should beutify your video with a music an introduction part and a jeneric may be. your tone lacks of effectiveness,too. ı heard some grammatical mistakes like that one:the complex HAS been done IN 1575 and 1575. also there are some pronouniation mistakes: situated, mosque,caravan,community,north adn south
ReplyDeleteyour voice was too low so ı couldn't understand clearly what you said and your speech was not pesuasive
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not audible.and if you added a music this video, then, would be more attracting.also you pronounced some words such as south, restored and mosque.and ı could not understand why the video finished suddenly.you could do better.
ReplyDeleteat 0.24 u say "kitchen" and ı heard as "kiTchen". you pronounce the "T" ı guess. Also, ı couldnt hear any intonation. you should pay attetion to that. your voice is low and stable.
ReplyDeletealthough the fluency is good,there are so many pronunciation mistakes like condition,mosque,kitchen etc.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is low and you could speak more lively. Hoever you talked about your place in a detail way and you used your photographs according to your speech and these were good.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently in your video, but you could speak louder. you could use your intonation more effectivelly. the photos and your speech were in harmony, though.
ReplyDeleteI think you should be spoken more fluently.There are some words which are mispronounced. These are mosque,kitchen,women and area but your presentation's content is well organized.
ReplyDelete'condition' is mispronounced but his words is clear and the pictures are attractive
ReplyDeleteAs some friends made,his voice was too low to hear for me.And ther are some wrong prounced words such as mosque and kitchen.
ReplyDeletegenerally good but you can pay more attention to intonation, and you mispronounced the word "mosque" you should pronounce it as /mɒsk/ not /moskio/.
ReplyDeletein general, the photos are attractive and your intonation is well... but the video is lack of music and there are some pronunciations mistakes..
ReplyDeleteYou should speak with the high voice.Using a slow music muc better to make the presentation more effective.I like your photoss.
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking a bit low.some words such as mosgue are pronounced wrong.the photos are clear to see them.the speech is fluent.
ReplyDeletemosque is misprounced.your voice is okey photos are in harmony with the speech.
ReplyDeleteYou should use intonation. Also you could have spoken a bit more loudly.Apart from these, the video is well-prepared and the photos are attractive.
ReplyDeletethe pronounciation of mosque and condition were wrong. And you should spek with a high voice. part from these it is a goodpresentation I think.
ReplyDeleteYour voice must be high and there are some pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteintonation can be better. some words pronounced wrongly such as mosque,north. but generally with photos it is a good job.
ReplyDeleteyou mispronounced the word 'mosque' continuously. also, community, accommodation,north and high are misprononuced. you should improve your speaking and intonation. you have better pay attention not to speak in a smooth way.
ReplyDeleteYour voice tone is well but you say 'mosque and surrounded'wrongly.Maybe you should't start and finish the speech suddenly.
ReplyDeletePronouncation of the word ' mosque' is not true. He should have talked a bit louder.
ReplyDeletethe word was pronounced wrongly...you voice of tone is well.. and also the word ottoman a bit problematic
ReplyDeleteI think you should pay attention both your intonation and pronounciation. ıf you spoke fluent, it would be effective with the photos.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is so slow that I couldnt understand some parts of the video. you should talk fluently. did you realize that you pronounced mosque wrong?
ReplyDeleteyou should speak lively not to distract us.. your intonation should be improved but your pictures are well-chosen..
ReplyDeletethe speech is not bad.but there is no effective use of intonations and there are some mispronounced words like:
ReplyDeletemosque,community ,situated, caravan etc.
There were many details, this bothered me while listening..you should pay more attention to intonation..
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronounciation mistakes and your voice is too low. It would be better but liked the photos.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently but you say the word kitchen in a dfferent way :)) the photos are detailed you give information ıt ıs good in general
ReplyDeleteit is good but if u had not spoken at the same tone it would be better.it end like how u stardedil hope u see what l mean.l think there is wrong with mosque.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too low and there is almost no tonation in your speech.Also you should pay attentiion to pronounciation ,because the words
ReplyDelete'build,mosque,condition'were misspelled.if you speak more vividly,it would be better,I think.
the speech is a bit low and smooth, the intonation should be better, also mosque and condition is clearly mispronounced
ReplyDeleteyakup please check "condition, classical, complex and construction" again.
ReplyDeleteyou speak a bit slow but your speech is clear and I like your intonation.You should be careful while pronuncing some words such as complex,mosque.thank you
ReplyDelete: you are starting to speak with the start of video it is not good I think. Situated and mosgue are pronounced incorrectly.pictures are good and except this mistakes it is a good work.
ReplyDeletedespite some pronounciation mistakes I liked the whole cong;)
ReplyDeletethere are some words pronounced wrongly such as mosque. However ı like your presentation.
ReplyDeletethanks for all your comments and suggestions
ReplyDeleteas you said my voice is low because of the voice recorder and yes there are some pronounciation mistakes but the photos are really good also the informations that I gave and the photos are in harmony. I will try to be better at the second presentation
you speak very calmly generally its ok mosque , south and surrounded were said wrongly
ReplyDelete'mosque' is a wrong pronouncation and his voice is low sometimes I couldn't understand you very clearly
ReplyDeleteFirstly, you should pause at the begging of the video... You start as sson as the video starts. You should change this. Anyway, the rest is good and I understood nearly all the sentences you said. Thank you Yakup!
ReplyDeleteyour photos are very clear and impressing.ıf you pay attention to your intonation much more, it will be better to my opinion.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is a bit slow i think. at first you shouldn't start so fastly.the words complex, nosque are nispronounced.the pictures are good
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