Your photos and information you gave are really good. But, if you speak more lively you could make your presentation better. You should pay attention to your intonation.
music choice is incredibly very good. there isn't any pronunciation mistake. although you can do better in means of intonation it's much better from your first video. congratulations.
you inform us but dont try to persuade us to go there, this is what your video basically lacks. you should try to speak a bit more lively. the rest was excellent! :)
your pronunciation is good. there are few mistakes. for example, history and figure. as to your intonation, it could be better. but your video is good. the pictures and the music are effective:)
I liked the music very much,it is very effective and it is in a great harmony with the pictures. I don't think there are pronounciation mistakes but you could be more careful about intonation,In general,it is a good video.
Your speech was full of informations and you dont use intonations that effectively to make the video a lot more attractive. 'away' is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteI could not catch any mistake but you should speak lively and use intonation.
ReplyDeletei didnt hear any mistakes but the speech is poor in intonation.
ReplyDeleteı couldn't catch any pronunciation mistakes but you should improve your intonation.
ReplyDeleteYour photos and information you gave are really good. But, if you speak more lively you could make your presentation better. You should pay attention to your intonation.
ReplyDeleteit is really informative,but you should improve your intonation.
ReplyDeleteyr tune is good,but you should speak more lively.surrounded was said wrongly.
ReplyDeleteI like your intonation and pronunciation, but there are few unneccesary pauses.
ReplyDeletemusic choice is incredibly very good. there isn't any pronunciation mistake. although you can do better in means of intonation it's much better from your first video. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteI think your pronunciation is very good. you prepared your video very well. Please pay attention to intonation a bit more.
ReplyDeleteit is a good presentation but you must have been much more lively.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronunciation is good...there are minor mistakes in ur pronunciaiton in general it is a good one...
ReplyDeleteyou inform us but dont try to persuade us to go there, this is what your video basically lacks. you should try to speak a bit more lively. the rest was excellent! :)
ReplyDeleteYour intonation and your pronunciaion are good.But music and photos are in harmonious.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear , pictures are great and there is no problem with pronunciation but be careful about intonation...
ReplyDeleteYou should improve your intonation.Apart from this, you pronunced the words correctly.
ReplyDeleteif you paid more attention your intonation, I am sure it is much more succesful video because apart from this I couldnt any mistake
ReplyDeleteI can say that her pronounciation was good but If she had used the intonation ,the video could hve been better .
ReplyDeletegenerally it is a good presentation but you must pay more attention to your intonation
ReplyDeleteyou inform us in the video and it is really effective.with a better intonation it would be better,ı think.
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is good but you should pay attetion to intonation.In general, it is a good job.
ReplyDeleteThere is no major pronounciation mistakes. But ıf only you could have spoken lively. Good job!
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is good. there are few mistakes. for example, history and figure. as to your intonation, it could be better. but your video is good. the pictures and the music are effective:)
ReplyDeleteusing intonation would be more effective the speech, ı love your information, music and photos :D
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is really a good one but ıntonation should be more effective I like the information you gave good job my honey:)
ReplyDeleteI liked the music very much,it is very effective and it is in a great harmony with the pictures. I don't think there are pronounciation mistakes but you could be more careful about intonation,In general,it is a good video.
ReplyDeletea bit fast speech and a lively music are more suitabe for your video. However it is very informative for us who wants to see there.
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