your video is well prepared if only you added music while talking not only at the begining.shortly ı liked your video but you pronounced the word amazed wrongly except this it is perfect.
your intonation is generally good but you mispronounced some words. for example, among, about and building. apart from these problems, ı liked your video. but maybe you could have added a music.
If you had used a background music it could have been better. generally it is good I could not catch any mistake. congratulations
ReplyDeletei liked your speech and the informations you gave. the only mistake you did is "ancestor"
ReplyDeleteyour video is well prepared if only you added music while talking not only at the begining.shortly ı liked your video but you pronounced the word amazed wrongly except this it is perfect.
ReplyDeleteyr voice is clear and understandble. you speak fluently. byzantine, exhibit are the mispronunced words.
ReplyDelete'Listening':s the speech is fluent and i liked your video.ancestor is the mispronounced word that i caught but generally good.cong.:)
ReplyDeleteancestor should be pronounced as /ænsestər/ the rest is good I think. cong.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures and your voice are good. You used intonation well. It was a well-prepared project.Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteYou should have paid attention to fluency and you pronounced "ancestor" incorrectly. Except these, you have a good video. Cong. ;)
ReplyDeleteexcept bad recording everything is well coordinated and succesfull;)
ReplyDeleteYour voice sometimes isnt so audible.I thinh this stems from your recorder.But your video and photos worth seiing certainly.
ReplyDeleteYour video is good, but if you added music, it would be better. In general, you speak fluently.
ReplyDeletegenerally your video is good. There are some mispronunced words,however.
ReplyDeletephotos and your voice tone is effective except in some parts,it isnt audible enough but in all its good,cong.
ReplyDeleteUr intonation and pronunciation were good in general. Good job
ReplyDeleteyour voice is irritating and ancestor is said wrong but your photos are attractive.generally it is not bad
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is generally good but you mispronounced some words. for example, among, about and building. apart from these problems, ı liked your video. but maybe you could have added a music.
ReplyDeleteyou gave important information about the place and I like your intonaiton plesa check 'about'
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