Friday, December 18, 2009

Adil Serhan

26 comments:

  1. First of all, I like the background music. While telling some sentences, you speak very fastly. You should read the sentences and words fluently but not very fast. Apart from that, your presentation is very good. I like it. Thank you Adil!

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  2. You speak really fast. Try to give some pauses. Project is mispronounced. But you inform us without boring Adil. well done!

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  3. you should speak slower. music is very nice. allow was said wrongly. it should be /əˈlaʊ/. the rest is good

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  4. you use an effective music it is a fact that you speak a bit fast but except this ı liked the video it is well-done

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  5. i liked everythng about your video from pictures to your tone. no mistakes were heard =)

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  6. firm and construction are mispronounced. you used my music it is a wonderful music :) you should speak fluently. thanks for your effort.

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  7. you should improve your intonation and speak a bit slowly,but your pronounciation is generally well and your photos and music are also in harmony,in order.good job.

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  8. yOU speak fluently and your background music is very good. as ı went to istanbul before,ı am attracted with your video esp your photos. ı dıdn t find any pronounciation mistakes thanks adil :))

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  9. well done adil:)your intonation is much better. ı could not catch so much mispronunciations.thnk you.

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  10. apart from some mispronounced words and speaking fast in some parts, I like your project both music and speech is good but you should pay attention to intonation

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  11. your speech is very attractive intonation is well done. The pictures, the music and your voice are in good harmony. the verbs Construction and Vehicle are mispronounced. good work. cong

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  12. the pictures and music are well coordinated with the speech. your pronunciation and intonation are good but as my other firends mentionaed it would be better if you had talked slower anyway it is a successful work..

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  13. i liked the background music and photos. the way you speak is good and you care about pronunciation. There is only one problem: your voice record.

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  14. I liked your video. Your voice was audible and your intonation was good. Good Job!!!

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  15. There are some pronunciation mistakes yet your intonation is ver ygood. Cong. ;)

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  16. If ony you spoke a bit slowly.But generalyy it is a good video to me.

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  17. your pronunciaiton and intonation are very good but please speak a bit slower for the other time.

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  18. Although you go very fast in some parts of ur speech without using intonation, I can say that I liked ur video in general.

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  19. You spoke very fast in some parts. But in general, your intonation is good.

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  20. you should be slower adil:)but good video,cong:)

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  21. your pictures are well chosen I liked everythng cong=)

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  22. you speak fast and this prevents your intonation. but your music and photos are harmonious. in general, I liked it.

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  23. Your voice recorder is a problem I think. And I wish there hadn't been unnecessary pauses. ''spectacular'' was mispronounced.

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  24. you gave us a lot of information about this bridge. ı liked these informations. you mispronounced some words such as construction, along, allow. as to your intonation, ı think you could have spoken more fluently

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  25. I think there is no problem ın terms of intonation but please check 'allow'

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  26. you are giving a lot of information. you have some unnecessary pauses.

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