your pronounciation is well except for mountains and narrow. ı like your intonation which is well in general but your voice is a little low. you speaks fluently. it persuaded me to go there.
her photos are in harmonious with her speech.her voice is audible but music sound is loud so it is irritating.neighbourhood and narrow words are pronounced wrongly. nevertheless,generally,her presentation is good.
the intonation and pronunciation is great. but there are a few pronuniation mistakes. for example, narrow, available and building in some parts. apart from them, your presentation is really good. you r explaining Tarsus well. congratulations:)
Your speech was fluent and the intonations are used well. The end of the video is rather persuasive. However, you pronounced 'narrow' wrong a few times. I liked it generally.
you should pay attention to your intonation.but ı can understand what you say clearly.ı liked your photes and it organized well. however you pronounced the word narrow wrongly.your strong advice is also persuasive.
ı guess there is a prob. with "of" but apart from this your speech is fluent and has good intonation. ı liked photos. ı am not sure whether ı want to go there or not. :)
I liked your video generally as you intonate your words when it is necessary, there are some mispronounced words, though. Maybe, you could speak louder.
ı liked the music you used on the background a lot.you made some pronounciation mistakes such as buılding,available.anyway,you spoke fluently it was generally good
you speak fluently. ı liked your photos but there are some words such as avaliable and narrow intonated wrongly. anyway ı liked your presentation. well done
the music is very good. the words neighbourhood and and narrow are wrong pronounced your voice pitch is low I think but in general it can be listened to without being bored
music, photos and your voice are in harmony, good work but you can pay more attention to intonation. And you mispronounced the word narrow, you should have pronounced it as /nærəʊ/
Your speech is understandable but in some points the music is higher than your voice.There is a bit pronunciation mistakes in your speech.You tell the old tarsus houses circumstantially.
you are speaking fluently. you could have spoken a bit loudly. I think you pronounced the word availble rigth. I have controled it from dictionary.I also liked your photos. I will try to visit there in a short time.however you have some pronounce mistakes such as local.
I liked your video because I know these houses they are really nice:) fluency is good but you have some pronounciation mistakes such as represent,narrow and authorities.
I like your video which is in harmony with nice photos except your mispronounciation mistakes / narrow, neighbourhood, built/ and unnecessary pauses. Transition signals draw attention.It is good video in general.
the choice of music on the background is very attractive.and maybe there should be a bit higher voice.but there are some mistakes in pronuncation and intonation.please pay attention to them
your pictures are harmonious with your speech but your intonation does not change depending on the nature of the sentence, which is not good for your speech.. the rest was good actually.
the speech is fluent,not bad.the sync with music is good.intonations are effective but there are some remarkable pronounciation mistakes like ''narrow''...
There are some pronounciation mistakes and your voice may be a bit louder. However,ın general I really liked the video.The musis is in harmony with the pictures.
the harmony of your voice with music and photos were very good.l liked it.this place is wort to be visited.but you made some pronounciations mistakes like narrow..cong
Your voice and intonation is very good. You made some mistakes in the video and correct these. I think that it would be better if you cut and add the new ones again. On the other hand the rest is very good and I like it. Thank you Tuğba!
One of the "narrow" is wrongly pronounced. The speech is fluent.
ReplyDeleteI think her presentation is good but the voice isn't audible.
ReplyDeleteneighboorhood is wrongly pronounced. her voice is audible. the photos and the music are harmonious with her speech.
ReplyDeleteYou pronounced "available" wrong. Also, I couldn't see any intonation. You spoke smoothly.
ReplyDeleteshe pronounced the word 'narrow' and 'neighborhood' wrong. she told well and her photographs were also good.
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is well except for mountains and narrow. ı like your intonation which is well in general but your voice is a little low. you speaks fluently. it persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteher photos are in harmonious with her speech.her voice is audible but music sound is loud so it is irritating.neighbourhood and narrow words are pronounced wrongly. nevertheless,generally,her presentation is good.
ReplyDeleteit is not bad. your speech is clearly it can be understood. but intonations aren't very good. narrow was mispronounced
ReplyDeleteIntonation and pronunciation is good but i think this is wrong: 'I should also added that...'
ReplyDeletethe intonation and pronunciation is great. but there are a few pronuniation mistakes. for example, narrow, available and building in some parts. apart from them, your presentation is really good. you r explaining Tarsus well. congratulations:)
ReplyDeleteYour speech was fluent and the intonations are used well. The end of the video is rather persuasive. However, you pronounced 'narrow' wrong a few times. I liked it generally.
ReplyDeletei liked the video, the picture and couldnt hear lots of mistakes i only heard that you said "narrow" wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour speech was clear and your photos were effective but your voice was a bit low
ReplyDeleteyou should pay attention to your intonation.but ı can understand what you say clearly.ı liked your photes and it organized well. however you pronounced the word narrow wrongly.your strong advice is also persuasive.
ReplyDeleteHowever i liked this video, she is speaking low and tourist,details,narrow,types and courtyard have problems about pronounciations. But it's good..
ReplyDeleteı guess there is a prob. with "of" but apart from this your speech is fluent and has good intonation. ı liked photos. ı am not sure whether ı want to go there or not. :)
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are some small mistakes in ur pronunciation they are not so important. Generally your pronunciation and fluency is good.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is not audible but fluency is good. Your photos are harmonious with your speech. You should pay attention to your intonation more.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video generally as you intonate your words when it is necessary, there are some mispronounced words, though. Maybe, you could speak louder.
ReplyDeleteı liked the music you used on the background a lot.you made some pronounciation mistakes such as buılding,available.anyway,you spoke fluently it was generally good
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently. ı liked your photos but there are some words such as avaliable and narrow intonated wrongly. anyway ı liked your presentation. well done
ReplyDeleteI think the intonation is ok. 'narrow' is mispronounced. the music is great
ReplyDeletethe music is very good. the words neighbourhood and and narrow are wrong pronounced your voice pitch is low I think but in general it can be listened to without being bored
ReplyDeletemusic, photos and your voice are in harmony, good work but you can pay more attention to intonation. And you mispronounced the word narrow, you should have pronounced it as /nærəʊ/
ReplyDeleteI think the background music is well-chosen...the photos are attractive.. however you have problem in prnouncing some words corrctly...
ReplyDeleteYour speech is understandable but in some points the music is higher than your voice.There is a bit pronunciation mistakes in your speech.You tell the old tarsus houses circumstantially.
ReplyDeleteit is fluent and understandable. music is perfec and photos are very attractive.You could pay more attantion to the intonation.
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking fluently. you could have spoken a bit loudly. I think you pronounced the word availble rigth. I have controled it from dictionary.I also liked your photos. I will try to visit there in a short time.however you have some pronounce mistakes such as local.
ReplyDeleteyour music is in harmony with the video, photos are also good but there are some pronounciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteI think your speech is fluent.And I like your intonation and music.It suits well.But you have some wrong pronounced words.
ReplyDeleteThe music and your speech is ok. Though you mispronunced some words, I like it.
ReplyDeletespeech is good in generalexcept some mispronounced words. photos and music make it better.
ReplyDeletethe pronounciations of the words 'narrow' and 'neighborhood' are wrong. she told well and the intonation was also well i think.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch a mistake.Well prepared
ReplyDeletethe video and your speech is very good. you can improve your intonations. locally, tourist, detail, narrow are some of the mistaken words.
ReplyDeletenarrow is misprononuced.but your speech and tone is good.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video because I know these houses they are really nice:) fluency is good but you have some pronounciation mistakes such as represent,narrow and authorities.
ReplyDeleteThere are not many pronouncation mistakes. I liked her pronouncation, but the word 'narrow' is pronounced wrongly. Photos attract me so much.
ReplyDeleteher photos are in harmonious with her speech..but 'narrow' is mispronounced. but intonation is good
ReplyDeleteI like your video which is in harmony with nice photos except your mispronounciation mistakes / narrow, neighbourhood, built/ and unnecessary pauses. Transition signals draw attention.It is good video in general.
ReplyDeletethe choice of music on the background is very attractive.and maybe there should be a bit higher voice.but there are some mistakes in pronuncation and intonation.please pay attention to them
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are harmonious with your speech but your intonation does not change depending on the nature of the sentence, which is not good for your speech.. the rest was good actually.
ReplyDeleteI can say that the photos and the speech were in harmony.Her intonation and pronounciation were good except for narrow and neighbourhood.
ReplyDeletethe music was nice. l liked ur video and l took pleasure while listening.. the words narrow and locally were mispronounced..
ReplyDeletethe speech is fluent,not bad.the sync with music is good.intonations are effective but there are some remarkable pronounciation mistakes like ''narrow''...
ReplyDeleteYour speech is fluent but you make mistakes on intonations. I liked the pronounciation.
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronounciation mistakes and your voice may be a bit louder. However,ın general I really liked the video.The musis is in harmony with the pictures.
ReplyDeletethe speech is fluent, intonation is good,except for available and narrow, intonation is also good
ReplyDelete. I found only the word ‘probably’ pronounced incorrectly. İt is a good work in general
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very low but the pictures are well-chosen cong;)
ReplyDeletethe harmony of your voice with music and photos were very good.l liked it.this place is wort to be visited.but you made some pronounciations mistakes like narrow..cong
ReplyDeletefluent but voice is low narrow and air were said wrongly
ReplyDeleteyour voice should be louder but your speech is fluent the pronouncation is good I think that's ok:)
ReplyDeleteYour voice and intonation is very good. You made some mistakes in the video and correct these. I think that it would be better if you cut and add the new ones again. On the other hand the rest is very good and I like it. Thank you Tuğba!
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