You use Ankara Zoo's picture while you're talking about Kayseri zoo. That isnt very informative. You could have found the picture of Kayseri's zoo. The word 'meter' is mispronounced.
There are some pronunciation mistakes such as meter,moreover etc.Apart from these, your presentation is attractive but a bit short I think.Best regards:)
you should improve your intonation and you prounced some words wrongly; meter and moreover. ı liked your video, talking and describing at tha same time.
firstly thank you for the choice of your subject from my hometown:)).after your video I realized that I missed there very much..I liked your voice,information,intonation and photos very much.apart from a mistake in pronuncation of 'theatre',it is well-done.cong nagi:))
I like the video and pictures are very good.Also informations and your intonation are effective.It is really good and really persuade me to go there:)Now Im curious about Kayseri thanx to you.well done job,cong.:)))
although you speak fastly, your speech is good.you have remarkable pronunciation mistakes such as meter ['mi:tər], moreover [mɔ:r'əʋvər].on the other hand, I liked your photos.
You use Ankara Zoo's picture while you're talking about Kayseri zoo. That isnt very informative. You could have found the picture of Kayseri's zoo. The word 'meter' is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes such as meter,moreover etc.Apart from these, your presentation is attractive but a bit short I think.Best regards:)
ReplyDeletemeter, found are mispronounced. but the photos and speech is good. you could have added music background. conratulations. it is a good video.
ReplyDeleteTo my view, there is an exaggeretion for you intonation. Entrance is pronounced wrong. Except these, it is a great video. Cong. =)
ReplyDeleteı think you can speak more fluently but i liked your video.maybe you could use music in your video.well done:)
ReplyDeletemeter is pronounced wrongly. good speech
ReplyDeleteyou should improve your intonation and you prounced some words wrongly; meter and moreover. ı liked your video, talking and describing at tha same time.
ReplyDeleteyou mispronounced "meter" but in general ı liked it you have chosen good pictures.
ReplyDeletethe video could have been a bit longer. your video was quite informative.
ReplyDeletetere are few mispronounced words your speech concurs with the video, it is good in general...
ReplyDelete"moreover-avarage- entrence". these are that ı could catch. ı couldt understand all of what you tell. your intonation is okay. tnx friend.
ReplyDeleteIn most videos, meter, kilometer are mispronunced. pls pay attention to these.. your intonation is good.thank friend..
ReplyDeletethe place is very beautiful. meters was said wrongly. the rest is ok. thnks:)
ReplyDeleteI think your presentation is a good one. There are some mispronounced words such as meter and average.
ReplyDeleteYour video is good, but you can speak more lively, and it can be more fluent. You mispronounced the word meter.
ReplyDeleteaverage is mispronounced but your photos and speech are really good.Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteMeter,moreover,popular,atmosphere are the mispronounced words and I wish you would be more lively.
ReplyDelete'activity and meter' are the words mispronounced. I think the video isn't short and the pictures are nice...
ReplyDelete'meters' was mispronunced in the beginning and be careful of 'ph' sounds.
ReplyDeleteExcept meter, there is not any mispronunced word. Intonation is ok and photos are effective.
ReplyDeletefirstly thank you for the choice of your subject from my hometown:)).after your video I realized that I missed there very much..I liked your voice,information,intonation and photos very much.apart from a mistake in pronuncation of 'theatre',it is well-done.cong nagi:))
ReplyDeleteShe mispronounced 'meter,morever' but I liked the placee that she told and .It was a very informative video.Itt was good.
ReplyDeleteI like the video and pictures are very good.Also informations and your intonation are effective.It is really good and really persuade me to go there:)Now Im curious about Kayseri thanx to you.well done job,cong.:)))
ReplyDeleteshe is not speaking fluently and ''meter'' is being mispronounced. good job!
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes but your speech is fluent and your video is well organised
ReplyDeleteı liked your speech and pictures. you are talking fluently. but you have some mispronounced words. they are social,meter,average,entrance.
ReplyDeletemeter and moreover are said wrong but your video is well prepared.
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation and intonations are not bad. good job
ReplyDeleteit is a good video. well done...
ReplyDeletealthough you speak fastly, your speech is good.you have remarkable pronunciation mistakes such as meter ['mi:tər], moreover [mɔ:r'əʋvər].on the other hand, I liked your photos.
ReplyDeleteı liked your video because your intonation is good. cong :D
ReplyDeleteI liked intonation and photos. her voice was audible. Her presenation is good.
ReplyDeleteI think the word'meter'is mispronounced.In general,your video is really good.I liked your intonation.
ReplyDeletemeter is mispronunced,ıf you had added music it would be better,intonation is not bad thanks
ReplyDeleteIt is better than your first video and your intonation is really good.I like it.thanks
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronounced words. However, your video is very informative. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking fluently. you are relax enough. intonation is effective,too.
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