her pronuncation and voice pitch is very good. I liked the presentation. she uses intonation in her sentences it is good. but she pronounces "places" wrongly
situated, geogrophy, generations, society, antique are pronounced wrongly. your intonation is well in general. your speach is fluent. it persuaded me to go there.
Your speech is a bit fast but fluent. Also there are some pronunciation mistakes such as modern. Intonation is the deficiency of this video. Yet, in general it is good. Cong. ;)
your intonation is good but there are a few mispronuounced words such as monument, donate, interior and exterior. apart from them, your presentation is good.
ın general your speech a bit fast but ıt isnt irritating.Also, you should check geography, donate and interior. especially pay attention to intonation of interior.
your intonation and pronounciation are good exept mispronounced word 'morover'. your speech could have been a bit slower. all in all it is well prepared.
ı liked your presentation and your intonation was also good.the pictures are charming.but you pronounced the word moreover wrongly, and can be noticed immediately.generally good job.
she has a fluent speech. she has some pronunciation mistakes (moreover) generally it is good. it is harmonic in respect of photo and music.I liked it,it is a good video.
At last! I found someone speaking lively:) That's very good. But she mispronounced moreover,nowadays,interior and exterior especially. But in general,ı liked it... Good job:)
Your intonation is good but not enough to persuade us to go there.. ıt is a good informative one. there are some pronunciation mistakes like " nowadays, forgotten, please"..yet, its a good one mate.
You have a grammatical mistake you said' he want to buy..'mispronounced words are moreover, places, antique, society, geography and situated. Apart from that, your voice is clear and intonation is good.
(trying to be objective as much as I can :P ) you have some pronunciation mistakes ( moreover,nowadays etc..) but they are neutralized by the evident fact that you speak lively, willingly and fluently... your intonation is better than average.. like most of the commentators, I think your video is one of the well-prepared videos...
wowww ı really liked your photoss they are very attractive. you speak fluently although you have some mistakes. you really persuaded me ı want to come kırıkkale and visit it immediately well done hilal
I liked your pronouncation and intonatin. you are speaking fluently. you haven't made such irritating mistakes apart from a grammar mistake and pronouncation mistake. you have introduced there well.
Background music is well chosen one and your voice is very good. You speak clearly and I understood every word. Also, showing maps is very good idea. I like it. Thank you Hilal!
Her presentation is very good but there is a grammar mistake. She says 'he want'.
ReplyDeletemorever is wrongly pronounced. the photos of her presentation is harmonious with her speech.
ReplyDeleteher pronuncation and voice pitch is very good. I liked the presentation. she uses intonation in her sentences it is good. but she pronounces "places" wrongly
ReplyDeletesituated, geogrophy, generations, society, antique are pronounced wrongly. your intonation is well in general. your speach is fluent. it persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeletethe video is good in terms of photos and the speech. she speaks fluently.
ReplyDeleteshe has just a few simple grammar and pronunciation mistakes. she has a fluent speech.that is a harmonic video.
ReplyDeleteher presentation is good she pays attention to intonation .however,she pronounces some words wrong such as moreover situated.but it was generally good
ReplyDeleteYour speech is a bit fast but fluent. Also there are some pronunciation mistakes such as modern. Intonation is the deficiency of this video. Yet, in general it is good. Cong. ;)
ReplyDeletethere are small pronunciation mistakes like: 'municipality' 'immediately' but her speech is fluent and clear
ReplyDeleteShe speaks fluently.The video is generally nice but she pronounced the word moreover in a wrong way.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but there are a few mispronuounced words such as monument, donate, interior and exterior. apart from them, your presentation is good.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is fluent but sometimes bored me. You dont have much intonation mistake. I've just heard 'moreover' pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteın general your speech a bit fast but ıt isnt irritating.Also, you should check geography, donate and interior. especially pay attention to intonation of interior.
ReplyDeletein general i liked the video but i heard two pronounciation mstakes "improve(o:36) and morover(0:56)"
ReplyDeleteyour photos were in harmony with your speech and your speech was fluent it was a good presantation
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation are good exept mispronounced word 'morover'. your speech could have been a bit slower. all in all it is well prepared.
ReplyDeleteı liked your presentation and your intonation was also good.the pictures are charming.but you pronounced the word moreover wrongly, and can be noticed immediately.generally good job.
ReplyDeleteshe has a fluent speech. she has some pronunciation mistakes (moreover) generally it is good. it is harmonic in respect of photo and music.I liked it,it is a good video.
ReplyDeleteAt last! I found someone speaking lively:) That's very good. But she mispronounced moreover,nowadays,interior and exterior especially. But in general,ı liked it... Good job:)
ReplyDeleteyou spoke very lively. Also, your intonation and fluency is good. Only you pronuenced monument,exterior and interior wrongly.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good but not enough to persuade us to go there.. ıt is a good informative one. there are some pronunciation mistakes like " nowadays, forgotten, please"..yet, its a good one mate.
ReplyDeleteyour lively voice makes the video attractive. there are some mispronounced word but in general it is a good job.
ReplyDeleteIntonation is good. You speaks fluently.But there are some pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeletegood work, intonation is good but you should pay more attention to persuade us.
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes but you speak fluently and your voice is good
ReplyDeleteapart from some mispronounced words like interior and exterior, your video is very good.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good.You speaks fluently.But there are some pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteexcept for a few mispronounced words such as interior, moreover her video and photos were very good.
ReplyDeleteShe pronounced the word 'Morever' wrongly.Furthermore, her pronouncation is good. And I liked her photos.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is fine. Image,nowadays are mispronunced. your recorder is high quality:)
ReplyDeleteusing the photos,music and intonuations are very attractive.maybe it is a bit slower.apart from some pronuncation faults,it is well-organized video.
ReplyDeletegenerally, you speak fluently and your intonation is good but there are few pronunciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteher voice is fluent and intonation is good. her photos attract us and it persuade me to go there..
ReplyDeleteYou are talking a bit fast but your voice pitch is good.Your words are clear and fluency is rather well.
ReplyDeletesituated, geogrophy, generations are pronounced incorrectly...but ı lıked the photos very much
ReplyDelete'moreover' is mispronounced. she speaks fluently but sometimes fastly. the music is nice and the video is a good one.
ReplyDeleteYou have a grammatical mistake you said' he want to buy..'mispronounced words are moreover, places, antique, society, geography and situated. Apart from that, your voice is clear and intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteYou spoke a bit fast. If you had slow down it would be pretty good I think.
ReplyDeleteI agree with @hmet.Also,nowadays and entrance are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteThere are some minor grammar and pronounciation mistakes but in general her speech was very good and she spoke fluently.thanks.
ReplyDelete(trying to be objective as much as I can :P ) you have some pronunciation mistakes ( moreover,nowadays etc..) but they are neutralized by the evident fact that you speak lively, willingly and fluently... your intonation is better than average.. like most of the commentators, I think your video is one of the well-prepared videos...
ReplyDeleteimprove and morover were the words that were mispronounced...you speak fluently, and l took pleasure while listening..
ReplyDeleteit was realy good to watch ur video you awoke me with ur nice voice and speech.the place u presented attracted me.l did not cattch any mistakes
ReplyDeletewowww ı really liked your photoss they are very attractive. you speak fluently although you have some mistakes. you really persuaded me ı want to come kırıkkale and visit it immediately well done hilal
ReplyDeletenowadays,interior and exterior are prnounced wrongly but intonation is not bad and the speech is fluent
ReplyDeleteShe is speaking a bit fastly without tonation.Also,the words'immediately and morever' was said wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very clear I liked the pictures and you persuaded me to visit there cong:)
ReplyDeleteyou mispronounced situated and nowadys. except them your video was good.your intonation was also over the average.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation are good your speech could have been a bit slower. anyway it is well prepared.
ReplyDeleteI liked your pronouncation and intonatin. you are speaking fluently. you haven't made such irritating mistakes apart from a grammar mistake and pronouncation mistake. you have introduced there well.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is very fluent. I like your presentation and intonations. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteyour speech is so celar that I understand each word you said.Thanks
ReplyDeleteher voice is very good. generations, antique exterior are wrongly pronounced words.the photo and the music are harmony with the presentation.
ReplyDeleteBackground music is well chosen one and your voice is very good. You speak clearly and I understood every word. Also, showing maps is very good idea. I like it. Thank you Hilal!
ReplyDeleteıt is very slow,not very fluent,but ı liked it.
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