the speach is not fluent but the words well pronounced. however, there are some wrong pronounced words;about, history, earthquake,mosaic, interior. her voice level is good and photos are chosen clearly. ı like it but ı amnot sure whether ı will go there or not. so ı cannot say she persuade me to go there.
The video is being broadcasted in Google Earth so she shouldn't have started with 'Hi friends'. The idea of playing music while she was speaking is good but because of the music I couldn't hear about her speech exactly.
In my opinion, the video is good, the photos can be seen easily , but there are some mistekes such as mosaic and coridor in terms of pronunciation. She repeats them many times in the video.
You don't use intonation very effectively. I can hear your speech very well but you do some pronunciation mistakes such as interior, into, entrance,mosaic and meter. Except for these, this video isn't that persuasive so I didn't feel anything.
your voice was very good ı could understand what you wanted to mean clearly.your photos was very good too.but you had some mistakes in terms of pronuancation
ı think her presentation is well, but her intonation could be better. also she pronuenced the word mosaic wrongly. the music is in hormony with the pictures. but she could do better.
i think you shouldn't have used sentences like "hi friends/ yes friends", and im sure you can use your intonation better in the second project. you pronounced the word enterance (01:28) wrong. in the whole it is good
her speech is generally fluent.However in some parts she hould pay attention to intonation and pronounciation of some words such as mosaic apart.the pictures she used can be seen clearly.generally ı liked it.
I admired your photos... It is like a historical documentary. The music is harmonious with your video,too. However, you don't intonate some words correctly. Moreover, you shouldn't start your speech with "hi friends" as it is shown in youtube.
In my opinion, you shouldn't start the video with 'Hi, friends' Also, there are some pronunciation mistakes such as about, convert, entrance, mosaic, furthermore, document. Another point is that you should have cared about intonation much more.In terms of photos, you are very succesful.
you must pay attention much more to the intonation because you are talking in same voice so it does not agitate.you have also some mistakes in pronunciation such as heaven, history but music and photos are rather pleasing.
the photos are really good and I can understand the speech well. The music is in harmony with video, but she didn't used the intonation fluently. she pronounced mosaic,futhermore, generally and some other words wrogly.
The music and the photos are ok. but you could talk in a more persuasive way. you start stoping much between your examples (2.06-2.33)and then you start very fast just at 2.33 as if something happens to u at that moment :)and ı guess the pronunciation of "apart from" (3.05) sounded wrong to me.and ı guess this is like that because you were stuck with A.English and Br.English. you should get this better .. :)
intonation is well worked and good but the word 'coridor' is used as Turkish meaning, it is not an English word. Speech is well orginized but could be more interesting because people may get bored when watching this.
Her speech was good but there weren’t intonations so it was a bit boring. Also, there were some mistakes in her pronounciation. For example; angle, mosaic. Besides these, her photos were placed well.
The voices were complicated. While she was starting to the speech, she was really fast but then some parts of the speech weren’t understood by me. There were pronounciation mistakes in the words like museum, earthquake.
she thinks she is in the class and presents the video to us...so she started her speech by saying ''hi friends, today bla bla bla...'' she speaks a little bit fast and does not pay attention tho the intonations...
It shouldn't have been started to present the video which was broadcasted in google earth by saying that 'hi,friends today...' but it is good in general.
firstly, she starts talking "hi friends". however, that video was downloaded in google earth. everybody in the world will listen to this video.this beginning is wrong. secondly, although the photographs and the music in harmony, she talks uneffectively. at the beginning, she talks fast but then she slows down. in fact, she pronounces the words one by one. lastly,a few words were mispronounced such as corridor, generally, mosaic, majority, eartquake.
hi friends is a bad choice for a persuasive speech and the intonations are not clear. the word "grand" is pronounced as /gr˄nd/ but it should be pronounced as /ɡrænd/
I paid attention to the pronunciations of words,I think I pronuenced mosaic correctly according to its phonetics in dictionary.My only error was that I had said 'the second Bayezid' instead of 'Bayezid of the second'.
I think it is wrong that you begin by saying ''hi friends' as your video can be watched in everywhere. there are some slight pronunciation mistakes. apart from these it is a good one
the video is a good one actually but there are some pronunciation mistkaes like mosaic .. you say 'the second Bayezid' it should be replaced with '' beyazid the second''. your intonation sounds not so bad I think..
you didnt pay attention to intonations.and you shouldnt have started with hi friend.we are not in the class.you pronouncuaced the words like mosaicinterior etc wrongly.it could be done better. but thank you very much becouse l know hat there is place named kariye church
According to me,there are a few pronunciation mistakes.And starting with the word 'hi friends'isn!t a good choice in terms of concept of this project.But her music is in harmony with photos.
I think starting like 'hi friends....' is a mistake because video will be broadcasted in Google Earth and there are some words pronounced incorrectly but she chose good photos and photos are in harmony with speech.
To me,she shouldn't have started the video by saying 'hi friends' because this video is broadcasted in google earth. But in general, I like her speaking though there are some mispronunciations.
the presentation is good, and music effects it in good way, but if intonation had been done better,this presentaion would have been much better. Moreover tehre vere some pronounciation mistakes like mosaic and futhermore.
your sppech is fluent but you shouldnt have started wit the sentence ' hi friends....' you should have started directly '' the kariye church was....' in addition to that you have made some pronouncation mistakes..but in generall it is good...
I think the beginning and the final of the presentation is wrong.You shouldn't be said Hi,friends and yes, friends.Mosaic,interior,meters and angel are wrongly pronounced.It might be better dear friend. :)
I think that this music is not suitable for this video. It detracts me from her speech. although there are some pronouncation mistakes, in general presentation is clear and easy to understand.
you speak very calm, so not have so many stressed words. mosaic, angel and apart were pronounciated wrongly.it is a good video if we think of your fluent speech.
I think she shouldn't have started with 'hi friends'.As I can hear, there are some pronounciation mistakes as 'mosaic'.However,I liked the photos.They are in harmony with the music.
I don't like the beginnig of your presentation.even thogh I couldn£t catch some of words your speed,generally it is not bad.maybe true intonation makes it more attractive.
your intonation is far from being a persuasive tone but the music playing in the background is a good choice of you.starting with hi fiends! is not acceptable for this kind of job
as it is indicated before, saying hi friends shouln't included.zeynep's is understandable and intonation is good, but there are some pronunciation mistakes.I have liked the work.
the speach is not fluent but the words well pronounced. however, there are some wrong pronounced words;about, history, earthquake,mosaic, interior. her voice level is good and photos are chosen clearly. ı like it but ı amnot sure whether ı will go there or not. so ı cannot say she persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteThe video is being broadcasted in Google Earth so she shouldn't have started with 'Hi friends'. The idea of playing music while she was speaking is good but because of the music I couldn't hear about her speech exactly.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, the video is good, the photos can be seen easily , but there are some mistekes such as mosaic and coridor in terms of pronunciation. She repeats them many times in the video.
ReplyDeleteYou don't use intonation very effectively. I can hear your speech very well but you do some pronunciation mistakes such as interior, into, entrance,mosaic and meter. Except for these, this video isn't that persuasive so I didn't feel anything.
ReplyDeleteyour voice was very good ı could understand what you wanted to mean clearly.your photos was very good too.but you had some mistakes in terms of pronuancation
ReplyDeleteı think her presentation is well, but her intonation could be better. also she pronuenced the word mosaic wrongly. the music is in hormony with the pictures. but she could do better.
ReplyDeletei think you shouldn't have used sentences like "hi friends/ yes friends", and im sure you can use your intonation better in the second project. you pronounced the word enterance (01:28) wrong. in the whole it is good
ReplyDeleteher speech is generally fluent.However in some parts she hould pay attention to intonation and pronounciation of some words such as mosaic apart.the pictures she used can be seen clearly.generally ı liked it.
ReplyDeleteI admired your photos... It is like a historical documentary. The music is harmonious with your video,too. However, you don't intonate some words correctly. Moreover, you shouldn't start your speech with "hi friends" as it is shown in youtube.
ReplyDeleteI really liked her photos but her speech isn't fluent. She pronounced few words wrongly and there are too much pause between her sentences..
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, you shouldn't start the video with 'Hi, friends' Also, there are some pronunciation mistakes such as about, convert, entrance, mosaic, furthermore, document. Another point is that you should have cared about intonation much more.In terms of photos, you are very succesful.
ReplyDeleteyou must pay attention much more to the intonation because you are talking in same voice so it does not agitate.you have also some mistakes in pronunciation such as heaven, history but music and photos are rather pleasing.
ReplyDeletethe photos are really good and I can understand the speech well. The music is in harmony with video, but she didn't used the intonation fluently. she pronounced mosaic,futhermore, generally and some other words wrogly.
ReplyDeletemozaic,furthermore are wrongly pronounced. the music and the photos of her presentation are good.
ReplyDeleteThe music and the photos are ok. but you could talk in a more persuasive way. you start stoping much between your examples (2.06-2.33)and then you start very fast just at 2.33 as if something happens to u at that moment :)and ı guess the pronunciation of "apart from" (3.05) sounded wrong to me.and ı guess this is like that because you were stuck with A.English and Br.English. you should get this better .. :)
ReplyDeletephotos are good,and your speech can be understood easily. But there are some mistakes in pronunciation such as furthermore, heaven, history...
ReplyDeleteintonation is well worked and good but the word 'coridor' is used as Turkish meaning, it is not an English word. Speech is well orginized but could be more interesting because people may get bored when watching this.
ReplyDeleteHer presentation and the photos in harmony. But I think there isn't intonation very much.
ReplyDeleteHer speech was good but there weren’t intonations so it was a bit boring. Also, there were some mistakes in her pronounciation. For example; angle, mosaic. Besides these, her photos were placed well.
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes.In her speech,she should speak in a more effective and informative way to make the place of interest
ReplyDeleteThe voices were complicated. While she was starting to the speech, she was really fast but then some parts of the speech weren’t understood by me. There were pronounciation mistakes in the words like museum, earthquake.
ReplyDeleteshe thinks she is in the class and presents the video to us...so she started her speech by saying ''hi friends, today bla bla bla...'' she speaks a little bit fast and does not pay attention tho the intonations...
ReplyDeleteI liked the presentation she has a good presentation and she intonate the s4entences well. ans her pictures are harmonious with her voice.
ReplyDeleteher presentation is good but it shouldn't be started "hi,friends" because it is broadcasted in youtube.
ReplyDeleteIt shouldn't have been started to present the video which was broadcasted in google earth by saying that 'hi,friends today...' but it is good in general.
ReplyDeletefirstly, she starts talking "hi friends". however, that video was downloaded in google earth. everybody in the world will listen to this video.this beginning is wrong. secondly, although the photographs and the music in harmony, she talks uneffectively. at the beginning, she talks fast but then she slows down. in fact, she pronounces the words one by one. lastly,a few words were mispronounced such as corridor, generally, mosaic, majority, eartquake.
ReplyDeleteI think the entrance is wrong. she mispronounces mosaic and earthquake but her speech is in harmony with pictures.
ReplyDeletehi friends is a bad choice for a persuasive speech and the intonations are not clear. the word "grand" is pronounced as /gr˄nd/ but it should be pronounced as /ɡrænd/
ReplyDeleteI paid attention to the pronunciations of words,I think I pronuenced mosaic correctly according to its phonetics in dictionary.My only error was that I had said 'the second Bayezid' instead of 'Bayezid of the second'.
ReplyDeleteI think it is wrong that you begin by saying ''hi friends' as your video can be watched in everywhere. there are some slight pronunciation mistakes. apart from these it is a good one
ReplyDeletethe video is a good one actually but there are some pronunciation mistkaes like mosaic ..
ReplyDeleteyou say 'the second Bayezid' it should be replaced with '' beyazid the second''. your intonation sounds not so bad I think..
you didnt pay attention to intonations.and you shouldnt have started with hi friend.we are not in the class.you pronouncuaced the words like mosaicinterior etc wrongly.it could be done better. but thank you very much becouse l know hat there is place named kariye church
ReplyDeleteAccording to me,there are a few pronunciation mistakes.And starting with the word 'hi friends'isn!t a good choice in terms of concept of this project.But her music is in harmony with photos.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion ,her photos and speech are in harmony but she pronounces 'mosaic,meter,recommend' wrongly.And her intonation aren1t in some points.
ReplyDeletethe video is not bad,but the beggining''hi friends'' is bad choice.And there are some pronounciation mistakes like mosaic and grand.
ReplyDeleteI think starting like 'hi friends....' is a mistake because video will be broadcasted in Google Earth and there are some words pronounced incorrectly but she chose good photos and photos are in harmony with speech.
ReplyDeleteI think that the pictures and background music are very good but you should start with different sentences and make use of intonation in your speech.
ReplyDeleteyou must start by saying hi friends also you pronounciated some words wrongly but inyonation is not bad
ReplyDeleteTo me,she shouldn't have started the video by saying 'hi friends' because this video is broadcasted in google earth. But in general, I like her speaking though there are some mispronunciations.
ReplyDeletethe presentation is good, and music effects it in good way, but if intonation had been done better,this presentaion would have been much better. Moreover tehre vere some pronounciation mistakes like mosaic and futhermore.
ReplyDeletepersonally, I dont like music on this project..Thera some pronouncation mistakes such as history, earthquake,mosaic...
ReplyDeleteThe starting woul be different, I mean more formal.This is a good feature of introduction speeches.
ReplyDeleteHer pronuncation is good,but She talks very fast. Some words 'about' and 'mosaic' are pronunced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour sppech is fluent but you shouldnt have started wit the sentence ' hi friends....' you should have started directly '' the kariye church was....' in addition to that you have made some pronouncation mistakes..but in generall it is good...
ReplyDeleteI think the beginning and the final of the presentation is wrong.You shouldn't be said Hi,friends and yes, friends.Mosaic,interior,meters and angel are wrongly pronounced.It might be better dear friend. :)
ReplyDeleteI think that this music is not suitable for this video. It detracts me from her speech. although there are some pronouncation mistakes, in general presentation is clear and easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteyou speak very calm, so not have so many stressed words. mosaic, angel and apart were pronounciated wrongly.it is a good video if we think of your fluent speech.
ReplyDeletespeech is easy to understand but in some parts I couldn't catch some words. I like pictures and music.
ReplyDeleteI think she shouldn't have started with 'hi friends'.As I can hear, there are some pronounciation mistakes as 'mosaic'.However,I liked the photos.They are in harmony with the music.
ReplyDeleteyou mustn't start by saying hi friends. your speaking is fluenth. mosaic was pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeletethe speech is not fluent completely,pronounciation is good except furthermore.I liked the photos
ReplyDeleteI don't like the beginnig of your presentation.even thogh I couldn£t catch some of words your speed,generally it is not bad.maybe true intonation makes it more attractive.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is far from being a persuasive tone but the music playing in the background is a good choice of you.starting with hi fiends! is not acceptable for this kind of job
ReplyDeleteYou must be careful about intonation if you want to be effective. The video is beautiful on the other hand.
ReplyDeleteI like your intonation but I think at the begining of the speech you should not say hi friends.you mispronounce some words like interior and mosaic
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is good but there are some words pronounced wrongly. your speech is not bad.
ReplyDeleteın my opinion your video is good .despite some pronounciation mistakes the whole is good :)
ReplyDeleteher pronouncation is good and your speech is fluent but you couldn't start 'hi friends'
ReplyDeleteI liked it,her project is good prepared,in overall it is a fine job.
ReplyDeleteas it is indicated before, saying hi friends shouln't included.zeynep's is understandable and intonation is good, but there are some pronunciation mistakes.I have liked the work.
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