your music is in harmony with your topic and ı liked it.you should improve your intonation but your pronounciation is generally good except minor mistakes. good job..
you might use your intonation more effectively as your speech is well prepared. i liked everythng about it. in your one sentence you pronounced "square" wrongly.
woww ı lkied your pictures too much. they are very attractive and your voice is very clear ı could hear it. you are right döne you pronounce mediterrian correctly :)) you could speak a bit flunetly anyway it is a very good video well done datlumm :)))
I really liked your photos as they are very attractive. Your speech was understanable, but ın my opinion you could speak more fluently. Anyway,good job...
I did not understand the word you said during 1:06 and there are just a few unnecessary pauses. Apart from these problems your videos is one of the the best videos. Thank you Döne!
There are al lot of unneccesary pauses that caused the video a bit boring. Your intonation hould be improved, as well. Yet, your pronunciation is good. ;D
you said the words by one by and ı think it is irritating your mispronunciations like square, successfully are in evidence. your photo and information are good
successfully,horizon,below, memories and dominated are mispronounced words. as to your intonation, ı think it is not successful. you vocalized word one by one so it is really irritating.
Your intonations is good. 'mediterranean,and horizon' are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyour music is in harmony with your topic and ı liked it.you should improve your intonation but your pronounciation is generally good except minor mistakes. good job..
ReplyDeletecharecteristics, mediterrian, memories were said wrongly. photos and music nice. you should use yr intonation more effectively.
ReplyDeleteyou might use your intonation more effectively as your speech is well prepared. i liked everythng about it. in your one sentence you pronounced "square" wrongly.
ReplyDeletesuccesfully is mispronounced. the rest is ok. good job. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteı liked your voice pitch very much you can use it effectively. you have some pronunciation errors like mediterian but your video is charming
ReplyDeletedear my friends before critize my pronouncation about mediterian look up a dictionary ı pronounced it correctly ı looked up before recording
ReplyDeletewoww ı lkied your pictures too much. they are very attractive and your voice is very clear ı could hear it. you are right döne you pronounce mediterrian correctly :)) you could speak a bit flunetly anyway it is a very good video well done datlumm :)))
ReplyDeleteI really liked your photos as they are very attractive. Your speech was understanable, but ın my opinion you could speak more fluently. Anyway,good job...
ReplyDeleteI did not understand the word you said during 1:06 and there are just a few unnecessary pauses. Apart from these problems your videos is one of the the best videos. Thank you Döne!
ReplyDeleteyes döne you re right mediterrian is pronounced like that . your pronounciation is generally good. ı liked your video well done:)
ReplyDeletegood work. I could catch only the mispronounce of the word "characteristically" it should be pronounced as /kærɪktəˈrɪstɪkli/ cong.
ReplyDeleteThere are only some minor pronounciation mistakes. I liked your intonation and fluency. Good Job!!
ReplyDeletethe only problem is the way you talk. you must be lively
ReplyDeletethere is no apparent pronunciation mistake except ' also '. you also used your intonation effectively ;)
ReplyDeleteThere are al lot of unneccesary pauses that caused the video a bit boring. Your intonation hould be improved, as well. Yet, your pronunciation is good. ;D
ReplyDeleteYour video is a good one. But you should speak a bit more lively.
ReplyDeleteIf only there werent some unecessary puses in your video.Yet I liked your photos and music.According to me your pronunciation is good.
ReplyDeletegenerally i liked but 'horizon and square' were mispronounced.good intonation.cong.:)
ReplyDelete''tourism,successfully,oscar'' were mispronounced. Good Job!
ReplyDeletehorizan, also, below and succesfully were said wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou said the words by one by and ı think it is irritating your mispronunciations like square, successfully are in evidence. your photo and information are good
ReplyDeletesuccessfully,horizon,below, memories and dominated are mispronounced words. as to your intonation, ı think it is not successful. you vocalized word one by one so it is really irritating.
ReplyDeleteyou should speak a bit faster especially in some parts but I like your intonation please check 'successfully'
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