ermanian, church, attributed, architecture are pronounced wrongly. his speech is fluent but he speaks always in same intonation. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ı cared about your pronunciation and ı found two mistakes. you mispronounced approximately and architecture. in spite of these mistakes, your pronunciation is good in general. but ı think intonation could be better. sometimes you are speaking monotonuosly.
It was such a good presentation that I didn't catch wrong pronounced words except fpr approximately,architecture'.And I liked the dramatic story that he told.
you should pay attention to your intonation, the same voice tone can make the video be boring.but generally you have a good pronounciation skill except meter.it is a well organized presentation.
His intonation is ok and he speaks fluently but he should pay more attaintion of these words; architect,approximately and of course architecture. And moreover ı found the silence in the beginning unnecessary... Good job!
you could kept me listening to it. but it could be better in terms of persuasive intonation. you should add something kinda slogan at the end mate. :) but its ok. well done.
I couldn't find any mistaken words but if you pay attention your intonations, your speech will be very effective next time. You also didn't use music like me :D, I think if you use, it will be better.
Your intonation and pronounciation is well but voice irritated me.I think there was a problem with the recorder.Also; a few of the photos are not clear.
I think you perform your speeches in a much better way in the class, to be frank, I expected a better video from you.. you could have intonated the sentences in a better way.. you have few pronunciation mistakes.. the rest is not bad at all but I really think you can make a much better one EYÜP! :)
I mispronounced some words and the intonation would be better. I will be more careful about voices such as the one which irritated many of my friends. Using music on the background can make the video better. I think everybody liked my speech as there is no compliment about fluency. The presentation was liked generally and I want to thank you all!
you speak fluently paying attention to intonation despite of some mistakes such as restotaion or meter. your photos are good well done it is a good work
Akdamar Island is a small island... You should not repeat the word ''Island''... You should say this sentence in a different way. Apart from this and some pronunciaton mistakes, this is a very good presentation. I like it. Thank you Eyyüp!
his pronounciation is good but there is some irritating voice during his presentation.
ReplyDeleteAs far as I could get, he pronounced the word ‘architecture’ wrong.Apart from that,his pronunciation and accent sounds really good.
ReplyDeletehe has a good pronunciation. he tells his place frankly. he pronounces the word 'approximately' falsely.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, his pronunciation is good, but he could speak more lively. he speaks in a simple way.
ReplyDeleteermanian, church, attributed, architecture are pronounced wrongly. his speech is fluent but he speaks always in same intonation. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletehe has a good pronunciation but there are some distracting sounds during his presentation
ReplyDeleteHis speech was fluent and pronunciation was very good.I like the video except for the long silence at the startand at the end of the video.
ReplyDeletehis presentation is generally good but while he was speaking,ı heard some disracting sounds.his voice could be higher.
ReplyDeleteI think his intonation and pronunciation are very good. ıt is a perfect presentation.
ReplyDeleteı cared about your pronunciation and ı found two mistakes. you mispronounced approximately and architecture. in spite of these mistakes, your pronunciation is good in general. but ı think intonation could be better. sometimes you are speaking monotonuosly.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very nice because of fluency and good intonation.however, please check some mispronounced words such as architecture, meter and found
ReplyDeletehe is very fluent and used correct intonation but he did not pronounced ‘architecture’ 'bible' correctly.
ReplyDeleteYour voice's tone didnt change a lot. Also you pronounce meter and bible wrong. But, the informations you gave enjoyed me. It wasnt boring.
ReplyDeleteyour pronouncation was good and your speech was clear
ReplyDeletei liked the general tone of your speech and the information you gave. the pronounciation of "meter and armenian" are the wrong ones i heard
ReplyDeleteHe gives no sign while starting and finishing his video.The silence in the video is disturbing.He could use music to make it more appealing.
ReplyDeletethere arent many mistakes. your video is good in terms of intonations and pronounciations.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation is almost perfect. Yet, your intonation could be better and you could speak lively.
ReplyDeleteIt was such a good presentation that I didn't catch wrong pronounced words except fpr approximately,architecture'.And I liked the dramatic story that he told.
ReplyDeleteyou should pay attention to your intonation, the same voice tone can make the video be boring.but generally you have a good pronounciation skill except meter.it is a well organized presentation.
ReplyDeletepronuncation is good and it is easy to understand the speech, also pictures are good in it.
ReplyDeleteHis intonation is ok and he speaks fluently but he should pay more attaintion of these words; architect,approximately and of course architecture. And moreover ı found the silence in the beginning unnecessary... Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou should have paid attention to your intonation. But your pronunciation, voice tone is really good.Anyway, I wasnot bored while watching your video.
ReplyDeleteyou could kept me listening to it. but it could be better in terms of persuasive intonation. you should add something kinda slogan at the end mate. :) but its ok. well done.
ReplyDeleteHis pronunciation is good and he talks fluently, but some words such as ' church' and 'attribute' are pronunced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is very clear and gaps between sentences make it more understandable
ReplyDeletethanks:))
He mispronounced some words such as armenian, kilometer, meter and approximately. But his intonation and pronounciation were good.
ReplyDeleteYou mispronunced some words. However, your speech is perfect.It is very clear.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any mispronounced words. I think it is very good. cong.
ReplyDeletegenerally good but you can use intonation more effectively
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation is very good and your speech is fluent it is a well prepared presentation
ReplyDeleteI couldn't find any mistaken words but if you pay attention your intonations, your speech will be very effective next time. You also didn't use music like me :D, I think if you use, it will be better.
ReplyDeletewith his pronuncation and frequency,his work is very successful
ReplyDeleteyou have a relly good pronunciation.I liked this.I can say that It is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is perfect.ıt is ok but if you add music another time, ı hope it will be faultless:)
ReplyDeleteapart from minor mistakes in your pronounciation there is not much thing to critize your presentation... you speak fluently and lively....
ReplyDeleteapartfrom some pauses ı lıked your presentation very much
ReplyDeleteYour intonation and pronounciation is well but voice irritated me.I think there was a problem with the recorder.Also; a few of the photos are not clear.
ReplyDeleteyou are talking fluently but there are some pauses which are unnecessary. you may add music to be funny. Am I right?
ReplyDeleteApproximately and architecture are mispronounced.Apart from these, it is a great video in every respect.
ReplyDelete'meter and kilometer' are mispronounced but the pronounciation is good in general. his words are clear, he speaks fluently...
ReplyDeleteI think you perform your speeches in a much better way in the class, to be frank, I expected a better video from you.. you could have intonated the sentences in a better way.. you have few pronunciation mistakes.. the rest is not bad at all but I really think you can make a much better one EYÜP! :)
ReplyDeleteI mispronounced some words and the intonation would be better. I will be more careful about voices such as the one which irritated many of my friends. Using music on the background can make the video better. I think everybody liked my speech as there is no compliment about fluency. The presentation was liked generally and I want to thank you all!
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently paying attention to intonation despite of some mistakes such as restotaion or meter. your photos are good well done it is a good work
ReplyDeleteacrhhitecture is the only mispronounciation I think,intonation is good and speech clear,well done :))
ReplyDeleteHis pronounciation and intonation is really good.He speaks fluently.Morever,he can draw one's attention by his photos.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and there is no word can not be caught I think. I liked this video a lot. your speech and video are very well-organized well done=)
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good and you speak fluently.but you could add music to video.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and voice is clear . good job:) you say meters wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyou speak so fluently, your pronouncation is so good. I only can cacth pronouncation mistake the word "meter". the photos are suitable and clear.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and I like your photos but ı think you should have added music
ReplyDeleteYou can add music but it is not problem because your intonation is well enough to persuade.Thanks
ReplyDeletethe intonation could be better, there are some mispronounced words
ReplyDeleteAkdamar Island is a small island... You should not repeat the word ''Island''... You should say this sentence in a different way. Apart from this and some pronunciaton mistakes, this is a very good presentation. I like it. Thank you Eyyüp!
ReplyDeletechurch,attributed, architecture are mis pronounced. But it has been a successful work good..
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