ı liked your video very much your pictures and music are in harmony nd your pictures are very charming except pronunciation errors, like monatery, it is a very well-done one.
fatma your voice is audible and ı can understand what you said. but you have some pronounciation mistakes for example they are approximately, convenient, subsequent, and following. as to your intonation, ı liked it but maybe you could have told more fluently.
I liked your video. it is well-prepared. your photos are very fascinating. they captivated me. if you speak a bit faster, it could be better. however, it generally is good. welldone Fatma!
I agree with the friends, monastery is mispronounced. you had better check it. you are using intonation well, your speech is understandable and clear. I want to visit there in the future. it is genegrally well prepared.
Your sound makes the video a melancholic one. Pay more attention to the intonations.You mispronounce 'monastery, princess'.
ReplyDeleteregion, follow are mispronounced. generally it is good. you could have paid more attention to intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear and audible, and ı liked your intonation but you mispronounced the word monatery wrongly.good job.
ReplyDeleteı liked your video very much your pictures and music are in harmony nd your pictures are very charming except pronunciation errors, like monatery, it is a very well-done one.
ReplyDeleteit is better than your first video. your voice is audible. it is very good job. I like your presentation.
ReplyDeleteThe photos and music are really good. Also I liked your voice and intonation. You mispronounced the word 'against'. But it was a good presentation.
ReplyDeletePlease pay more attention to your intonation and try to be more fluent. The words such as approximately and century are among the mispronounced words.
ReplyDeletemaybe you could speak more lively.'region,approximately'were pronounced wrong.also you should improve your intonation but good video.
ReplyDeleteYou should pay attention to fluency and intonation.Your speech should be a bit faster. I didn't hear any important pronunciation mistake. Cong. ;)
ReplyDeleteyour music and photos are well-choosen and there are minor pronunciation mistakes... well-done
ReplyDeleteit is a good presentation. be careful about 'th' sounds.
ReplyDeleteıf only you speak more lively.Yet you pronunced region wrongly.It is one of the good videos.
ReplyDeleteYou should improve your intonation. I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake. It's a good job.
ReplyDelete'monastery' is the word mispronounced. The pictures are attractve.Good video...
ReplyDeleteI liked your voice and pronuncation.I think your speech is rather frequency.I couldnt find big mistake
ReplyDeleteI can say that this video was much better than her first video.Her speech was very audible and clear .Also the music was harmonious with the photos
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very clear and your photos are very good, I think it is a good presentation
ReplyDeletegood job fatma ,ı liked your photos and speech..
ReplyDeletefatma your voice is audible and ı can understand what you said. but you have some pronounciation mistakes for example they are approximately, convenient, subsequent, and following. as to your intonation, ı liked it but maybe you could have told more fluently.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is understandable for this reason I like it and your music is my favourite.
ReplyDeleteI liked your video. it is well-prepared. your photos are very fascinating. they captivated me. if you speak a bit faster, it could be better. however, it generally is good. welldone Fatma!
ReplyDelete'' monastery(in most parts),approximately''were pronounced wrongly. The rest is ok. Good job!
ReplyDeleteregion should be pronounced as /ridʒən/. the rest is ok. I think
ReplyDeletealthough your voice could be understandable and clear, ı think it would be more effective by lively intonation. music and photos are good :D
ReplyDeleteyour voice is so clear that I understood each word you said so thanks a lot:)your intonation is also good
ReplyDeletethe words monastery and region are mispronounced,also your intonation could be better.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the friends, monastery is mispronounced. you had better check it. you are using intonation well, your speech is understandable and clear. I want to visit there in the future. it is genegrally well prepared.
ReplyDeleteapart from some mispronounced words it is well prepared video. your speech is very informative.
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