animoty, statues, consert are pronounciation mistakes. her speech was clear and fluent. but she speaks always in same intonation. ı got bored and it didnt persuade me to go there.
your intonation is good but your voice is a bit low as my friends said. familiar, tomb and statues are pronunciation mistakes. as to the music, ı think you could have chosen a vivid music. nasreddin hodja is a joyful man as you know. of course this is my idea.
you speak slowly and your voice is too low and there is a problem with your recorder in my opinion.anyway you should give importance to your intonation.your photos are attracting.however you pronounced some words such as statues and critizer wrongly.you could do better.
the level of your voice is low but generally your presentation pronounciation is good.however you mispronounced some words such as during statues.and the music you used on the background could be sth lively and enjoyable as we know nasrettin hca is an enjoyable and lively persoon.anyway,it could be better
the music is good but you are speaking with a low voice pitch and you don't use intonation a lot but your pictures are good and pay more attention to pronunciation
the music and the story are harmonious with eachother. some photos are good some of them are not. you speak smoothly but your presentation is not enogh in general you have also some pronounciation mistakes
if her voice had been higher, her presentation would have been better. there are some pronounciation mistakes such as statues. the photos of her presentation are good.
As you gave information about nasreddin hoca you could speak in a more funny way and chose an enjoyable musıc. But your speech is good and there are not so much pronunciation mistakes
In my opinion she spoke fluently and her speech was very clear but she spoke at the same tone.If she had spoken in different tones, her speech would have been better.Also,the photos in the video were really attractive.
you could talk in a vivid way and your voice is low so I couldn't understand some parts of it. pronounciation mistakes are concert and statues.I believe that you will be better after watching out pronounciation and intonation.
It is not an effective video,I think.You should be lively.there is hardly any intonation.it might be better.there are some mistakenly words such as criticism etc.Best regards!!!
an irritating voice is coming from the video and her voice too low to understand what she is really saying,but I don't think there are much pronounciation mistakes.
you must speak vividly because you are introducing nasreddin hodja. and pay attention to your intonation. it could be better. and nasrettin hodja is a good subject
You have difficulty in saying the numbers. Also you correct the words in the video. You should cut and say these parts again. Anyway, your speech is very good and I understood evert words you said. Thank you Elif!
animoty, statues, consert are pronounciation mistakes. her speech was clear and fluent. but she speaks always in same intonation. ı got bored and it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, Nasreddin Hodja is a very nice choice,but the video is not effective as I expected.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch many pronunciation mistakes,her tone is very low.So it made me a bit bored.
ReplyDeleteI think your pronunciation is good but your voice is a bit low.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but your voice is a bit low as my friends said. familiar, tomb and statues are pronunciation mistakes. as to the music, ı think you could have chosen a vivid music. nasreddin hodja is a joyful man as you know. of course this is my idea.
ReplyDeleteshe voice is not clear but her intonation and pronunciation are good.
ReplyDeleteYou dont use intonations effectively, your voice's tone doesnt change. It couldnt persuade me. Humanity is pronounced wrong.
ReplyDeleteypu should have spoke a bit lively but your speech was in harmony with your photos
ReplyDeleteI wish you had spoken more fluenly and faster. your speech is not intonated effectively, but I liked your photos.
ReplyDeleteyou could have use your voice more effectively. the wrong pronounciations are "criticizer and represent(2:00)
ReplyDeleteyou could have paid attention to the intonation. your voice's tone makes the video a bit boring.
ReplyDeleteYou didn't use your voice effectively. It is in a steady tone. Also,you could speak lively. I was bored a bit while watching.
ReplyDeletethere isn't intonation and speech isn't lively. there aren't so many mistakes and in general it is good.
ReplyDeleteyou speak slowly and your voice is too low and there is a problem with your recorder in my opinion.anyway you should give importance to your intonation.your photos are attracting.however you pronounced some words such as statues and critizer wrongly.you could do better.
ReplyDeleteHer tone of voice was very monotone and she hardly used intonation in her speech.
ReplyDeletethe level of your voice is low but generally your presentation pronounciation is good.however you mispronounced some words such as during statues.and the music you used on the background could be sth lively and enjoyable as we know nasrettin hca is an enjoyable and lively persoon.anyway,it could be better
ReplyDeleteapart from the same of the tone and slow speech,I couldn't catch big problem.you should pay attention to intonation ehile preparing the other video.
ReplyDeletein my opinion,you could speak more vividly.because,it might draw more attention.your vice recorder is problematic.nevertheless,it is generally good.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is too low but it is understandable. You pronuenced some words wrongly such as tomb, statues......
ReplyDeletethe music is good but you are speaking with a low voice pitch and you don't use intonation a lot but your pictures are good and pay more attention to pronunciation
ReplyDeletethe music and the story are harmonious with eachother. some photos are good some of them are not. you speak smoothly but your presentation is not enogh in general you have also some pronounciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteintonation and your voice is nice but I think there is problem with your recorder.
ReplyDeleteYou could have spoken more lively.Also you did not use intonation. But I like your photos.In general, it is good.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation isn't good, I felt myself in first class in primary school his father is Abdullah Efendi vs. not good
ReplyDeleteyour voice is low but your explanations are good so it is a well prepared presentation
ReplyDeleteHer voice is low and she is speaking so slowly. ''represent''is the only word that ı could catch.
ReplyDeleteBecause of slowly and low speech, it is a bit boring. ıf you speak more fluent, the video will be effective. you should improve your intonations.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is slow a bit.and I cannot catch some word also madrasa is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteYou presented slowly.Maybe you can use more intonations.But genereally it is a good video.I like your pictures.
ReplyDeleteHer voice could have been a bit louder.
ReplyDeleteif her voice had been higher, her presentation would have been better. there are some pronounciation mistakes such as statues. the photos of her presentation are good.
ReplyDeleteAs you gave information about nasreddin hoca you could speak in a more funny way and chose an enjoyable musıc. But your speech is good and there are not so much pronunciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteyou speak slowly and it bores the listener. I think you should have choosen the background music that suits Nasreddin hocas' stories...
ReplyDeleteunfortunately I got bored cause I couldnt hear your voice. and there is echo..
ReplyDeleteIt could have been better if you spoke louder and lively. It is boring in this way.
ReplyDeleteyou must talk more vividly because it is being tedious:( also you may have chosen a more suitable music.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion she spoke fluently and her speech was very clear but she spoke at the same tone.If she had spoken in different tones, her speech would have been better.Also,the photos in the video were really attractive.
ReplyDeleteyour voice isn lively. so you should pay more atention to ur intonation next time mate. ı couldnt a word stirking in terms of pronunciation. tnx.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good but your voice is a bit low.. the rocord was not so good, so l couldnt understand all of the words..
ReplyDeleteyou could talk in a vivid way and your voice is low so I couldn't understand some parts of it. pronounciation mistakes are concert and statues.I believe that you will be better after watching out pronounciation and intonation.
ReplyDeleteIt is not an effective video,I think.You should be lively.there is hardly any intonation.it might be better.there are some mistakenly words such as criticism etc.Best regards!!!
ReplyDeleteyou could have spoken in a more lively way and use another recorder.. I could not understand some parts.. Your pronunciation is almost flawless! cong!
ReplyDeletesome pictures are funny but she is too calm. there is no problem with the pronounciation.
ReplyDeletepronounciation is good but the speech is not fluent because of speaking slowly.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is very low but I couldn not find any mistake ahile watching cong. ;)
ReplyDeletean irritating voice is coming from the video and her voice too low to understand what she is really saying,but I don't think there are much pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyou must speak vividly because you are introducing nasreddin hodja. and pay attention to your intonation. it could be better. and nasrettin hodja is a good subject
ReplyDeleteher voice was low however, her pronounciation was good. ı liked photos
ReplyDeletean irritating voice is coming from the video,voice is clear but slow ı think there are not many pronounciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteYour speech and photos are great harmony with each other but your voice is a bit low. You persuaded me to go there. Congradulations!
ReplyDeleteI think there is a problem with your recorder but I understod what you said And I really want to go there.
ReplyDeleteit attracted me to go there.the subject were nice but ur voice were low and l couldnt find any mistakes.cong
ReplyDelete'animoty is wrong pronouncation but, her speech is clear and the intonation is good
ReplyDeleteYou have difficulty in saying the numbers. Also you correct the words in the video. You should cut and say these parts again. Anyway, your speech is very good and I understood evert words you said. Thank you Elif!
ReplyDeleteyou can be more vivid.but it is well done job.
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