you are so excited while speaking. I can feel it. yo should relax. your music choice is right for the video. it could have been better. I hope you do better in future. congratulations again.
what a hasty speech :S and you finished your speech in the middle of your sentence. madrasa is wrongly pronounced and i think you also have problem in pronouncind the "-ed", you made mistakes in "openED, coverED". i hope u will be more carefull
Where are we running? What a hasty speech is this. You should have been slowe while speaking. Also, you mispronounced "civilization" incorrectly. You could be better.
ı think your video is good but your intonation and speech are unsuccessful. you are speaking too fast to catch what you are saying. ı couldnt catch mispronounced word apart from civilization. in addition, ı want to ask a question. why is the direction of some pictures in video reverse?
It's too fast, ''building'' was mispronounced and ı wish you had added a video of whirling dervishes.Also,your video was finished suddenly that's not cool.It could be better. Good job!
You sound so excited and you speak so fast which distracts me. This video didnt affect me at all. And the video ends while you're still speaking.
ReplyDeleteyou are so excited while speaking. I can feel it. yo should relax. your music choice is right for the video. it could have been better. I hope you do better in future. congratulations again.
ReplyDeletewhat a hasty speech :S and you finished your speech in the middle of your sentence. madrasa is wrongly pronounced and i think you also have problem in pronouncind the "-ed", you made mistakes in "openED, coverED". i hope u will be more carefull
ReplyDeleteyou speak as you are excited and you make me hasty while listenning, you are as if tired.you could do better.you chose interesting pictures.
ReplyDeleteyou speak fast and as if you are exited a bit but you have chosen good pictures
ReplyDeleteYou spoke very fast as you were excited. While you are speaking, the video ends. The photos are good.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is a bit fast but your photos are really good and I think there isn't any pronunciation mistakes.Congradulations!
ReplyDeleteIt sounds as if you were so excited and you were in a hurry. I didn't understand why you started your speech so early.
ReplyDeleteyour speech very fast and ı think 'civilization' was mispronounced.maybe u could use music in your video.
ReplyDeleteWhere are we running? What a hasty speech is this. You should have been slowe while speaking. Also, you mispronounced "civilization" incorrectly. You could be better.
ReplyDeleteElif, if you spoke a bit lower, it could be more effective. You needn't have been excited.
ReplyDeleteyour pronunciation is good but you should have speak calmer. Also, a better voice recorder could be used.
ReplyDeleteyou could be a bit slower... there are mispronounced words... your music and photos are well-choosen
ReplyDeleteIf only you didn't speak very fast.But generally ıt is a good video.also I liked your photos.
ReplyDeleteYou speak very fast and you seem excited while speaking. But your photos are well-chosen.
ReplyDeleteI think she made this video while running : )her pictures are attractive...
ReplyDeleteI agree with ahmet:) ıf only you spoke a bit lower to be understood clearly.but your backgroundmusic is very meaningful.
ReplyDeleteHer photos were compatible with the video.ıF SHE HAD spoken a bit slower the video could have been beter.
ReplyDeletelike other friends said,you are speaking fastly.music is well chosen,generally good:)
ReplyDeleteı think your video is good but your intonation and speech are unsuccessful. you are speaking too fast to catch what you are saying. ı couldnt catch mispronounced word apart from civilization. in addition, ı want to ask a question. why is the direction of some pictures in video reverse?
ReplyDeleteI wish you spoke a bit slowly but the photos and the choice of the place are perfect.
ReplyDeleteyou should have spoken a bit slower, opened is mispronounced, you should relax while speaking, and you shouldn't have finished your speech like that.
ReplyDeleteIt's too fast, ''building'' was mispronounced and ı wish you had added a video of whirling dervishes.Also,your video was finished suddenly that's not cool.It could be better. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou speak fast and you finish it suddenly. But photos are very nice
ReplyDeleteYou could have spoken a bit slow my dear friend:( but apart from this your videos is well prepared
ReplyDeleteI think you are spoeaking fastly,if you spoke a bit slower it would be better.
ReplyDeleteYou should be spoken a bit slower.your photos are attractive.It is well prepared.Good job!!!
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