your pronunciation is good. music is very interesting. alternatives was said wrongly it should be /ɒlˈtɜː.nə.tɪv/or /ɑːlˈtɝː.nə.t ̬ɪv/ apart from this, the rest is very good.
what a nice and suitable music, i appreciate you :)) your pictures are really good. but at the very beginning u said " if your answer is not..." you could say "if your answer is no.." it would be better. and also barbecue is the pronunciation mistake you made
your music is so harmony with your pictures.ı liked it.your intonation is generally good and your pronounciation too except the mispronounced word "alternative"
your pictures are fascinating and your music is very suitable to your topic your pronunciation is very good but ı wish you had used the intonation more effectively.
first off all ı want to say that your music was very suitable for your video and your photos were very effective but you had some pronouncation mistakes:((
you could speak a bıt fluently but your intonation is good. you should add your feelings and ı admired your music which is harmonious with the pictures well done dilek :))
your voice and the music are in good harmony, your intonation is good too. the word "areas" should be pronounced as /eəriəs/ and I think there is no other mistake. cong. good work
your pronunciation is good. music is very interesting. alternatives was said wrongly it should be /ɒlˈtɜː.nə.tɪv/or /ɑːlˈtɝː.nə.t ̬ɪv/ apart from this, the rest is very good.
ReplyDeletewhat a nice and suitable music, i appreciate you :)) your pictures are really good. but at the very beginning u said " if your answer is not..." you could say "if your answer is no.." it would be better. and also barbecue is the pronunciation mistake you made
ReplyDeleteI couldnt catch any mistake. your speech is fluent. good job :)
ReplyDeleteyour music is so harmony with your pictures.ı liked it.your intonation is generally good and your pronounciation too except the mispronounced word "alternative"
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are fascinating and your music is very suitable to your topic your pronunciation is very good but ı wish you had used the intonation more effectively.
ReplyDeletefirst off all ı want to say that your music was very suitable for your video and your photos were very effective but you had some pronouncation mistakes:((
ReplyDeleteyou could speak a bıt fluently but your intonation is good. you should add your feelings and ı admired your music which is harmonious with the pictures well done dilek :))
ReplyDeleteIn spite of minor pronounciation mistakes I really liked your video. In my opinion a well- prepared project. congratulations...
ReplyDeleteyour voice and the music are in good harmony, your intonation is good too. the word "areas" should be pronounced as /eəriəs/ and I think there is no other mistake. cong. good work
ReplyDeletethe music is suitable for your video. ı liked it a lot and your photos are really charming a good job thank u dilek
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful place again. I could not catch any mistakes. I liked Your music, it is very peaceful. Thanks!!
ReplyDeletethere is a strange sound in the backgrond music. you can be more lively and be careful about the pronunciation of 'settlement'
ReplyDelete'about' and 'turism' pronounced wrong however intonation is very good also pictures and music are well choosen ;)
ReplyDeleteYour voice is a bit boring. You should have spoken lively. also, you pronounced the word "answer" in correctly.
ReplyDeleteAs my firend said you cuold spek more lively.But I certainly liked your music nad your pphotos.And areas is wrongly pronunced.
ReplyDeleteyour music and photos are well-chosen.But You should improve your intonation.
ReplyDeletethe only problem is your intonation,maybe u can pay a bit more attention to it.the rest is good and no mistake.well done.
ReplyDeleteI do not agree with my friends, I can not pay more attention to intonation, because tone of my voice is generally calm, so this is the best one.
ReplyDeletethere is a problem that ı cannot get over so ı couldn't watch your video.I suppose that It was good.:S
ReplyDeleteyour voice is in harmony with the music and it is refreshing.thnk u :)
ReplyDeleteı think if you spoke lively and paid attention to intonations, the video would be more effective but good job
ReplyDeleteı think you could have spoken more lively. because you didnt spoke lively, your intonation isnt good. and there isno mispronounced word
ReplyDeleteI like your music:)and I think there is no problem about your pronunciation and intonation thanks
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