Fantastic is wrongly pronounced. "while you enter the in" while is used wrong.the rest of the video is not understood because of the high volumed music.
you pronounced fantasting towards pecular wrongly. ı couldn't hear your voice because of your musıc but ı learned that there is a place named yol geçen hanı:)))
There are a lot of pronunciation mistakes such as "fantastic, capacity, towards, scroll, about... The speech isn't fluent. Unfortunately, in the end of the video, I couldn't understand due to the high volume of music.
your voice is too high in volume and you start your speech with pronunciation mistakes such as fantastic, about I can't hear the last parts because of the high music. You should give more importance to intonation.
the music prevailed the second half of the video so nothing can be heard. there are grammar(has been) and pronunciation (fantastic) mistakes.Also,he could speak more fluently.
At first his speech was normal but later on the half of the video music prevailed the video and nothing is understood.There were some pronunciation mistakes like fantastic.
fantastic, capacity, towards, scroll, about, everything, naturally are the words which pronounced wrongly. it is not fluent and intonation is bad. ı cant find any persuasive signal and when the music starts your voice cannot be heard. on the other hand music is very effective ı like it so much but the video didnt persuade me to go there.
i couldnt understand why you tuned up so much and made your speech unaccesable celal? in the second project you should take this into account. and im not sure if there is a equivalent of "yol geçen hanı" in English, if yes, you should have used it. some mistakes i heard are fantastic, capacity, ancient
There are a lot of pronounciation mistakes '' fantastic,capacity,transport,vehicles''. His music started at the half of the video and i wish he hadn't used the music..
in fact the video is perfect. photographs, music are in a harmony. but towards the end, the music irritates me. it could have been lower. apart from them, there are a lot of pronunciation mistakes. for example, fantastic, capacity, about, naturally, transport... in addition, you are saying words one by one. you could have talked more fluently.
ı could understand all you spoke till 2.30. after that second the music turned up. u could make me curious bout there. you should pay a lil bit more attention to ur pronunciation friend.
when you add the music(2:17), ı couldn't hear you.and it finished suddenly ı did not understand anything except yol geçen hanı.you pronounced some words such as fantastic, period and capacity. they can be noticed immediately. but ı liked your pictures and music but this is not enough.you should talk about more details because for example ı do not know it but from the pictures and its name ti persuaded me.it could be done better.
Fantastic, naturally, capacity are the words that were pronuenced wrongly. Your voice and intonation was really good in the beginning of the video. The photographs were also good. However when the music became more lively(2:33) I could not catch your voice.
I wish you didn't play the music in such a high volume, hearing what you said was a bit difficult. There are many pronunciation mistakes in your speech you could pay more attention to your pronunciation while speaking. but your intonation was good in general.
the music ıs good. the photos are very attarctive but you spell the words and say some of them such as fantastic,opposite,capasity wrongly. ıt is not too bad ın general
at first when you started to speak you mispronounced the word fantastic.you should have paid attention to intonation and spoke a bit slowly.the music you used inthe middle of the video distracted me from getting it .ı couldn t understand what you meant towards the end of your video.by the way ı didn t know that there was a place called yol geçen hanı.ı learned it and the photos were well-chosen.
you made some intonation mistakes for example the word fantastic should be pronounced as /fæntæstɪk/ not /fantastık/ and the music drowned your voice, I think you can make a better work in the second project
your video and photos are good but your music starts in the half of video and its voice is getting loud. therefore,it overshadows your voice.your voice is hoarse especially,at the end.
I can say that your pictures are well-chosen..they are in harmony with the music..maybe you could give more details to contribute to the effectiveness of the video..and you could pronounce the ''fantastic'' more clearly..
In the beginning you said 'fantastic' wrongly. Also opposite is said wrongly. I think you could not manage to do music and your specch in harmony with each other. Bec I could not hear your word. I hope you will pay more attention in your second video
fantastic, capacity, towards are the words pronounced incorrectly and there are so many words pronounced incorrectly.. your pictures are impressive.. A theme music would do better in your video dude!
at the beginning of his presentation is good but in the middle of his presentation, the music of his presentation is higher than his voice so I couldn't understand the rest of it. the photos of his presentation are good.
fantastic, nearly, about, vehicles... were wrong spelled. I think you must immediately study intonation and pronounciation until the other video. I want to visit this place due to its name not your speech. it isn't effective.
the speech is not bad but the voice is low,intonations are not effective,and there are some mispronounced words like: transport,fantastic,vehicles,capacity.etc.
Fantastic,towards,peculiar and period were pronounced incorrectly.Altough the photos were nice ,the music that began in the half of the video didn't have good effect on me.If he hadn't used the music,the video would have been better.
l know that you expended effort vey much( u went there to take photos and get some information).. l liked the music, because it was harmony with the speech...ur voice is not heard at the end...
To the end of the video the music bears down his voice, so I couldn't understand what he was really saying.Also there are many pronounciation mistakes.Some of them are 'about,capasity analyze and period.'
you made rather pronounciation mistakes and your speech isn't fluent enough to follow. The music capturedme so ı couldn't focus on your speech.The pictures are charming and ı want to see the place YOL GEÇEN HANI...
The photos are attractive but you hesitate unnecessarily in some point.At the end of the video the music is so high that I could not understand you.However I like your intonation
I didn’t understand the first sentence.you said ‘you sit both in the first block and second block.it is up to you. But it is the second block you can see everybody’ this not important and unnecessary.
your recording is very bad,I think.fantastic,capacity,towards,about,vehicles are mispronounced.Develop yourself in the next google earth project.Best regards:):)
You should be more attractive Celal. Your speech is as if you was telling a touching or sad story in your life. Please pay attantion to this issue. On the other hand, the rest of the video is very good. Thank you Celal.
the name of place is very different idea. music is not o good part of the video.I think there were some problems related with recorder. If not ıt could be better. I wish you have never added music.
Fantastic is wrongly pronounced. "while you enter the in" while is used wrong.the rest of the video is not understood because of the high volumed music.
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced fantasting towards pecular wrongly. ı couldn't hear your voice because of your musıc but ı learned that there is a place named yol geçen hanı:)))
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of pronunciation mistakes such as "fantastic, capacity, towards, scroll, about... The speech isn't fluent. Unfortunately, in the end of the video, I couldn't understand due to the high volume of music.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too high in volume and you start your speech with pronunciation mistakes such as fantastic, about I can't hear the last parts because of the high music. You should give more importance to intonation.
ReplyDeletethe music prevailed the second half of the video so nothing can be heard. there are grammar(has been) and pronunciation (fantastic) mistakes.Also,he could speak more fluently.
ReplyDeleteAt first his speech was normal but later on the half of the video music prevailed the video and nothing is understood.There were some pronunciation mistakes like fantastic.
ReplyDeletefantastic, capacity, towards, scroll, about, everything, naturally are the words which pronounced wrongly. it is not fluent and intonation is bad. ı cant find any persuasive signal and when the music starts your voice cannot be heard. on the other hand music is very effective ı like it so much but the video didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletei couldnt understand why you tuned up so much and made your speech unaccesable celal? in the second project you should take this into account. and im not sure if there is a equivalent of "yol geçen hanı" in English, if yes, you should have used it. some mistakes i heard are fantastic, capacity, ancient
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of pronounciation mistakes '' fantastic,capacity,transport,vehicles''. His music started at the half of the video and i wish he hadn't used the music..
ReplyDeletethere are some pronouncations mistakes. the photos which you have chosen could be explained more effectively
ReplyDeletethere is no intonation and 'about' 'period' were not pronounced correctly but the video is well prepared the music and pictures are impressing
ReplyDeletebecause of the music at the half of the video, anything could be understood. fantastic,capacity, about, period are mispronounced.
ReplyDeletein fact the video is perfect. photographs, music are in a harmony. but towards the end, the music irritates me. it could have been lower. apart from them, there are a lot of pronunciation mistakes. for example, fantastic, capacity, about, naturally, transport... in addition, you are saying words one by one. you could have talked more fluently.
ReplyDeleteI think your voice should be higher than the music sound. Also you pronounces the word 'capacity' wrongly.
ReplyDeleteı could understand all you spoke till 2.30. after that second the music turned up. u could make me curious bout there. you should pay a lil bit more attention to ur pronunciation friend.
ReplyDeletewhen you add the music(2:17), ı couldn't hear you.and it finished suddenly ı did not understand anything except yol geçen hanı.you pronounced some words such as fantastic, period and capacity. they can be noticed immediately. but ı liked your pictures and music but this is not enough.you should talk about more details because for example ı do not know it but from the pictures and its name ti persuaded me.it could be done better.
ReplyDeleteFantastic, naturally, capacity are the words that were pronuenced wrongly. Your voice and intonation was really good in the beginning of the video. The photographs were also good. However when the music became more lively(2:33) I could not catch your voice.
ReplyDeleteI wish you didn't play the music in such a high volume, hearing what you said was a bit difficult. There are many pronunciation mistakes in your speech you could pay more attention to your pronunciation while speaking. but your intonation was good in general.
ReplyDeletethe music ıs good. the photos are very attarctive but you spell the words and say some of them such as fantastic,opposite,capasity wrongly. ıt is not too bad ın general
ReplyDeleteat first when you started to speak you mispronounced the word fantastic.you should have paid attention to intonation and spoke a bit slowly.the music you used inthe middle of the video distracted me from getting it .ı couldn t understand what you meant towards the end of your video.by the way ı didn t know that there was a place called yol geçen hanı.ı learned it and the photos were well-chosen.
ReplyDeletethe words,'fantastic, about and vehicles ' are mispronounced. the music is irritating but the pictures are nice.
ReplyDeleteyou made some intonation mistakes for example the word fantastic should be pronounced as /fæntæstɪk/ not /fantastık/ and the music drowned your voice, I think you can make a better work in the second project
ReplyDeleteyour video and photos are good but your music starts in the half of video and its voice is getting loud. therefore,it overshadows your voice.your voice is hoarse especially,at the end.
ReplyDeletefantastic and about are wrong pronounced. I couldn't hear you after the music but you introduce it well and I think intonation is good
ReplyDeleteI can say that your pictures are well-chosen..they are in harmony with the music..maybe you could give more details to contribute to the effectiveness of the video..and you could pronounce the ''fantastic'' more clearly..
ReplyDeleteIn the beginning you said 'fantastic' wrongly. Also opposite is said wrongly. I think you could not manage to do music and your specch in harmony with each other. Bec I could not hear your word. I hope you will pay more attention in your second video
ReplyDeletenearly, fantastic are mispronounced. It is fluent and music makes your video attractive.
ReplyDeleteyour voice and music aren't in harmony so it is difficult to understant also there are some pronounciation mistakes but photos are good
ReplyDeleteSome of the words are mispronunced. Also, the music is not suitable for this video. But photos are interesting.
ReplyDeletefantastic, capacity, towards are the words pronounced incorrectly and there are so many words pronounced incorrectly.. your pictures are impressive.. A theme music would do better in your video dude!
ReplyDeletethere are some intonation mistakes and some pronounciation mistakes like fantastic, towards and nearly.
ReplyDeleteAccording to me,you should use low pich music at the second half of presentation.'about' is wrongly pronunced.
ReplyDeleteYour pictures are perfect but your voice is too high...
ReplyDeleteI liked the place it seems wonderful but because of the music I couldn't hear your last words and you have some pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteabout and from are pronounced incorrectly..the music is irritating ı couldnt hear your voice
ReplyDeleteSome words such as 'towards', 'about', 'fantastic' are pronounced wrongly. Music is very loud. His pronouncation could have been better.
ReplyDeleteat the beginning of his presentation is good but in the middle of his presentation, the music of his presentation is higher than his voice so I couldn't understand the rest of it. the photos of his presentation are good.
ReplyDeletefantastic, nearly, about, vehicles... were wrong spelled. I think you must immediately study intonation and pronounciation until the other video. I want to visit this place due to its name not your speech. it isn't effective.
ReplyDeletefantastic, capacity,about are some of the mispronounced words.to the end music become too loud to hear him..
ReplyDeletethe speech is not bad but the voice is low,intonations are not effective,and there are some mispronounced words like:
ReplyDeletetransport,fantastic,vehicles,capacity.etc.
Fantastic,towards,peculiar and period were pronounced incorrectly.Altough the photos were nice ,the music that began in the half of the video didn't have good effect on me.If he hadn't used the music,the video would have been better.
ReplyDeletel know that you expended effort vey much( u went there to take photos and get some information).. l liked the music, because it was harmony with the speech...ur voice is not heard at the end...
ReplyDeleteı cant hear yr voice at the end cuz of music. music is nice. you dont stress the words. fantastic, about, transportation were pronounced incorrectly
ReplyDeleteThe music irritated me and you made so many mistakes in pronounciation.
ReplyDeleteTo the end of the video the music bears down his voice, so I couldn't understand what he was really saying.Also there are many pronounciation mistakes.Some of them are 'about,capasity analyze and period.'
ReplyDeletesome words such as fantastic, about,towards, nearly were not pronounced correctly.this place seems to be excellent. However,it wasn't introduced well.
ReplyDeleteabout and fantastic are mispronounced,and the intonation shoulld be better
ReplyDeleteyou made rather pronounciation mistakes and your speech isn't fluent enough to follow. The music capturedme so ı couldn't focus on your speech.The pictures are charming and ı want to see the place YOL GEÇEN HANI...
ReplyDeletethe tone of music should be chosen effectively.so this choice makes your speech clear and understandable.
ReplyDeleteThe photos are attractive but you hesitate unnecessarily in some point.At the end of the video the music is so high that I could not understand you.However I like your intonation
ReplyDeleteI didn’t understand the first sentence.you said ‘you sit both in the first block and second block.it is up to you. But it is the second block you can see everybody’ this not important and unnecessary.
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are well-chosen but you should give importance to intonation
ReplyDeleteI believe the next one will be more effective:) congratulations
your recording is very bad,I think.fantastic,capacity,towards,about,vehicles are mispronounced.Develop yourself in the next google earth project.Best regards:):)
ReplyDeleteas my friends said there are some pronunciation mistakes. however, your video and photos are good.
ReplyDeleteYou should be more attractive Celal. Your speech is as if you was telling a touching or sad story in your life. Please pay attantion to this issue. On the other hand, the rest of the video is very good. Thank you Celal.
ReplyDeletethe musıc is the music of funeral it is not suitable for your video there some pronouns mistake (capacity.towards)
ReplyDeletethe name of place is very different idea. music is not o good part of the video.I think there were some problems related with recorder. If not ıt could be better. I wish you have never added music.
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