you stress some words very much and this can be irritating sometimes. but in general you have an effective intonation ı couldn't catch pronunciation error.
Your intonation is good generally, but there are some words stressed much and this not fine. The word arab is mispronounced. I liked the photos and the information you gave.
Your speech is so artificial due to unneccesary pauses and streesses. Also, I had difficulty understanding some sentences because you were speking disjointedly.
some redundant pauses in some parts spoil the unity of the sentences. Bergama should be said /bərˈgɑmə orˈbɜrgəmə/.Condition, settlement, arab are mispronounced and 'thank you for listening to me' shouldn't be said in the project broadcasted in google earth.the information you gave is really good.
firstly ı must say it is unnecessary that you said "thanks for listening to me good by" at the end of your voice. secondly, yo have some mispronounced words such as attractive, among, away, mountain, and tobacco. apart from these problems, your video is good. maybe you could have spoken fluently. you vocalize words one by one. this is a bit boring.
there are not a lot of mispronunciation words.In terms of intonation and fluency, it is well prepared and your photos are very attractive one.Best regards!!!Dear my friend::))
you put some unnecessary stresses on words but generally the intonation is used well. You mispronounce the words 'away, Arabs, attractive'
ReplyDeletetobacco, Arab are mispronounced. your intonation is ok. generally it is a good video. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteyou intonate some sentences unnecessarily, but you have good pronounciation. ı couldn't find any mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyou stress some words very much and this can be irritating sometimes. but in general you have an effective intonation ı couldn't catch pronunciation error.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good generally, but there are some words stressed much and this not fine. The word arab is mispronounced. I liked the photos and the information you gave.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation is good but you have so many stops during the speech.
ReplyDelete'arab and attractive' were mispronounced and you should be more fluent.however,generally ı liked your video.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is so artificial due to unneccesary pauses and streesses. Also, I had difficulty understanding some sentences because you were speking disjointedly.
ReplyDeleteI think you shouldn't use intonation in some sentences which is unnecessary. Generally, your presentation is good.
ReplyDeleteyou mispronunce 'settlement and arabs'. your intonation is good. thanks for the good informations
ReplyDeletethere are uncessary pauses and streses. you r speaking fast in some parts of ur video.
ReplyDeletetabocco was mispronunced but generally I like your video.You photos are also good.
ReplyDeleteSettlement and castle are mispronunced words. In some parts, you stress some words unnecessarily. howeever, Your video is a good one.
ReplyDeletesome stress you made is unnecessary.apart from this there isnt big problem
ReplyDeleteApart from some unnecessary pauses .the video was good .Her speech was clear and understandable.
ReplyDeleteit is good in general but in some parts you waited.in all with well chosen photos it is good.
ReplyDeletesome redundant pauses in some parts spoil the unity of the sentences. Bergama should be said /bərˈgɑmə orˈbɜrgəmə/.Condition, settlement, arab are mispronounced and 'thank you for listening to me' shouldn't be said in the project broadcasted in google earth.the information you gave is really good.
ReplyDeletefirstly ı must say it is unnecessary that you said "thanks for listening to me good by" at the end of your voice. secondly, yo have some mispronounced words such as attractive, among, away, mountain, and tobacco. apart from these problems, your video is good. maybe you could have spoken fluently. you vocalize words one by one. this is a bit boring.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't find any pronunciation mistake, intonation is good too. cong.
ReplyDelete''civilization,tobacco,arabs'' were mispronounced and you should have said thank you for listening TO me.Good job!
ReplyDeleteyou stress some words unnecessarily :S and I think tobacco is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteI think arab and attractive are mispronunced.your intonation is really good thanks
ReplyDeleteThere are some unnecessary pauses,but your intonation and pronounciation is good in general.
ReplyDeletein general it is a pleasing video. but you have made a grammar error at the end of the video.your speech and intonation is not bad.
ReplyDeletethere are not a lot of mispronunciation words.In terms of intonation and fluency, it is well prepared and your photos are very attractive one.Best regards!!!Dear my friend::))
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