intonation was good and your photos were effective you tried to show all the items in the museum givin information about 'when the museum is open' was very logical
This is the best video I've watched until now. You really use intonations rather effectively. Your voice is in accordance with the music. I couldn't hear any of a pronunciation mistake. I have visited this museum but you made me want to go and visit one more time.
the music isnot suitable for the video ı think. photos explain your topic entirely. intonation is well in general and you speaks fluently. it persuade me to go there. ı couldnt find any basic pronounciation mistake. but ı ddnt understand what did you said after "how much ....
This is one of the best videos I have ever watched. Music, photos and speech are in a balance. I didn't see any pronunciation mistakes. Intonation might be a bit better. Yet, generally this is perfect. Congrulations. ;)
first of all, music is very loud. however, it is suitable for your photographs. secondly, your intonation is really great. ı couldnt hear any pronunciation mistakes. ı liked your presentation.
You speak so fluently. ı really liked the way you speak. ı couldnt find a word that was pronounced wrongly.. ı tried to, but ı Couldn't :)this is a good one.you persuaded me to go there. I'll go.. would you take me to there ? :) cong friend!
ı liked your video too much. the details did not bother me.but your music is not suitable with your topic in my opinion.there isn't any mispronounced word,ı could not catch.your intonation is really good.you did not have any grammatically wrong sentence.ı went there but ı will go there again thanks to your persuasive speech.
Your intonation is really good. Despite the details,I was not bored due to your speech. The photographs are in harmony with your sentences. It was good of you to inform us when it is opened etc... This information was beneficial for me as I was thinking to go there.
ı liked the photos and ı want to visit there immediately. ı admired you music, too. ı couldn t find any pronounciation mistakes :)) you give good information about the museum. the only problem is the tone of your voice. well done
your video is in perfect harmony...you present the listeners a great variety of information.. you have prepared the video well...it is an ideal one...I think..
this is a good presentation I think in respect of both pronunciation and intonation you have chosen attactive pictures but the music is not suitable to this presentation (a good one)
I really liked the harmony between your voice and the music you used. your pronunciation is really good. I could infer that you really paid attention to your intonation. well-done fatma:)
!!It is so suprising that noone could realize that the word '' curious'' was pronounced incorrectly. it should be pronounced ['kjʋrıəs] not /KURİŞİUS/. the word history is also pronounced incorrectly.. it is /['hıstərı]/. Your intonation changes depending on the nature of the sentences, which is so good. you should talk a bit more loudly.. generally it was a good one, actually.
to mehmet kurtaran =) : i agree with you with the wrong pronounciation of "curious" but im not with the "history",as the sound "ə" may be heard different but it is not wrong. thanks for that fixing as i (and most of my friends i guess) was wrong to think that the word is "curicious" not "curious". i have looked up and found out it now.
It is a good video and speech.You could be better your intonation.the photos is well chosen and your speech is compatible with the pictures.Best regards!!
your intonation and information about the museum is good I think, bu I didn't find what I was bored very much while wathing this video? Maybe the answer is your voice or the music you have choosen... Anyway, Thank you Fatma!:)
intonation was good and your photos were effective you tried to show all the items in the museum givin information about 'when the museum is open' was very logical
ReplyDeleteThis is the best video I've watched until now. You really use intonations rather effectively. Your voice is in accordance with the music. I couldn't hear any of a pronunciation mistake. I have visited this museum but you made me want to go and visit one more time.
ReplyDeletethe music isnot suitable for the video ı think. photos explain your topic entirely. intonation is well in general and you speaks fluently. it persuade me to go there. ı couldnt find any basic pronounciation mistake. but ı ddnt understand what did you said after "how much ....
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the best videos I have ever watched. Music, photos and speech are in a balance. I didn't see any pronunciation mistakes. Intonation might be a bit better. Yet, generally this is perfect. Congrulations. ;)
ReplyDeletebatuhan in the sentence i say "how much curious you are about the historical constructions around you?"
ReplyDeleteEverything is very good but her voice is rather low and the music bears it down. But it's excellent..
ReplyDeleteyou mentioned all the details in the museum. it is not boring. the music the speech are good. it is good work.
ReplyDeletegood pronunciation and intonation but it would be better with a more convenient music :D
ReplyDeleteThe music,your speech, pronouncation and intonations are fluent, only some parts of the video the music bears your voice down.
ReplyDeleteI really liked it because it isn't boring in spite of the details.Intonation is used well.The photos were chosen well.
ReplyDeletefirst of all, music is very loud. however, it is suitable for your photographs. secondly, your intonation is really great. ı couldnt hear any pronunciation mistakes. ı liked your presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour video and presentation are very good. the pictures and your speech are in harmony. It is a good one.
ReplyDeleteYou speak so fluently. ı really liked the way you speak. ı couldnt find a word that was pronounced wrongly.. ı tried to, but ı Couldn't :)this is a good one.you persuaded me to go there. I'll go.. would you take me to there ? :) cong friend!
ReplyDeleteı liked your video too much. the details did not bother me.but your music is not suitable with your topic in my opinion.there isn't any mispronounced word,ı could not catch.your intonation is really good.you did not have any grammatically wrong sentence.ı went there but ı will go there again thanks to your persuasive speech.
ReplyDeleteFatoş :) It is really detailed but not boring.it is a fluent speech, I couldn’t hear pronunciation mistake.congrulations. good job little girl. :)
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is really good. Despite the details,I was not bored due to your speech. The photographs are in harmony with your sentences. It was good of you to inform us when it is opened etc... This information was beneficial for me as I was thinking to go there.
ReplyDeletel coldnt catch any mistakes.and it is clear and well done.cong
ReplyDeleteIt is a very smooth voice.The introduction and intonation is really good and I think it is one of the best videos.Good job.
ReplyDeletealthough you talked about the museum and the items in it, ı didn t get bored while watching it.ı liked your presentation
ReplyDeleteı liked the photos and ı want to visit there immediately. ı admired you music, too. ı couldn t find any pronounciation mistakes :)) you give good information about the museum. the only problem is the tone of your voice. well done
ReplyDeleteit is a nice example. no problem with intonation or pronounciation but the voice is a bit low :)
ReplyDeleteas teacher nurcan says; you are pattering. I couldn't catch any mistake good work
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation and intonation are good. I lked it. your photos are in harmonious with your speech.it is prepared well.
ReplyDeleteyour video is in perfect harmony...you present the listeners a great variety of information..
ReplyDeleteyou have prepared the video well...it is an ideal one...I think..
this is a good presentation I think in respect of both pronunciation and intonation you have chosen attactive pictures but the music is not suitable to this presentation (a good one)
ReplyDeleteI really liked the harmony between your voice and the music you used. your pronunciation is really good. I could infer that you really paid attention to your intonation. well-done fatma:)
ReplyDeleteI could not catch any pronunciation mistakes.It is really effective and in harmony with everything. Tone is heard well and understandable
ReplyDeletethis is a wonderful video, intonation and pronounciation are also good but voice is low
ReplyDeletemusic and your voice are in balance. photos are good and in harmony with the speech.
ReplyDeleteExcept her speaking lowly, the presentation is perfect.
ReplyDelete!!It is so suprising that noone could realize that the word '' curious'' was pronounced incorrectly. it should be pronounced ['kjʋrıəs] not /KURİŞİUS/. the word history is also pronounced incorrectly.. it is /['hıstərı]/. Your intonation changes depending on the nature of the sentences, which is so good. you should talk a bit more loudly.. generally it was a good one, actually.
ReplyDeletegood intonation and good presentation.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation is perfect:)it is a bit long and detailed but isn't tedious:)
ReplyDeleteto mehmet kurtaran =) : i agree with you with the wrong pronounciation of "curious" but im not with the "history",as the sound "ə" may be heard different but it is not wrong. thanks for that fixing as i (and most of my friends i guess) was wrong to think that the word is "curicious" not "curious". i have looked up and found out it now.
ReplyDeleteIt is a well organised presentation.You use your voice very well together with the intonation.your voice can be a bit loudly.
ReplyDeleteto mehmet kurtaran...ı really admire your ability to be focused on everything...You re undoubtedly right..
ReplyDeleteHer intonation and pronouncation is perfect. I also liked her tone of voice.It is a well-prepared work.
ReplyDeleteher voice should be higher. Apart from that, it is good in respect of intonation, pronounciation and the photos.
ReplyDeleteher voice is audible. it is a very very good presentation. the photos of her presentation are attractive. her pronounciation is very good.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good job. intonation, pronunciation are very good..
ReplyDeletethat is a very good video(maybe the best) the speech ,voice intonations and pronounciations are very good.there is not any remarkable mistake.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, her voice was audible.her intonation and pronounciation were good .If she had spoken a bit louder ,the video could have been better.
ReplyDeleteyour music is not suitable with your topic in my opinion.. your voice should be higher.. apart from these, it was good
ReplyDeleteits good and yr voice is very sweet. its one of the best videos. 'curious' was pronounced wrongly. what is that vowel 'ş' there??
ReplyDeleteThe only serious problem is your level of voice. It would be perfect if you spoke louder.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch a wrong pronounced word.Your intonation is good but maybe if you speak a bit louder,it would be better.
ReplyDeleteeverything is flawless in this video.
ReplyDeleteeven though the music bears the voice sometimes it is a good speech,almost the intonation is good and words are not mispronounced
ReplyDeleteI think it is one of the most successful exaple so while I was listening, I wasnt bored.
ReplyDeletehow much what... =) you chose a melodi really compatible with your speech.Besides,your intonation was good. Welldone.
ReplyDeleteI really like your intonation and soft voice.you persuade me to go there.you organized your presentation well.thank you
ReplyDeletethe word chronically was pronounced incorrect. You introduce te museum very well.
ReplyDeletea nice video with well-chosen pictures I liked it and I wa not bored while watching cog;)
ReplyDeleteIt is a good video and speech.You could be better your intonation.the photos is well chosen and your speech is compatible with the pictures.Best regards!!
ReplyDeleteit is really very good presentation.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and information about the museum is good I think, bu I didn't find what I was bored very much while wathing this video? Maybe the answer is your voice or the music you have choosen... Anyway, Thank you Fatma!:)
ReplyDeleteyou could spoke abit loudly.pictures are good but ı agree with my friend in terms of the music it is not suitable intonation is good
ReplyDeleteit doesn't work, i couldn't watch.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is low as it is usual but the video is good anyway.
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