I think you have recorder problem, because I can not understand some parts. as I could understand your intonation is good. the music is a little high but the choice is good. congratulations.
Your voice is so hoarse that I was disturbed very much. It is because of your recorder. As muc as ı could get in, your intonation is good but I can't comment on your pronunciation because I didn't hear words clearly. =)
i cant understand those people saying the voice is too bad, instead of trying to arrange it or trying to understand it. i heard your sentences after turning down the volume, this is solution!! :) two mistakes i heard in your pronunciation are "area and jewelry"
Your voice is a little high, but it is not a problem I think. I understand your video completely. Your intonation is good. I liked the music very much especially in the end of the video.
except the fact that your voice is inaudiblein some parts of the video, your video was a well-prepared one.you dont have too many pronunciation mistakes. congs!
although your voice isnt understandable,as far as ı can hear, your intonation and pronounciation are good. however, you mispronounced word "area". congratulations kısmet:)
area is only mispronounced word I could catch and your voice is irritating but ı think your video is not bad thanks to your music and photos which harmonious with your speech.
'' area,ottoman,medieval and jewellary'' were mispronounced I think but the rest is ok. You spoke fluently enough. But in addition ı'd rather see the photos of glass makers because they are amazing.. Good job!
I think the volume of the music is high and some parts of the speech aren't heard.Although there are some pronounciation mistakes like 'area and aquarium' in general I liked your video.ıT ıs a good choice thank you kısmet:))
Some parts werent audible. 'area, natural' are the words which are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteI think you have recorder problem, because I can not understand some parts. as I could understand your intonation is good. the music is a little high but the choice is good. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is so hoarse that I was disturbed very much. It is because of your recorder. As muc as ı could get in, your intonation is good but I can't comment on your pronunciation because I didn't hear words clearly. =)
ReplyDeleteI didnt realize the problem until ı finished my video but when you down voice a little it can be heard better, I think :))
ReplyDeletei cant understand those people saying the voice is too bad, instead of trying to arrange it or trying to understand it. i heard your sentences after turning down the volume, this is solution!! :) two mistakes i heard in your pronunciation are "area and jewelry"
ReplyDeleteı liked your music alot. and your voice is audible, ı agree with fatma. your intonation is good but you pronounced natural wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour video is good and your voice is audible except some pronunciation errors it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is a little high, but it is not a problem I think. I understand your video completely. Your intonation is good. I liked the music very much especially in the end of the video.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good and the video is well prepared.. good job
ReplyDeletegenerally video is good but you have a problem with your voice recorder because ı couldn't hear you exactly.The photos are chosen well.well done:)
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is fine and i liked your your presentation
ReplyDeleteI think it is a good presentation. you use intonation effectively. I liked your video.
ReplyDeletesome parts of ur speech are inaudible I think it stems from the recorder in general it a well-prepared video.
ReplyDeleteit is good presentation but would be great with a better voice recorder. i liked it
ReplyDeleteexcept the fact that your voice is inaudiblein some parts of the video, your video was a well-prepared one.you dont have too many pronunciation mistakes. congs!
ReplyDeleteyour music and photos in harmonious.I really appreciate you:)you intonation is also good according to me.
ReplyDeleteIntonation is perfect.The music and photos are well-chosen. I like your video and Bodrum:))
ReplyDeleteyour frequency,intonation and pronuncation is rather succesful.also I liked your background music very much especially the end of music:)) cong kiso:)
ReplyDeleteIt was a good presentation .Her speech was clear and audible.I liked her photos and music very much.
ReplyDeleteyour voice isn't clear in some parts of the video but your intonation and music are good
ReplyDeleteThe presentation is good and audible after turning down the volume... good job.
ReplyDeletealthough your voice isnt understandable,as far as ı can hear, your intonation and pronounciation are good. however, you mispronounced word "area". congratulations kısmet:)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Nihan. Good job kısmet:)Best regards!
ReplyDeletearea is only mispronounced word I could catch and your voice is irritating but ı think your video is not bad thanks to your music and photos which harmonious with your speech.
ReplyDelete'' area,ottoman,medieval and jewellary'' were mispronounced I think but the rest is ok. You spoke fluently enough. But in addition ı'd rather see the photos of glass makers because they are amazing.. Good job!
ReplyDeletemusic is a bit high but it doesnt hinder us to be understand. Photos are in harmonious with your speech and music is very nice.
ReplyDeleteI think the volume of the music is high and some parts of the speech aren't heard.Although there are some pronounciation mistakes like 'area and aquarium' in general I liked your video.ıT ıs a good choice thank you kısmet:))
ReplyDeletethere are a few pronunciation mistakes. However, your intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteyou should be more careful about the pronunciations of some words. the intonation is nice. you are speaking fluently.
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