the voice isnt audible. however, photos explain her topic in general. intonation must be improved. ı couldnt understand the words what she said. she isnt fluent like reading.
her voice is really difficult to be heard.she also says informations .we know tha information is uncountable,so we cannot use with plurals.and her speech is also very short.ıt could be a better presentation
I think you pronounce the word ''information'' wrongly because it should be pronounced as [,ınfır'meıŞın]. you have chosen suitable pictures for the video. additionally, your video provides a variety of necessary information about the place...
I think your voice needs to be a bit lively.. the word '' american'' is pronounced incorrectly. it should have been pronounced as [ı'merıkın]. your pictures are well-chosen. unfortunately, in the beginning of your video, it says Sart Harabeleri. I think ''harebeleri'' should have been translated into English. ''Sart Ruins'' would make a good one.. it is the appreciatable side of your video that it provides a lot of info about the place...
ı couldnt understand completely but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as american, information... inaddition, your video is so short. and at the end of the video, the speech was cut before the end of your speech. after a few seconds, you could have cut the speech.
you should improve your intonation.your voice is hardly heard because of being hoarse.generally the video is well, you chose good photos but you pronounced some words such as experience.it could be done better.
the voice is really bad so i hardly ever heard the voice and couldnt understand whether the pronounciation is right or wrong. and also it is a short video should have been made richer both in speech and the pictures.
I didn't understand your speech completely because of your recorder but war and tomb are mistakenly pronounced.Your speech is very short. Best regards:)
I couldn't catch some words and sentences because of your recorder. but some words like american and information are mispronounced. You should improve your intonations, too.
there aren't clear the some of words because of the recorder. and I suggest that you use more intonation in the other video study because there is lack of intonation in this video.apart from these,your video was successful especially fotos.
Her presentation is short but satisfactory. But She mispronoounced the words '' period and marble'' But because of the fact that her voice is not audible ı couldn't catch anything else..
I couldn't cacth some words, because I think your recorder system isn't working well. but you could have spoken a bit understandable. the photos are clear to see with them in harmony.there are only a few pronounce mistakes. you have introduced well.
Your speech is short but you give us enough detail even in that time which is good. I cant hear some words clearly but couldnt catch pronuncaiton mistake.
your voice is good but you have gramatical mistakes and use intonation,pronounciation badly. ı dıdn t like your presentation a lot anyway it is not too bad in general
your voice isn vivid so u cudnt hear exactl wat you said but it sounded ok. your intonation is okay apart from some lil mistakes but its still understandible. cong mate.
your voice isnot audible, I think you were sleepy while prepairing the video. information and american are problematic you should look up them again. Intonation isn't good. study dear friend.
the voice coming from the recorder is irritating and because of this reason your voice isn't clear,so I couldn't catch the misspelled words.The pictures are nice and in a good harmony with the music.Maybe, next time you should use a better recorder.
You should say ''harabeleri'' in English. It would be more beneficial. There is a problem with your recorder. Anyway, I like this presentation. Thank you Aslı!
her voice isn't audible and her presentation is very short.
ReplyDeleteshe doesn't use intonation in her sentences and she has pronunciation errors like experience, but she has chosen good pictures.
ReplyDeleteWhen I listen to her presentation, I have a hardship because her voice isn't audible.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch everything from the video, as the video is not good in terms of voice. you chould talk more lively.
ReplyDeletethe voice isnt audible. however, photos explain her topic in general. intonation must be improved. ı couldnt understand the words what she said. she isnt fluent like reading.
ReplyDeleteher voice recorder isn't good. it is incomprehensible therefore I have a hardship to understand her.
ReplyDeleteher voice is really difficult to be heard.she also says informations .we know tha information is uncountable,so we cannot use with plurals.and her speech is also very short.ıt could be a better presentation
ReplyDeleteI think you pronounce the word ''information'' wrongly because it should be pronounced as [,ınfır'meıŞın]. you have chosen suitable
ReplyDeletepictures for the video. additionally, your video provides a variety of necessary information about the place...
I think your voice needs to be a bit lively.. the word '' american'' is pronounced incorrectly. it should have been pronounced as [ı'merıkın].
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are well-chosen. unfortunately, in the beginning of your video, it says Sart Harabeleri. I think ''harebeleri'' should have
been translated into English. ''Sart Ruins'' would make a good one.. it is the appreciatable side of your video that it provides
a lot of info about the place...
ı couldnt understand completely but there are some pronunciation mistakes such as american, information... inaddition, your video is so short. and at the end of the video, the speech was cut before the end of your speech. after a few seconds, you could have cut the speech.
ReplyDeleteyour words are not clear because of the voice recorder I think, but I liked the pictures you use
ReplyDeleteyour presantation was shorth and your speech was not heard clearly but your photos were good and effective
ReplyDeleteIt was hard to catch every word in the video becuase her voice is inaudible.But I could realize that she doesn’t use enough intonation.
ReplyDeletethe speech is not clear enough to make complete comment but intonation is okey.
ReplyDeleteHer speech isn't understood clearly.And she has some pronounciation mistakes, but generally a good speech.
ReplyDeletespeech isn't heard clearly and there are some mispronounced words. but in general with pictures it is effective..
ReplyDeleteher voice was hoarse in her video so I couldn't understand her saying clearly. However, her pictures were good.
ReplyDeleteHer voice wasn't clear .I didn't catch some words .as I understood 'war' was pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeletesome parts of your speech cannot be understood clealry. the video is too short to persuade someone to prefer to go there
ReplyDeleteAs your voice is not clear, I didn’t manage to hear your pronunciations exactly but in my opinion you should improve your intonation and fluency.
ReplyDeleteHer voice is not clear and it is a very short presentation. She says a word, ‘harabe’ in Turkish
ReplyDeleteYour speech isn't clear so I couldn't understan your words clearly. also, yoour intonation should have been better.
ReplyDeleteyou should improve your intonation.your voice is hardly heard because of being hoarse.generally the video is well, you chose good photos but you pronounced some words such as experience.it could be done better.
ReplyDeletethe voice is really bad so i hardly ever heard the voice and couldnt understand whether the pronounciation is right or wrong. and also it is a short video should have been made richer both in speech and the pictures.
ReplyDeleteIt was a very a short video and the record was bad,so making a comment is hard.
ReplyDeleteI didn't understand your speech completely because of your recorder but war and tomb are mistakenly pronounced.Your speech is very short. Best regards:)
ReplyDeleteYour presentation is short and you did not used intonation well. I could not catch your mispronunciations due to your voice.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch some words and sentences because of your recorder. but some words like american and information are mispronounced. You should improve your intonations, too.
ReplyDeletethere aren't clear the some of words because of the recorder. and I suggest that you use more intonation in the other video study because there is lack of intonation in this video.apart from these,your video was successful especially fotos.
ReplyDeleteHer presentation is short but satisfactory. But She mispronoounced the words '' period and marble'' But because of the fact that her voice is not audible ı couldn't catch anything else..
ReplyDeleteI couldn't cacth some words, because I think your recorder system isn't working well. but you could have spoken a bit understandable. the photos are clear to see with them in harmony.there are only a few pronounce mistakes. you have introduced well.
ReplyDeleteit can be much more fluently and there is some mispronounced words.
ReplyDeleteIt s not very clear because of your recorder and it a bit short
ReplyDeleteYour speech is short but you give us enough detail even in that time which is good. I cant hear some words clearly but couldnt catch pronuncaiton mistake.
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are some mispronounced words and it's short, I think it is good
ReplyDeleteyour speech isn't clear and it is a bit short but photos are good
ReplyDeleteYour sound isn't audible like me:)because of our recorder.but your photos and music are in harmony.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is good but you have gramatical mistakes and use intonation,pronounciation badly. ı dıdn t like your presentation a lot anyway it is not too bad in general
ReplyDeleteYour recording was bad. You pronounced the word role incorrect.But pictures are well chosed pictures.
ReplyDeleteYour voice record is bad and I was unable to understand whatever you say. It should have been better.
ReplyDeletebecause of your recorder ıt ıs hard to understand but when you change it it will be better..There are not so many pronunciation mistakes
ReplyDeleteı could not understand anything I am sorry..and making a comment is useless
ReplyDeletel have difficult to understand u, because ur voice not audible enough..there was not any other striking mistakes bothering me while litening..
ReplyDeleteI could't understand your words because of the voice record:( also; your photos are not clear.
ReplyDeleteyour voice was unclear.photos are nice.inf was mispronouncued.it would be nicer if you hadnt spoken at the same tone.and it was a nice place to visit
ReplyDeleteI cannot folow exactly but I think your intonation is good. However, american and apart from should be corrected
ReplyDeleteyour voice isn vivid so u cudnt hear exactl wat you said but it sounded ok. your intonation is okay apart from some lil mistakes but its still understandible. cong mate.
ReplyDeleteyour voice isnot audible, I think you were sleepy while prepairing the video. information and american are problematic you should look up them again. Intonation isn't good. study dear friend.
ReplyDeletethe voice isn't clear so I couldn't catch the words mispronounced but the pictures are interesting.
ReplyDeletethe voice coming from the recorder is irritating and because of this reason your voice isn't clear,so I couldn't catch the misspelled words.The pictures are nice and in a good harmony with the music.Maybe, next time you should use a better recorder.
ReplyDeletebecause of the recorder, the speech is not clear and it is a bit short
ReplyDeleteı couldnt hear yr voice completely but you should focus on intonation
ReplyDeleteyour voice isn't audible enough but your photos are good
ReplyDeleteYour intonation shoul have been better.I could not understand exactly what you said but I like the information you gave
ReplyDelete'the american' is pronounced incorrectly and I think the video is short also your speech isn't clear
ReplyDeleteYou should say ''harabeleri'' in English. It would be more beneficial. There is a problem with your recorder. Anyway, I like this presentation. Thank you Aslı!
ReplyDeleteyou could have spoke a bit clear so we could understand the details. your intonation is good but the video is a bit short
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