the words; kilometer, divide, bridge, syria, transport are some of the wrods which pronounced wrongly. intonation is well in general but the record quality is bad so ı cannot understand the speech entirely. in addition to photos using videos makes the presantation more atractive. it persuaded me to go there.
The music really gets all attention when it starts. There are some mispronounced words but it is reallly fascinating especially using the real scenes of tigris river. Finally your speech is fluent too.
your intonation affected me. you are speaking clearly and ı could catch all of the words. because of using video, the video is more attractive for me. as to pronunciation mistakes, two of them are meter and appear
i liked your lively music and your attracting photos.but i think there is a problem with your voice recorder. you pronounced some wors such as kilometer,bridge wrongly.
you give some information about the river with detail. however you say some words such as kilometre,transport,divide wrongly. you added a video besides the photos. that is the good point ı think. ıt is a good presentation thanks
kilometer is wrong-pronounced there is a dsturbing sound during your presentation but it can be due to recorder your intonation is good and you speak fluently. (the scenery from bridge to tıgrıs river is really fantastic )
'' kilometer and Baghdad'' are mispronounced. I liked the the original view but she should have turn off the sounds because they bears down her voice. Fluency is ok. Very good!
Your speech is understandable. I liked it. The photos are also attractive. You only mispronuenced some words such as kilometer, bridge... But it was well-prepared.
it is a good idea to use both video and pictures.your pictures are harmony with the pictures.I sometimes couldn't understand your seech because of the music and the irritatig voices. the speech is fluent and the intonation is well enough.
I think you can improve your intonations :D except from this as my frieds say kilometer, appear are mispronounced. the voices are irritating but th video is good.
I think your intonation and pronunciation is good generally,but there are some words pronounciated wrongly. You must check them. But genearlly it is a good job. cong.
there are some prounciation mistakes such as kilometer, bridge. the photos and the music of her presentation are very good. using video is attractive. it is a good presentation.
asiyeee I couldn't recognize your voice:)Fluency is good and you are careful about using intonation but there are different voices that really irritating in the video.
apart from some not striking pronunciation mistakes, its very good one Asiye. cong. you have a very soft voice. ım sure you could add more intonaiton next time and get it much better. cong. :)
you mispronounced kilometer, transport and baghdad. you should look up again. Intonation is good but noise of the cars disturbed me between whiles. Nevertheless, it is a good sample.
at first the speech was clear but then the voice of water and cars were higher than your voice so the speech was not clear, as I can hear intonation is good and except for syria and kilometers, pronounciatin is good.
your intonation and pronounciation is good but sounds comin from back prevent us from understanging it completely. kilometer , bridge were pronounced wrongly
it was well done.you gave all the info effectively.and the video u recorded added another beauty on your work.it was very good but u misprnouncued kilometer.congratulations
You should have cut the video voulume in your presentation. Your speech is very good and I like the way you said ''Malabadi'' very much, as if you were a native speaker of English. :) Thank you Asiye.
the words; kilometer, divide, bridge, syria, transport are some of the wrods which pronounced wrongly. intonation is well in general but the record quality is bad so ı cannot understand the speech entirely. in addition to photos using videos makes the presantation more atractive. it persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteThe music really gets all attention when it starts. There are some mispronounced words but it is reallly fascinating especially using the real scenes of tigris river. Finally your speech is fluent too.
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced the kilometer, transport. your speech is clear and fluent. intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteI think your intonation is good but there are some pronunciation mistakes. In general it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation affected me. you are speaking clearly and ı could catch all of the words. because of using video, the video is more attractive for me. as to pronunciation mistakes, two of them are meter and appear
ReplyDeleteyou intonation is very nice as usual :)) although you have some pronounciation faults ıt does not destroy the whole.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation was good and your speech was in accordence with your photos but especially kilometer was pronounced wrongly,
ReplyDeleteI liked your intonation but there are some mispronounced words and the most ear-splitting of them is the word kilometer.
ReplyDeleteshe is fluent and she used intonation very well..
ReplyDeletealtough there are some mispronounced words, I liked your video in general. you paid attention to intonation in your video.
ReplyDeletepictures well and video makes the speech attractive.some words pronounced wrongly but in all it is effective and persude listener to visit there.
ReplyDeleteSome words such as kilometer and transport were pronounced wrongly but her intonation was good. another video used made her video attractive.
ReplyDeleteI think your intonation and pronunciation is good generally,but there are some words you mispronounced.You have to check them.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is really very successful.apart from few pronunciation faults,I liked your video very much.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation and intonation are good in general. You should be careful about your some prunciation mistakes. Cong. ;)
ReplyDeletei liked your lively music and your attracting photos.but i think there is a problem with your voice recorder. you pronounced some wors such as kilometer,bridge wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour video is good but there were some mispronounced words and the most striking one is -kilometer-.ı liked your intonation alot
ReplyDeleteMy dear friend, kilometer and transport are mispronounced.It is given detailed information about the Tigris River.Your intonation is generally good.
ReplyDeletei like the video but there are some parts hard to understand, the only pronounciation mistake i heard is "kilometre"
ReplyDeleteyou mispronounced the words 'kilometer' and 'transport'.it is attractive to use video.I liked it.
ReplyDeleteThe record quality is not good and there are some unpleasant voices disturbing me.
ReplyDeleteyou give some information about the river with detail. however you say some words such as kilometre,transport,divide wrongly. you added a video besides the photos. that is the good point ı think. ıt is a good presentation thanks
ReplyDeletekilometer is wrong-pronounced there is a dsturbing sound during your presentation but it can be due to recorder your intonation is good and you speak fluently. (the scenery from bridge to tıgrıs river is really fantastic )
ReplyDelete'' kilometer and Baghdad'' are mispronounced. I liked the the original view but she should have turn off the sounds because they bears down her voice. Fluency is ok. Very good!
ReplyDeleteYour speech is understandable. I liked it. The photos are also attractive. You only mispronuenced some words such as kilometer, bridge... But it was well-prepared.
ReplyDeleteit is a good idea to use both video and pictures.your pictures are harmony with the pictures.I sometimes couldn't understand your seech because of the music and the irritatig voices. the speech is fluent and the intonation is well enough.
ReplyDeleteI think you can improve your intonations :D except from this as my frieds say kilometer, appear are mispronounced. the voices are irritating but th video is good.
ReplyDeletethe word kilometer is mispronounced. you could pay more attention to the intonation but in general I really enjoyed watching it.
ReplyDeleteI think your intonation and pronunciation is good generally,but there are some words pronounciated wrongly. You must check them. But genearlly it is a good job. cong.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good but it can still be better. You pronounce 'kilometer' wrong. You have persuaded me so well done!
ReplyDeleteIntonation is good and your speech is fluent.But there are some words that are pronounciated wrongly.
ReplyDeleteUsing the video is very impressing according to me.Your intonation and speech is good.'bridge' is wrongly pronunced.
ReplyDeletethere are some pronunciation mistakes, for example you should say /kɪləmiːtər/ not /kilometər/
ReplyDeleteyhere are some mispronounced words but your speech is clear and video is well organised
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are some pronouncation mistakes such as 'kilometer' and 'bridge', Her voice is good and sentences are clear enough to understand.
ReplyDeletethere are some prounciation mistakes such as kilometer, bridge. the photos and the music of her presentation are very good. using video is attractive. it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteI hardly understand what you said.the speech is fluent but you pronounced some words wrong
ReplyDeleteIt is hard to understand what you say. I can’t catch the words because of unclear recording.
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronounced words auch as kilometer, appear apart from this you speak fluently and your phtos are well-chosen
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation is good and clear except a few words like kilometers,transport. your choice of music is good.a well done work.
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ReplyDeleteıt aatracted because of video record. turkey an kilometer are pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeletethere are some pronunciation mistakes such as kilometer.. in generall, ur presentation was good..
ReplyDeleteThere were some pronounciation mistakes such as kilometer.Because of her recorder,I couldn't catch some parts but she spoke fluently.
ReplyDeleteasiyeee I couldn't recognize your voice:)Fluency is good and you are careful about using intonation but there are different voices that really irritating in the video.
ReplyDeleteapart from some not striking pronunciation mistakes, its very good one Asiye. cong. you have a very soft voice. ım sure you could add more intonaiton next time and get it much better. cong. :)
ReplyDeleteintonation is ok. but please check "transport"
ReplyDeletefluency and intonation is ok but there are some pronunciation mistakes like baghdad and kilometer,, please check them.. it was a good one.
ReplyDeleteyou mispronounced kilometer, transport and baghdad. you should look up again. Intonation is good but noise of the cars disturbed me between whiles. Nevertheless, it is a good sample.
ReplyDeletethe word 'kilometer' was pronounced wrongly and the video you used in the video is really distracting the attention and bears down your voice.
ReplyDelete'kilometer and Baghdad' are mispronounced but I think there is no problem with the intonation.
ReplyDeleteat first the speech was clear but then the voice of water and cars were higher than your voice so the speech was not clear, as I can hear intonation is good and except for syria and kilometers, pronounciatin is good.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronounciation is good but sounds comin from back prevent us from understanging it completely. kilometer , bridge were pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteit was well done.you gave all the info effectively.and the video u recorded added another beauty on your work.it was very good but u misprnouncued kilometer.congratulations
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is perfect but your voice is coming faraway. I like your speech. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteit was very good but kilometer is wrong pronouncation I like it very much:)
ReplyDeleteYou should have cut the video voulume in your presentation. Your speech is very good and I like the way you said ''Malabadi'' very much, as if you were a native speaker of English. :) Thank you Asiye.
ReplyDeletethe words bridge,kilometer, divide,mispronounced. i liked your video, your voice was clear .It has been a well-prepared work.
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