hundered, meter, appear, inventions, century are only some of the pronounciation mistakes. there are more than ı wrote but ı couldnt write them because ı didnt understand what they are. sometimes ı wasnt sure are you speaking english or any language else. photos are good and the presentation well perepared but it didnt persuade me to go there. intonation isnt good and your speech isnt fluent.
you are so slow that ı cant understand what you are saying. while ı was waiting when other word came, ı forgot other words. so the intonation is bad. as to pronunciation mistakes, they are meter, appear,
In my opinion, you should pay more attention to your speech as you mispronounced some words, and you didn't pay attention to intonation. You could peak more fluently.
you did not use intonation effectively and your speech is not fluent.you pronounced some words such as excavation, century,meter.. wrongly.you have pauses in your sentences and this effects your presentation running negatively.but the pictures are in harmony with your speech.
your presentation is good but there are unnecessary stops or you could select more music.you speak fluently.it is good.there are some pronounciation mistakes such as meter,century.
meter and appear are wrong pronounced. you pause sometimes and this cause your presentation to lose its effectiveness. the music is a right choice but sometimes it is disturbing
Your speech is not fluent. There is not intonation. You mispronuenced some words such as armenia, built, meter etc.... There were pauses in your sentences.
you don t talk fluently however ı liked your photos. you say some words like meter,castle,invention wrongly. you pause too much while talking but it isnt bad in general
You dont speak fluently and that makes the video a bit boring. You have tried to use intonations but you can work on it more. 'period, Armenian and tower' are pronounced wrong.
it would be better when you didn't pause sometimes. you are speaking fluently enough to hear and understand the words.only a few words are pronounced wrong. the photos are suitable with your speech. intonation is good according to me . the music is effective, too
Unnecessary pauses makes the video boring and you should pay attention your pronouncation because some words like meter, century and invention are mispronounced, but the music is good.
You should be faster, I think.There are redundant halts in some sentences but your voice is enchanting.Hundred,meter,appear,excavations are mispronounced, my dear friend:)Apart from these, it is a good job.Best regards!!!
music is more dominant than your voice and there are many pauses that make your speech boring.I didn't face with intonation. Watch out these while preparing the second project.
You waited between two sentences more than needed.This hinders the fluency of the speech and sometimes bores the listeners.There are also some mispronounced words.Some of them are£meter,Arabian and appear.'
Your speech and photos are great harmony with each otherbut there are some mispronounced words. ı like your presentation and you persuaded me to go there. Congradulations!
I think you were excited while reading the text... Also there are some inessential pauses in the presentation. Apart from these problems, it's a good presentation... Thank you Cansu!
hundered, meter, appear, inventions, century are only some of the pronounciation mistakes. there are more than ı wrote but ı couldnt write them because ı didnt understand what they are. sometimes ı wasnt sure are you speaking english or any language else. photos are good and the presentation well perepared but it didnt persuade me to go there. intonation isnt good and your speech isnt fluent.
ReplyDeleteShe is so slow and there are so many durations between her sentences and even her words. It should be a bit faster.
ReplyDeleteI think you should use the intonation effectively. The words 'meter and century' are pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyou are so slow that ı cant understand what you are saying. while ı was waiting when other word came, ı forgot other words. so the intonation is bad. as to pronunciation mistakes, they are meter, appear,
ReplyDeleteıt would be better is she didn't use so many pauses.the speech is in harmony with the video.
ReplyDeleteyour speech wasn't fluent enough but it was harmony with your photos and you had some pronouncation mistakes
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, you should pay more attention to your speech as you mispronounced some words, and you didn't pay attention to intonation. You could peak more fluently.
ReplyDeletePresentation is good but she waits in some parts.intonation can be better, place is introduced in a good way.
ReplyDeletethere are some mistakes in pronounciations. e.g meter. and there are some unnecessary pauses between some sentences.
ReplyDeleteShe is not fluent and she has pronunciation mistakes like meter,Armenian,built etc. She should improve her pronunciation.
ReplyDeleteYour speech isn't fluent; you should have cared about it. There are some pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeletethe video isnt fluent and ended suddenly. some mistakes are in the pronounciation of "excavation and byzantine"
ReplyDeleteyou did not use intonation effectively and your speech is not fluent.you pronounced some words such as excavation, century,meter.. wrongly.you have pauses in your sentences and this effects your presentation running negatively.but the pictures are in harmony with your speech.
ReplyDeletessome mispronounced words that drew my attention are hundred ,appeared meter .if you had paid attention to intonation it could be better ı think.
ReplyDeleteWhile she was speaking,I could hear her breathe and it was not that nice and there are at least 5 seconds between each of her sentences.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is good but there are unnecessary stops or you could select more music.you speak fluently.it is good.there are some pronounciation mistakes such as meter,century.
ReplyDeletepresentation is good but pausing and waiting between sentences get a bit boring to listeners.it would be better if your speech was in fluent.
ReplyDeletemeter and appear are wrong pronounced. you pause sometimes and this cause your presentation to lose its effectiveness. the music is a right choice but sometimes it is disturbing
ReplyDeleteYour speech is not fluent. There is not intonation. You mispronuenced some words such as armenia, built, meter etc.... There were pauses in your sentences.
ReplyDeleteyou don t talk fluently however ı liked your photos. you say some words like meter,castle,invention wrongly. you pause too much while talking but it isnt bad in general
ReplyDeleteYou dont speak fluently and that makes the video a bit boring. You have tried to use intonations but you can work on it more. 'period, Armenian and tower' are pronounced wrong.
ReplyDelete''meter,roman,armenien and hundred'' are not well-pronounced. Althoug there are unnecessary pauses it's ok in general. Good job!
ReplyDeleteit would be better when you didn't pause sometimes. you are speaking fluently enough to hear and understand the words.only a few words are pronounced wrong. the photos are suitable with your speech. intonation is good according to me . the music is effective, too
ReplyDeletethere are mispronounced words.I wish you hadn't stopped unnecessarily. However, music makes it attractive .
ReplyDeletethanks
There are unneeded pauses, mispronunced words.But in general it is good.
ReplyDeleteyou wait too long between sentences. the music is very nice but you should use intonation and make your voice in harmony with the music
ReplyDeletethere are unnecessary stops and pronounciation mistakes but your photos are wonderful and explanations are good
ReplyDeleteUnnecessary pauses makes the video boring and you should pay attention your pronouncation because some words like meter, century and invention are mispronounced, but the music is good.
ReplyDeleteShe didn't pay attention to pronouncation of some words such as 'meter' 'appear' 'built'. I didn't like her intonation.
ReplyDeleteIf only you souldn't have many pauses.But I liked your phoots and music.they are in accordnace with each other.
ReplyDeleteI think she was a bit excited. there are some pronunciation mistakes such as meter,century. the photos and the music of her presentation are good.
ReplyDeleteI think you should check explorer and security again.
ReplyDeleteI think there is not fluency in your speech... but generally you speak well and there are few pronounciation mistakes...
ReplyDeleteThere are some mispronounced words. It would be better if the music was a little much low.
ReplyDeleteyour voice irritates my ears..there are pauses that shouldnt have been...'meter' 'appear' are pronounced wrong...intonation is not good:(
ReplyDeleteMeter,appear,excavation are some mispronunced words. you should correct and pay more attention to your intonation
ReplyDeletemeter and appear are the words which are mispronounced. you pause sometimes and this bothers the listeners
ReplyDeleteYou should be faster, I think.There are redundant halts in some sentences but your voice is enchanting.Hundred,meter,appear,excavations are mispronounced, my dear friend:)Apart from these, it is a good job.Best regards!!!
ReplyDeleteSome words such as appear and century were mispronounced.Her speech was very clear and his photos in the video were really nice.
ReplyDeleteThere are unnecessary pauses and I didn't like the music:( and there are some intonation mistakes.Pls pay attention to these:)
ReplyDeletemusic is more dominant than your voice and there are many pauses that make your speech boring.I didn't face with intonation. Watch out these while preparing the second project.
ReplyDeleteaww mate. you had so many mispronunciation.. hundred, meters,towers, excavations, so on..ı hope u could get it better next time. tnx ..
ReplyDeleteher speech is in harmony with the pictures. it is a good side of the video. Be careful about pauses.
ReplyDeletethe pauses made me bored, and intonation should be better meter is pronounced wrongly:(
ReplyDeleteif only you spoke a bit faster, it would be a nice presentation, but I liked the pictures
ReplyDeleteYou waited between two sentences more than needed.This hinders the fluency of the speech and sometimes bores the listeners.There are also some mispronounced words.Some of them are£meter,Arabian and appear.'
ReplyDeletethere are too much pauses in you speech and soyour speak isn't fluent. music and pictures were good
ReplyDeletethe video continues very slowly you should be faster, intonation is good.you say built and surround wrongly
ReplyDeletel couldnt understant exactly what you said.you did not speak fluently.unnecessary pauses bothered me.but it not bad.excavations was mispronouncued.
ReplyDeleteYour speech and photos are great harmony with each otherbut there are some mispronounced words. ı like your presentation and you persuaded me to go there. Congradulations!
ReplyDeleteThere are some unnecessary durations I think you should be careful abaout this.I want to go there because you persuade me
ReplyDeleteinventions, meter century are incorrect pronouncation and she is slow and her speech isn't fluent
ReplyDeleteI think you were excited while reading the text...
ReplyDeleteAlso there are some inessential pauses in the presentation. Apart from these problems, it's a good presentation... Thank you Cansu!