acording to, settlement, mountains, exposed to, natural are pronounced wrongly. the voice level is low. intonation must be improved. it is not fluent and didnt persuade me to go there.
I think her tone of voice is a bit monotone and she has to work on intonation and word stresses because her intonations sound like a Turkish speaker rather than a native one.
your voice is so low. you are talking monotonuously and slowly. ı was bored after a while. if you could have talked louder and cared about the intonation, your video would have been great. despite of these negativenesses, you talk clearly. we could understand what you wanted to say us
Despite the fact that the photos in her video were good ,her intonation didn't influnce me well.And 'considered,present 'were pronounced mistakenly.Also,she used 'southwest' instead of southwestern.
In my opinion, she should improve her pronunciation. Although she tried to use intonations,they didn’t sound correct. It would be better if she used her intonation well.
im sorry but this is a monotonous speech, your voice didnt change in the whole speech. and i heard some pronounciation mistakes such as: population,frequently,lower, region
ı could not understand you completely.you speak very slowly and your video lacks intonation.it did not persuade me. maybe if you used music in harmony with your topic and pictures it could be better.also you pronounced some words such as settlement and present wrongly. but ı liked your video because you used nice photos.
You speak too flat, to me there isnt much emotion in it. try to feel what you tell us. except for that you have pronunciation mistakes such as region and capacity.
You spoke a little slolwy. But your photos and your speech is in accordance with each other.There are some pronounciation mistakes.But I like your presentation.
I suugest you to talk frequwently because your slow speaking sometimes is boring and monotonous.apart from same pronouncation mistakes,the video is in harmony with photos.
you talk fluently but you could add emotıon to your presentation :)) you ı agree with necdet you are lıke trt 1 you also say some words such as spectatular,welcome,theatre wrongly. the photos are good thanks
You should be spoken in a lively mood.Cyprus,considered,hundred and location are wrongly pronounced.You had spoken as if you were an artist in the beginning of the video:):)Best regards!!!
You could have talked more vividly and faster.unfortunately;it is being tedious without emotion.Pay attention to the intonation and maybe must add a music.Your photos are really wonderful.
ı couldnt hear your voice so ı couldnt comment fairly. as ı hear, you speak too slow and no live in your speech. u could do better ı hope mate. sorry n tnx.
sorry I didn't want to be rude I only wanted to be frankly, to say in a true way, pay attention to intonation in the second google project in order not to fail. I wish you success
Your speech should be more attractive and lively. Also you should speak a bit fluently. There is no problem with sentences but your intonation... Apart from these problems, your presentation is good. Thank you Büşra!
she pronounced "entrance" word wrongly. Pictures and her speech were in harmonious.
ReplyDeleteher voice is clear. she speaks a bit slowly
ReplyDeleteshe speaks slowly and some of her pictures are not clear while she has a good pronunciation she doesn't use intonation
ReplyDeleteShe presents her video very good but her voice should be a bit higher.
ReplyDeleteshe could speak higher, and the word 'lower' is pronounced wrong, but apart from these points I liked the video.
ReplyDeleteacording to, settlement, mountains, exposed to, natural are pronounced wrongly. the voice level is low. intonation must be improved. it is not fluent and didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteshe speaks rather slow and that bores us after a while. there are some words pronounced wrong such as exposed.apart from this there is no problem
ReplyDeleteI think her tone of voice is a bit monotone and she has to work on intonation and word stresses because her intonations sound like a Turkish speaker rather than a native one.
ReplyDeleteyour video is lack of music.... in my opinion you need to speak a bit more fluent... your pictures contribute to the effectiveness
ReplyDeleteof the video...
the video lacks the music.. you need to be a bit more fluent in order not to bore the listeners..
ReplyDeleteyour voice is so low. you are talking monotonuously and slowly. ı was bored after a while. if you could have talked louder and cared about the intonation, your video would have been great. despite of these negativenesses, you talk clearly. we could understand what you wanted to say us
ReplyDeleteshe used intonation but because of low voice it is not very effective. she is not fluent but anyway informations given in the video are persuasive.
ReplyDeleteyour voice was too low but intonation was good and your photos were in harmonies with your speech
ReplyDeleteDespite the fact that the photos in her video were good ,her intonation didn't influnce me well.And 'considered,present 'were pronounced mistakenly.Also,she used 'southwest' instead of southwestern.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation isn't good. there are some mispronounced words like lower.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, she should improve her pronunciation. Although she tried to use intonations,they didn’t sound correct. It would be better if she used her intonation well.
ReplyDeleteYour intonation could be better. Also, I had difficulty in getting in your words due to the low voice.
ReplyDeleteim sorry but this is a monotonous speech, your voice didnt change in the whole speech. and i heard some pronounciation mistakes such as: population,frequently,lower, region
ReplyDeleteı could not understand you completely.you speak very slowly and your video lacks intonation.it did not persuade me. maybe if you used music in harmony with your topic and pictures it could be better.also you pronounced some words such as settlement and present wrongly. but ı liked your video because you used nice photos.
ReplyDeleteShe pronounce he word ‘Again’ and ‘Because’ wrongly. Her stress on words is very good.
ReplyDeleteHer voice was low but her photos and speech were in harmonious.some words such as lower, present were mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteThough she gives useful information about the place, her tone of voice is low and it makes me bored.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is too low and you speak slowly. There is not intonation. You mispronuenced the word lower
ReplyDeleteYou speak too flat, to me there isnt much emotion in it. try to feel what you tell us. except for that you have pronunciation mistakes such as region and capacity.
ReplyDeleteYou spoke a little slolwy. But your photos and your speech is in accordance with each other.There are some pronounciation mistakes.But I like your presentation.
ReplyDeleteShe speaks slowly and because of this it's boring. ''lower,region'' are mispronounced. It could be better if she spoke lively..Not bad..
ReplyDeleteyour video is very charming but your voice is a bit slow but in general it is a good job
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking a bit low and slowly . your intonation is effective for the subject.
ReplyDeleteSpeaking faster will make video better. There is some pronounciation mistakes like region.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is a bit low.You should speak lively.But you have used intonation effectively.
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ReplyDeleteyour voice is low and there are some pronounciation mistakes but informations are enough so it is a well prepared presentation
ReplyDeleteI think you especially should pay attention to your intonation. you had some mistakes like strategically, frequently. you shouldn't speak routinised.
ReplyDeleteI suugest you to talk frequwently because your slow speaking sometimes is boring and monotonous.apart from same pronouncation mistakes,the video is in harmony with photos.
ReplyDeleteyou talk fluently but you could add emotıon to your presentation :)) you ı agree with necdet you are lıke trt 1 you also say some words such as spectatular,welcome,theatre wrongly. the photos are good thanks
ReplyDeleteYour voice is clear but too low to understand easily. It is generally good but you could be lively.
ReplyDeleteplease use your senses when you speak...please pay attention the intonation
ReplyDeleteunfortunatly, you are speaking in a monotonous way.
ReplyDeleteYou should be spoken in a lively mood.Cyprus,considered,hundred and location are wrongly pronounced.You had spoken as if you were an artist in the beginning of the video:):)Best regards!!!
ReplyDeleteyou speak in a monotonous way, and this is boring while listening..Cypru and considered were the words that were mispronounced..
ReplyDeleteYou could have talked more vividly and faster.unfortunately;it is being tedious without emotion.Pay attention to the intonation and maybe must add a music.Your photos are really wonderful.
ReplyDeletespeech is slow and it becomes sometimes boring, but photos are suitable and selected well..
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too low so I have difficulty in understanding. I am about to sleep. you should talk with a bit higher voice.
ReplyDeleteı couldnt hear your voice so ı couldnt comment fairly. as ı hear, you speak too slow and no live in your speech. u could do better ı hope mate. sorry n tnx.
ReplyDeleteare you crying? :) it is too slow but your words are clear and pictures are colourful...
ReplyDeletethe speech is some smooth and intonation should be some more lively.pictures are very attractive
ReplyDeleteHer voice is a bit low and she should have spoken more lively.Also,there are some words said wrongly such as ' frequently,arabian and byzantine'.
ReplyDeleteyou speak very slowly, apart from it I liked your video cong.;)
ReplyDeleteyou speak clearly and fluent.you pronounced theatre wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou speak very calmly. but voice is clear you say considered wrongly it should be said/kənˈsɪd.əd/
ReplyDeleteyou could speak more eagerly to attract.paying attention to intonations would make it better.it was good and intersting place.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is a bit low so I couldn't catch some parts but I like your photos
ReplyDeleteyou can speak a bit more fluent except from some misprounounced words I really like it.
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ReplyDeletesorry I didn't want to be rude I only wanted to be frankly, to say in a true way, pay attention to intonation in the second google project in order not to fail. I wish you success
ReplyDeleteYour speech should be more attractive and lively. Also you should speak a bit fluently. There is no problem with sentences but your intonation... Apart from these problems, your presentation is good. Thank you Büşra!
ReplyDeletebecause you spoke slowly it made me bored.it is an interesting place.THANKS
ReplyDeleteyou speak very slowly,ı hope you will be better in next presentation.
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