I think she starts to the video in a wrong way. I mean, this video takes place in Google Earth,known throughout the world.So, I don’t think it is suitable to start with ‘ Hi friends’.
her voice pitch is very good and she explains her topic well but she has some pronunciation erros such as "about" and lastly her pictures are charming.
there is an echo problem. area, hundered, largest, kilometers are pronounced wrongly. intonation is bad. you didnt speak fluently. it didnt persuade me to go there.
In my opinion,she shouldn't have said 'hi friends' in the introduction part.Moreover,she made intonation mistakes while speaking.It would be better if she had paid attention to it.
kilometers western are the words that you pronounciated wrong.the picture that you chose are really attracting.but if you paid attention to intonation ,it could be better.generally,it was good
first of all, you started the video by saying Hi friends. ı think this beginning is wrong. as you know, that video was uploaded in google earth and everybody all around the world will see it. secondly, you have some pronunciation mistakes such as about, mountain, convenient.the intonation is bad ı think. ı was bored while ı was listening to you. in despite of these, you are speaking clearly. ı could understand every word.
Dont start the video saying hi because it is not just for us but the other people whoever watch it on youtube. You say'as you from pictures', it is grammatically wrong. you pronounced western wrong.
First of all, I can say that I like the video in terms of photos and music used in it. But some sentences she says cannot be understood. I think it is because of the record.
the music and the photos are in harmony with eachother.you could pronounce the word shaped,meter and about in better way.generally ı liked your video.it is a good persuasive speech example, in my opinion.
I was influenced by the photos in her video because they were beautiful.I think she managed to call people's attention.However,she used a wrong noun phrase 'kilometer square'.
'' houndred,mainland and suitable''are the words mispronounced. By the way, She forgot to complete one of the sentence ''as you from..'' and ı think she should have used ''island'' instead of ''Can ada and Yeşil ada'' that's my opinion..Good job..
Your voice is understandable, but you should paid attention to your intonation. Also you pronuenced some words wrongly such as area, kilometers,about.....
She talks really efficiently. Her telling the area step by step via the photos is good. She pronunce the word 'about' wrongly. However, pictures are attractive.
You also started the video with hi friends like me. Doing with this beginning is wrong I learnt this, too. You say "Can ada and Yeşil ada" but I think you can use island isntead of this usage. you can improve your intonations. Famous, shaped are mispronounced. the video is good.
your music is perfect and there is a harmony between your music and voice... there are minor mistakes in pronounciation but it is generally a good video...
The beginning of the presentation is wrong. Hi,friends is not suitable.Your music is wonderful and compatible with the speech.Hundred,convenient are wrongly pronounced.I agree with Maviş I think she should have used ''island'' instead of ''Can ada and Yeşil ada'' that's my opinion.Still,it is a good presentation.Best regards:)
you already persuaded me to go there. it is a wonderful place I think. your trifling mistakes aren't important for me. I enjoyed with your photos and music.
The beginning is problematic (hi friends).. your voice and music go well.. try to intonate the sentences depending the meaning of the sentences.. the rest was good, actually.
you pause while talking and have some pronounciation mistakes one of which is ımpossıble however your photos are very attractive well done ı want to visit it
I think, she shouldn't have started with 'hi friends.'To say the truth,the photos are very impressive and the music is very impressive.The intonation should have been better.
your speech and pronounciations aare perfect. ı like your music and photos. Your photos are great harmony with your speech.However I think you shouldn't start your speech with hi friends. Your presentation is perfect.Congratulations!
there are grammar mistakes but she presents her place very good.I impressived by her speech and I want to see this place however I caught somethıng.in the introduction she couldn't say 'hi'
You wait a little bit in the second sentences, then you start with ''and''. you should correct this. Also, at the beginninf of the video you should not use ''Hi Friends.'' Except for that, your presentation is very good. Thank you Fatma!
I think she starts to the video in a wrong way. I mean, this video takes place in Google Earth,known throughout the world.So, I don’t think it is suitable to start with ‘ Hi friends’.
ReplyDeletethe words 'stated, impossible, geographic' are pronunced wrong, but generally the video is good. she speaks good.
ReplyDeleteshe says meters square but she sholud say square meters. her voice is audible. she prepared her presentation well.
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ReplyDeleteshe forgets to say verb in one sentence"as you from...but generally it is good presentation. her photos are very impressive. I want to go there.
ReplyDeleteher voice pitch is very good and she explains her topic well but she has some pronunciation erros such as "about" and lastly her pictures are charming.
ReplyDeletethere is an echo problem. area, hundered, largest, kilometers are pronounced wrongly. intonation is bad. you didnt speak fluently. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion,she shouldn't have said 'hi friends' in the introduction part.Moreover,she made intonation mistakes while speaking.It would be better if she had paid attention to it.
ReplyDeletekilometers western are the words that you pronounciated wrong.the picture that you chose are really attracting.but if you paid attention to intonation ,it could be better.generally,it was good
ReplyDeletefirst of all, you started the video by saying Hi friends. ı think this beginning is wrong. as you know, that video was uploaded in google earth and everybody all around the world will see it. secondly, you have some pronunciation mistakes such as about, mountain, convenient.the intonation is bad ı think. ı was bored while ı was listening to you. in despite of these, you are speaking clearly. ı could understand every word.
ReplyDelete'hundred' and 'about' were pronounced wrong but intonation is good and she speaks fluently.
ReplyDeleteDont start the video saying hi because it is not just for us but the other people whoever watch it on youtube. You say'as you from pictures', it is grammatically wrong. you pronounced western wrong.
ReplyDeletemusic is very nice but I think it isnt suitable.also, meter and moreover are mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteyour pronounciation of "lake" sounds like "leg" in many parts of the video, and also "hundred and nowadays" were wrongly pronounced
ReplyDeleteyour photos were very effective and your speech was clear and fluent it was a good presantation you persuaded me to go there
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I can say that I like the video in terms of photos and music used in it. But some sentences she says cannot be understood. I think it is because of the record.
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes but intonation is good. it is good work.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is a bit disjointed but your pronunciation is good. Also, you could focus on intonation muc more. Cong. ;)
ReplyDeletethe music and the photos are in harmony with eachother.you could pronounce the word shaped,meter and about in better way.generally ı liked your video.it is a good persuasive speech example, in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteI was influenced by the photos in her video because they were beautiful.I think she managed to call people's attention.However,she used a wrong noun phrase 'kilometer square'.
ReplyDelete'' houndred,mainland and suitable''are the words mispronounced. By the way, She forgot to complete one of the sentence ''as you from..'' and ı think she should have used ''island'' instead of ''Can ada and Yeşil ada'' that's my opinion..Good job..
ReplyDeleteYour voice is understandable, but you should paid attention to your intonation. Also you pronuenced some words wrongly such as area, kilometers,about.....
ReplyDeleteyeah "hi firends" :) "1.17" "listen" "T" you say mate. and u could use ur intonation better.
ReplyDeleteShe talks really efficiently. Her telling the area step by step via the photos is good. She pronunce the word 'about' wrongly. However, pictures are attractive.
ReplyDeleteYour beginning like this video is wrong.But u r talking fluently.Also intonation is good.
ReplyDeletehi friends isn't suitable for this video, and I think if you pay attention to intonation it will be better
ReplyDeleteyou pronounced some words wrongly but music and photos are harmonious also your intonation is good
ReplyDeleteespecially I liked photos and music.Although there were a few mistakes, her video was good.
ReplyDeleteYou also started the video with hi friends like me. Doing with this beginning is wrong I learnt this, too. You say "Can ada and Yeşil ada" but I think you can use island isntead of this usage. you can improve your intonations. Famous, shaped are mispronounced. the video is good.
ReplyDeleteIf only you didn't start 'hi friends'.your photos are good.YOUR video is good except for some wrongly pronunced words.
ReplyDeletechanged is misprononunced. you had better speak effectively. anyway, the pics are wonderful
ReplyDeleteyour music is perfect and there is a harmony between your music and voice... there are minor mistakes in pronounciation but it is generally a good video...
ReplyDeleteYou should not have started saying 'hi friends' and you have pronounciation mistakes such as water and hundred.
ReplyDeleteı agree with cumali....just minor mistakes:D
ReplyDeleteThe beginning of the presentation is wrong. Hi,friends is not suitable.Your music is wonderful and compatible with the speech.Hundred,convenient are wrongly pronounced.I agree with Maviş I think she should have used ''island'' instead of ''Can ada and Yeşil ada'' that's my opinion.Still,it is a good presentation.Best regards:)
ReplyDeleteThere are some wrongly pronounced words. Your music is really good and it is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteyou already persuaded me to go there. it is a wonderful place I think. your trifling mistakes aren't important for me. I enjoyed with your photos and music.
ReplyDeleteyou shouldnt have started by saying 'hi friends....'directly, u could start by 'Egirdir Lake....
ReplyDeleteI think the entrance is wrong. Be careful about the intonation. the video is attractive and a good one
ReplyDeleteThe beginning is problematic (hi friends).. your voice and music go well.. try to intonate the sentences depending the meaning of the sentences.. the rest was good, actually.
ReplyDeletevideo is good in terms of photos and music. she speaks fluently but withouth some mistakes it could be better.
ReplyDeleteyou pause while talking and have some pronounciation mistakes one of which is ımpossıble however your photos are very attractive well done ı want to visit it
ReplyDeleteıntonation is not bad but do not start with 'hi friends' again.except for kilometers ı culd not catch mispronounciation.
ReplyDeleteI think, she shouldn't have started with 'hi friends.'To say the truth,the photos are very impressive and the music is very impressive.The intonation should have been better.
ReplyDeletedespite some minor mistakes your video is very good and I liked the music a lot;)
ReplyDeleteyou shouldn't start video with saying hi friends.convenient is pronounced wrongly.but pictures nd you fluent spek is good
ReplyDeleteottoman was said wrongly, voice isnt clear music is perfect.
ReplyDeletethere is a grammar mistake."as you...".you are speaking a bit slowly.I liked your photos. you could use intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour speech and pronounciations aare perfect. ı like your music and photos. Your photos are great harmony with your speech.However I think you shouldn't start your speech with hi friends. Your presentation is perfect.Congratulations!
ReplyDelete'hundred,about'are some of the words which are mispronunced.But in general it is a good example of persuasive speech
ReplyDeleteyou presented a very nice place it attracted me.you were not bad and there were some pronouncuation mistakes.fluency was ok.
ReplyDeletethere are grammar mistakes but she presents her place very good.I impressived by her speech and I want to see this place however I caught somethıng.in the introduction she couldn't say 'hi'
ReplyDeleteYou wait a little bit in the second sentences, then you start with ''and''. you should correct this. Also, at the beginninf of the video you should not use ''Hi Friends.'' Except for that, your presentation is very good. Thank you Fatma!
ReplyDeletein generally,it is a good presentation,there are so misspelled words,thank you fatma.
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