there is an echo because of voice recorder. you speaks fluently and your intonation is well in general but there are some pronounciation mistakes like scorpions, connection, medresseh and some words are not understood. in some parts your voice so high. it didnt persuade me to go there.
i have encountered some wrong pauses and intonations in sentences . an example: "the aim of having been built is that..." and some pronouncitaion mistakes: scorpion and antique. you may gild your video with music in the second one.
He speaks sentence by sentence,words by words that makes the video boring. I couldn't catch any mispronounced words because ı cannot focus on the pronounciation. His still voice distracted me every time..And there are some grammatical mistakes as well. It could be better..
first of all, you are talking too slow. you say the words one by one. ı dont understand why you talked like that. there are a few pronunciation mistakes for example separate, connection, beauty ...
Your intonation isn't that effective and you speak too slowly. There are some pronunciation and grammar mistakes which can be heard easily. You pronounce 'seperate' wrong.
from the begining there is a grammatically wrong sentence,has been built in 1385.also you should improve your intonation to attract us and to persuade people about your topis.you speak too slowly and this makes your video a bit boring.anyway your photos are enchanting but this video could be done better.
your intonation is well. at the beginning there is " has been built" is wrong in terms of grammar. this is something bad cuz its just at the beginning. apart from this, your video is good in general.your pronunciation is ok, as well.. good job friend.
In the first sentence you had used present perfect,you should have used past tense. You spoke slowly and you should have used your intonation in a more effective way. But the photographs are attractive.
you sepak slowly but your photos are nice. you have some gramatical mistakes and you said connection wrongly. however you persuaded me to go there thankss for your work :)
if you had spoken faster it would be better. but I liked your pictures and try to intonate your sentences more effectively. but you make me to want to see zinciriye madrasah and lastly the pronunciation of madrasah is wrong
you could call attention of the readers if you read the sentences a bit more lively and fast..you have chosen the suitable photos for your video..you mispronounce the words''madrasah seperate
Your voice is heard well. connection and mosques are words ı heard they were mispronunced. Your information is good but you should speak more effectively
you are too slow in your speech and there are some pronunciation mistakes like especially.. your speech was not so effective bacause it lacked liveliness..
You don't have many mistakes in pronounciation,your words are clear but you are speaking too slowly so this made the video inattractive.Maybe you can speak faster using intonation well
The word 'connection' sounds me as if it was wrongly pronounced. He could have talk more efficiently. His speech is so slow, He tries to pay attention to pronouncation and intonation.
I liked your pictures and ur speech was presuasive enough for to visit there...you are speaking too slowly, so this made the video a little inattractive..but i think it was good....
Firstly, ''Medrese has been built...'' is wrong. Please pay attention to use correct sentences. On the other hand I nearly understood all of the sentences and words easily. This makes your video excellent. Thank you Adil!
Medrese has been built is a wrong usage for historical structures. Connection is wrongly pronounced.
ReplyDeleteyour speech was clear.especially and connection was pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteHe speaks very slowly but his speech is clear. I think he should use intonation a bit effectively.
ReplyDeletehis voice is audible but he speaks a bit slowly.
ReplyDeleteYou should have speak muc more attractively for affecting us. You're speaking very slow and disjointedly. There are some pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeletehe wrongly pronounced the word 'connection'. he has also grammar mistake.He should use more intonation.
ReplyDeleteHe has a gramatical(Has been) mistake and his voice was some cloudy.
ReplyDeletethere is an echo because of voice recorder. you speaks fluently and your intonation is well in general but there are some pronounciation mistakes like scorpions, connection, medresseh and some words are not understood. in some parts your voice so high. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletei have encountered some wrong pauses and intonations in sentences . an example: "the aim of having been built is that..." and some pronouncitaion mistakes: scorpion and antique. you may gild your video with music in the second one.
ReplyDeleteHe speaks sentence by sentence,words by words that makes the video boring. I couldn't catch any mispronounced words because ı cannot focus on the pronounciation. His still voice distracted me every time..And there are some grammatical mistakes as well. It could be better..
ReplyDeletethe speech is very slow. it could be faster.because it may not attract listeners' attention.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation irritates me from beginning to end. there are some mistaken words and grammatical mistake. your speech is slow.
ReplyDeletethe speech is slow and there are problems with intonation and pronunciation.
ReplyDeletefirst of all, you are talking too slow. you say the words one by one. ı dont understand why you talked like that. there are a few pronunciation mistakes for example separate, connection, beauty ...
ReplyDeleteYour intonation isn't that effective and you speak too slowly. There are some pronunciation and grammar mistakes which can be heard easily. You pronounce 'seperate' wrong.
ReplyDeletefrom the begining there is a grammatically wrong sentence,has been built in 1385.also you should improve your intonation to attract us and to persuade people about your topis.you speak too slowly and this makes your video a bit boring.anyway your photos are enchanting but this video could be done better.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is well. at the beginning there is " has been built" is wrong in terms of grammar. this is something bad cuz its just at the beginning. apart from this, your video is good in general.your pronunciation is ok, as well.. good job friend.
ReplyDeleteIn the first sentence you had used present perfect,you should have used past tense. You spoke slowly and you should have used your intonation in a more effective way. But the photographs are attractive.
ReplyDeleteyou made a grammar mistake at the beginning of your speech (has been-1385??) you could speak louder and more lively.
ReplyDeletethe pronounciation of madrasah is wrong.you spoke rather slow so we may get bored after a while . ı think it could be better
ReplyDeleteyou sepak slowly but your photos are nice. you have some gramatical mistakes and you said connection wrongly. however you persuaded me to go there thankss for your work :)
ReplyDeletehe speaks slowly so there is a problem with his intonation.
ReplyDeletegenerally good, but the word scorpions should be pronounced as /skɔrpiəns/ not /skɔrpions/.
ReplyDeleteCong.
if you had spoken faster it would be better. but I liked your pictures and try to intonate your sentences more effectively. but you make me to want to see zinciriye madrasah and lastly the pronunciation of madrasah is wrong
ReplyDeleteyou could call attention of the readers if you read the sentences a bit more lively and fast..you have chosen the suitable photos for your video..you mispronounce the words''madrasah
ReplyDeleteseperate
your speech is slow and there are some pronocnciation mistakes but intonation is good also your photos are very good
ReplyDeleteYour speaking slowly makes me sleep so it didn't draw my attention. I wish you had spoken more lively. then it could be a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour voice is heard well. connection and mosques are words ı heard they were mispronunced. Your information is good but you should speak more effectively
ReplyDeletethe speech is very slow. it could be faster.because it may not attract listeners' attention.and the pronounciation of scorpion was wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou are too slow in your speech and there are some pronunciation mistakes like especially.. your speech was not so effective bacause it lacked liveliness..
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes. And you should speak more effectively.Your photos are good.
ReplyDeleteYou don't have many mistakes in pronounciation,your words are clear but you are speaking too slowly so this made the video inattractive.Maybe you can speak faster using intonation well
ReplyDeleteThe word 'connection' sounds me as if it was wrongly pronounced. He could have talk more efficiently. His speech is so slow, He tries to pay attention to pronouncation and intonation.
ReplyDeleteyour voice is disturbing..loud and hard to understand..you should speak faster..
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear but so slow. Talking sentence by sentence makes the video boring.
ReplyDeletespeech is slow and this makes the video distracting and boring.it could be better..
ReplyDeleteYou pronounced minaret and madrasa wrong .Except that, it is good work.
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ReplyDeleteYour voice record is bad. You seperate sentences wrong and it makes hard to understand. Some words are pronounced wrong such as madrasa and minaret.
ReplyDeletethe speech is fluent but voice is not clear.there are some remarkable pronounciation mistakes like ''madrasa''.
ReplyDeleteI liked your pictures and ur speech was presuasive enough for to visit there...you are speaking too slowly, so this made the video a little inattractive..but i think it was good....
ReplyDeleteMadrasha and connection were pronounced incorrectly.His speech was clear but not fluent.His speech didn't influence me well.
ReplyDeletether were alot of photos and you could give more inf about them.it would be better if you had spoken a bit faster than this
ReplyDeletealthough photos are very nice, his speech is very slow. this makes his video boring.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation isnt effective. you could have added music then ıt could be more attractive. 'connection' should be pronounced like /kəˈnek.ʃən/
ReplyDeleteI think a bit higher voice attracts me.as my friend said, in the beginnig of presentation there is a gramatical mistake I interested.
ReplyDeletehis intonation causes the listeners to get bored and build,about admire and adoring are pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeleteabout is clearly mispronounced and the speech is slow so intonation is not very good pronounciation is not bad
ReplyDeleteCaring intonation and paying attention to use grammatical structures correctly can add to your speech.Your speak is clear but isnt fluent enough
ReplyDeleteThere are some grammar mistakes but your speech is clear.please pay attention to intonation
ReplyDeleteyou speak very slowly but in general it is good
ReplyDeleteYou speak very slowly so I am bored but generally it is a good project.It is given detailed information about the place.Best regards!!!
ReplyDeleteYou are speaking very slowly but your speech is very clear
ReplyDeleteFirstly, ''Medrese has been built...'' is wrong. Please pay attention to use correct sentences. On the other hand I nearly understood all of the sentences and words easily. This makes your video excellent. Thank you Adil!
ReplyDeleteit is good and understandable . music could be used.
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