his intonation must be improved. video is alittle short but the photos are good. he must check the pronounciations of thousand, among, two, founder, arounded, water, mountains. it didnt persuade me to go there.
In my opinion, you pronounce the word ''south and north'' wrongly. Some of the pictures do not correspond with your speech. the pictures are well-chosen. the video lacks music.
The words ''south and north'' are evidently pronounced incorrectly. The video ends suddenly. I think you could have finished your speech with a sentences indicating the end of your speech. furthermore, it would be a great video with an authentic music in the background... pictures are great..
thousand and mountain are two of the mispronunced words in the video. ı think you should have tried to success the intonation.. in your videos, you used vivid photos. in this way, you affected me.in your speech, ypu are talking about this place in order to inform you. finally, ı want to see there:)
his voice wasn't understood clearly. Although he pronounced some words such as mountain,north and south wrongly, his video was good.Also he used good pictures.
There is a sentence which he uses such as ‘ the most important finding is Titus tunnel and beşikli cave’. However, he should have said like this ‘the most important findings are’ , but I liked his tone of voice.
you speak very slowly and did not use intonation effectively. your presentation lacks fluency.the words south,about and arounded are mispronounced.but you chose interesting photos, but if only you added music.it could be better.
the words are understandable enough. the photos have a harmony with your speech. I could only catch the pronounce mistake of moun. you can be careful with the intonation and grammar mistakes.
It is given detailed information about the subject you told.It is well organized presentation.Mountain,period,cement are wrongly pronounced.Your pictures are enchanting.Best regards:)
presentation which has some pauses is not fluent. Mountain, period, south and tunnel are wrongly spelled. It is not effective to persuade me to visit there. you should notice these.
''Mountain''is pronunced wrong.You speak very clearly, I understood everthing but there are some inessential pauses in the sentences. Anyway, I like it... Thank you Ahmet!
he has some pronunciation errors such as, mountain and he sometimes can't speak fluently but he has good pictures and he explains the topic well.
ReplyDeletehis voice is audible but his presentation is short.
ReplyDeletehis intonation must be improved. video is alittle short but the photos are good. he must check the pronounciations of thousand, among, two, founder, arounded, water, mountains. it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletehe has some pronunciation and grammar mistakes such as waterway,mountain and life is starts..
ReplyDeletehis pictures were good.
I caught some pronunciation mistekes such as mountain and arounded, especially. the video was good, but his voice is a bit slow.
ReplyDeletehis slide show was very good but he pronounced some words such as mountain,found wrongly.and I caught a grammar mistake "the life is starts."
ReplyDeleteHe has some pronunciation mistakes. For example he says the 'mountain' wrongly. Also his video is short.
ReplyDeletesouth, mountain and emperor are mistaken words but generally the speech is fluent. you can improve your intonaition.
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronounced words. but the video is not bad.
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronounced words such as mountain,period.he could speak a bit louder
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, you pronounce the word ''south and north'' wrongly. Some of the pictures do not correspond with your speech. the pictures are well-chosen.
ReplyDeletethe video lacks music.
The words ''south and north'' are evidently pronounced incorrectly. The video ends suddenly. I think you could have finished your speech with a sentences indicating the end of your speech.
ReplyDeletefurthermore, it would be a great video with an authentic music in the background... pictures are great..
In my opinion, your whole speech is effective and I liked your video and your pictures a lot if I have a chance , will visit there certainly..
ReplyDeletethousand and mountain are two of the mispronunced words in the video. ı think you should have tried to success the intonation.. in your videos, you used vivid photos. in this way, you affected me.in your speech, ypu are talking about this place in order to inform you. finally, ı want to see there:)
ReplyDeleteyour photos were in accordence with your speech but you had some pronouncation mistakes such as mountain, waterway
ReplyDeletehis intonation is good but he did not pronounce 'mountain' and 'about' correctly.
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes like mountain and successor,and sometimes it was hard to understand your words.
ReplyDeletehis voice wasn't understood clearly. Although he pronounced some words such as mountain,north and south wrongly, his video was good.Also he used good pictures.
ReplyDeleteHis voice is low.He has some pronounciation mistakes like sakses.He should have said sıkses.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation is generally good but there is a very disturbing mispronounced word,it is mountain. You should correct it.
ReplyDeletespeech and intonations are good except some words there isn't pronunciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteThere is a sentence which he uses such as ‘ the most important finding is Titus tunnel and beşikli cave’. However, he should have said like this ‘the most important findings are’ , but I liked his tone of voice.
ReplyDeleteThe speech is fluent. You should have been careful about intonaiton a bit more.
ReplyDeleteyou speak very slowly and did not use intonation effectively. your presentation lacks fluency.the words south,about and arounded are mispronounced.but you chose interesting photos, but if only you added music.it could be better.
ReplyDeletei dont think it is a fluent speech there were many pauses, and the word mountain is pronounced wrongly
ReplyDelete''south,mountain and successor'' are mispronounced and the pronounciation of the word''tunnel'' is kind a ear-splitting. The rest is fine. Very Good!!
ReplyDeleteYou could use music to make your video more effective and the record was cut suddenly. You could do it better.
ReplyDeletethe words are understandable enough. the photos have a harmony with your speech. I could only catch the pronounce mistake of moun. you can be careful with the intonation and grammar mistakes.
ReplyDeleteYou mispronuncied some words such as mountain,among.... I liked your photos. They were in accordance with your speech.
ReplyDeleteMountain is mispronounced. but generally it is well done.
ReplyDeleteI think there is no problem with your intonation. I really enjoed it except for some mispronounced words.
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronunced words.But I like your intonation.It is a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour speech has enjoyed me. I liked your intonation and you pronounced mountain and period wrong. Except for these, I appreciate your work.
ReplyDeleteApart from some mistakes in your pronunciation, your speech is good and fluent.
ReplyDeletemountain should be pronounced as /maʊntɪn/ the rest is good I liked it very much
ReplyDeleteyour speech is clear, photos are wonderful also your explanations are good but there are some pronounciation mistakes
ReplyDeletealthough there are some mistakes of pronouncation,I liked your tone of your voice and video.
ReplyDeleteYou should check your grammar mistakes. you talk in the same tone however your pictures are good you inform us really. thanks
ReplyDeleteI didn’t understand many parts of it because your voice is too low to hear. Pictures were beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYour voice should have been higher. It makes your words unclear to understand and the presentation was a little short.
ReplyDeleteIn your speech, you mispronounced 'successor,mountain and period two or three times.you should take notice of it
ReplyDeleteIt is given detailed information about the subject you told.It is well organized presentation.Mountain,period,cement are wrongly pronounced.Your pictures are enchanting.Best regards:)
ReplyDeleteyou spoke at same tone.mountain was mispronounced.there were some irritating stops.but the photos are nice.in general it was not bad
ReplyDeleteThere are some mispronounced words such as successor north,south,mountain and maybe you could have talked more vividly.
ReplyDeletepresentation which has some pauses is not fluent.
ReplyDeleteMountain, period, south and tunnel are wrongly spelled. It is not effective to persuade me to visit there. you should notice these.
The speech isn't fluent and there are some pauses that distract the the listener.Also,there are some misspelled words.
ReplyDelete'mountain' is mispronounced but the intonation is ok and the voice is clear. it is an interesting video...
ReplyDeletewaterway and south are mispronounced but intonation is not bad,speech is clear enough to understand
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear and understanble but sometimes you are being interrupted by stg. successor, mountain, about are pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeletethere are some mispronounced words but your speech is good
ReplyDeletemountain is mispronounced so you should check it. I really want to go there you persuade me.
ReplyDeleteI am from antakya and ahmet's presentation is very good bu there are some grammar mistakes
ReplyDelete''Mountain''is pronunced wrong.You speak very clearly, I understood everthing but there are some inessential pauses in the sentences. Anyway, I like it... Thank you Ahmet!
ReplyDeleteıf you be careful much in intonation,it would be better,but in generally ı liked your presentation well done Ahmet:)
ReplyDeleteyou spoke as if you read from a sheet.stop at some place.but i liked the place you try to inroduce.GOOD
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