your speech might be simultaneously with the pictures to make it more attractive. while you are talking about the city boder etc, travertian pictures are seen, which is unrelated. the only pronuncaition mistake is "ancient" i think
I could catch only the word example as a mispronounced word, the rest is ok. maybe you could have paid more attention to intonation, or maybe you could have spoken more lively.
you should stress some words, especially those of vital importance to the listener I think.. the rest wwas great. your voice was rather clear I understood every word!
your natural place is attractive to visit for this reason I congratulate you and you are successful while introducing moreover the photos are really nice but your voice could be a bit high to understand.good job :)
you are generally successful but you could have spoken more loudly and lively:) as to your pronunciation mistakes, earthquake is mispronounced. overall your presentation is good. ı liked your video:)
Starting with a question is a nice choice. You could have put some stresses on the words to make your speech attractive. 'opposite' is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteexample is mispronounced. you could have spoken more lively. the rest is ok. congratulations.
ReplyDeleteyour speech might be simultaneously with the pictures to make it more attractive. while you are talking about the city boder etc, travertian pictures are seen, which is unrelated. the only pronuncaition mistake is "ancient" i think
ReplyDeleteyou should pay attention to your intonation but ı couldn't find any pronounciation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteyou mispronounced the word "example" wrongly. you intonated the sentences well ı think.
ReplyDeleteYou could have used more stresses in the words, but I liked your video and pictures. Congratulations!!!
ReplyDeleteı think there isn't a major mistake,your video is good and photos are really attractive.good job,cong.:)
ReplyDeletevoice is clearand understanble. if you spoke more effectively, would be better. good job:) thnks
ReplyDeleteThere isn't any striking pronunciation mistake. Also your intonation is very good but you should have spoken a bit faster. Well done :D
ReplyDeleteI could catch only the word example as a mispronounced word, the rest is ok. maybe you could have paid more attention to intonation, or maybe you could have spoken more lively.
ReplyDeleteyou speak very well,the photos and informations are really good. nice work :D
ReplyDeleteyou should stress some words, especially those of vital importance to the listener I think.. the rest wwas great. your voice was rather clear I understood every word!
ReplyDeleteı think your video is a good one. When you pay more wttention to intonation, it will be better. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteYour ıntonatıon and pronunciation are good to me.also your photos and music are in harmonious.
ReplyDeleteYour video is a good one. ı like your photos. Also you pronunce the words correctly.
ReplyDeleteI liked information you gave,using your voice effectively and pronunciation are very good so your video is well-organized. cong ahmet:)
ReplyDeleteI found his video informative.His speech was understandable and fluent .I didn't any mispronounced words.It is a good presentation.
ReplyDeletemusic and photos are in harmony and effective.your speech also claer and understandable.. good job,cong.=)
ReplyDeleteI think u could be a bit more lively while introducing my city's great natural beauty.:) thnx
ReplyDeleteyour natural place is attractive to visit for this reason I congratulate you and you are successful while introducing moreover the photos are really nice but your voice could be a bit high to understand.good job :)
ReplyDeleteyou are generally successful but you could have spoken more loudly and lively:) as to your pronunciation mistakes, earthquake is mispronounced. overall your presentation is good. ı liked your video:)
ReplyDeleteYour pronounciation and intonation is good. But ı wish you had spoken a little bit loudly.Good job!
ReplyDeleteyour photos, intonation, pronunciation, music and the informations are effective and ı liked the video very much cong :D
ReplyDeleteI think there is no problem in terms of intonation and pronunciation.Thanks
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ReplyDeleteGood pronounciation and good intonation.I also liked the music and the photos,it is a good prepared video.Thank you ahmet:)
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