i couldn't understand all of the sentences but, the pronounciation of "war" (01:14) is wrong it should be /wɔ:r/ not /war/, not /reidʒn/ it is /ri:Dʒn/(03:26)
You use the intonations well in general. It persuaded me to want to visit this museum but there are some pronunciation mistakes you have done except for war. One of them is 'evil'(3:10), it should be /ˈiː.vəl/ not /evəl/ and the other one is 'statue'(3:41), it should be /ˈstætʃ.uː/ not /stætu:/
I missed some sentences, but I liked your video,and I agree with you on the point that everbody should come and se hatay. it persuades people to go there. additionally the pronounciation of the word 'mosaic' is wrong you pronunce it as it is a turkish word.
you speak too fast, ı couldn't understand some parts. your video attracts me thanks to your intonation and interesting pictures.maybe because ı liked the museums.but you pronuenced some words like war wrongly, this is very clear. your music isn't suitable with your topic in my opinion.you can do better.
Screaming doesn't mean to be persuasive. You are speaking screamingly in the video. Your photos and speech are syncronised, that's very good. The pauses in your speech are correct.The only pronunciation mistake is the "war"
wowwwwww ı should admit that it is the most effective video ı have watched. your photos are perfect yes the video is a bit long however ı didn 't get bored while watching. your intonation and pronunciation are perfect. the only problem was the sound ıt may resut from your recorder. well done batuu :)) well donee ı want to see it immediately
The voice is so irritating that I hardly watched until the end. The words 'archeology', 'again' were prononunced wrong and some words cannot be understood.
I think you were a bit lower than your performance in the classroom. To be honest I was expecting more. But you really chose proper words and I liked the photos. All in all there are some mispronounced words like statue.
The speech is so natural,that is why I always like your speeches. it wasn’t memorise.The fluency is great.War is said wrong. that is all I'll go there :)
The music is fine. Suburb, again, statue is pronunced wrongly. Questions asked at the beginning of your speech is a good choice to get attention of people.
your intonation is wonderful,your speech is very fluent. ı liked it but there are some words mispronounced such as archaeology, war,again,according to... apart from these mistakes, your presentation is very good
there isnt any problem with your intonation but I cannot catch many sentences because your record isnt understandable.Also, mosaic and organize are pronounced incorrectly as I understand.
your video is pleasent with the music you used. Also your voice and your fluency are enjoyable. But your record could be more audible. Anyway,you can persuade a lot of people to go there.
at the beninning of your video your voice is very high unnecessarily in my opinion..there are some pronunciation mistakes such as area,archaeology, war, byzantine, period and again.
Your music and photos are pretty influential but there are a few pronounciation mistakes such as'byzantine' and 'war' but you are speaking fluently.It is a well-prepared video :)
the word evil should be pronounced as /iːvəl/ and talk a bit slower. The rest is good. please share your sample persuasive speech outline with everybody.
I liked your pictures and music a lot and your intonation is really good. I can't catch any pronunciation error it is a good presentation I think he can makes me want to go there
ther is an irritating sound behind your voice.you must have been on the way while recordin or in a windy place.the intonations are good.artifact has been pronouncued wrongyl.
it sounds as if your voice is coming from somewhere under the ground, which makes your video look geniunely amateurish.. you have too many pronunciation mistakes to write. Here are some of them; artifact ['ɑ:rtə,fækt],evil /ˈiː.vəl, period etc... the music sounds like a requiem, actually..
Firstly, I didn't like the sentences ''As we learnt...'' you did not teach us something? It should be changed. In addition, there is a problem with recorder. On the other hand, your speech is very good. Thank you.
your speech is not understandable perhaps because of the recording,there are many pronunciation mistakes some of them are area,war,again and statue.Organizing is well,that is, the photos are compatible with your speech.Apart from these,it seems good.
intonations and the speech are good.but the voice is a bit hoarse.in general the video is not bad but there are some mispronounced words like: archaeology, war,again etc.
I think he want to shout at us instead of persuading us to go there :) After description with the music, his unexpected access terrified me you should use fade in and fade out in music but pronounciation is good except war.
He talks very fast. However, I couldn't understand some sentences. And the word 'war' is not pronunced correctly, but apart from this I liked his intonation.
your speech is not understandable.your voice comes very different. your voice in class is better and softer here is very irritating maybe because of recorder.
Firstly,I want to say that his photos and his müsic were in harmony.And his intonation was perfect.If there hadn't been irritating sound under his voice,his video would have been more effective for us.thank you.
The volume of the music was higher than your voice, so i couldnt understand and catch all of it...The words statue and war were not pronounced correctly..your intonation is good..
Your voice wasn’t understandable because of bad recording. Area,again,war,period,byzantine and archeology were not pronounced correctly. you didn't persuade me to go there.
ı did like the music, the photos and the question u asked at the very beginning. you did persuade me to go and see there ! nothin more to say Batuhan..Congr. ! :)
I couldn't understand many of the words because of the recorder and her speech isn't fluent.Furthermore,there are many pronounciation mistakes such as 'mozaic,archaelogical,again,surrounding,byzantine'.
I can't understand what you say properly but your intonation can be said good.Not the speech but the great pictures can take people to Hatay Archaelogical Museum.ı wondered it
voice could be better and there are some pronunciation mistakes. Batuhan says the Hatay ... museum. the video is good.a museum is a good option to present.
i couldn't understand all of the sentences but, the pronounciation of "war" (01:14) is wrong it should be /wɔ:r/ not /war/, not /reidʒn/ it is /ri:Dʒn/(03:26)
ReplyDeleteYou use the intonations well in general. It persuaded me to want to visit this museum but there are some pronunciation mistakes you have done except for war. One of them is 'evil'(3:10), it should be /ˈiː.vəl/ not /evəl/ and the other one is 'statue'(3:41), it should be /ˈstætʃ.uː/ not /stætu:/
ReplyDeleteI missed some sentences, but I liked your video,and I agree with you on the point that everbody should come and se hatay. it persuades people to go there. additionally the pronounciation of the word 'mosaic' is wrong you pronunce it as it is a turkish word.
ReplyDeleteyour musıc wasn't suitable for this video ı think and you should change your voice recorder but your intonatıon was good
ReplyDeleteyou speak too fast, ı couldn't understand some parts. your video attracts me thanks to your intonation and interesting pictures.maybe because ı liked the museums.but you pronuenced some words like war wrongly, this is very clear. your music isn't suitable with your topic in my opinion.you can do better.
ReplyDeleteIt is really persuasive.After this video,I want to go there.His fluency is good.Except from the pronounciation of 'war',I couldn't see mistake.
ReplyDeleteScreaming doesn't mean to be persuasive. You are speaking screamingly in the video. Your photos and speech are syncronised, that's very good. The pauses in your speech are correct.The only pronunciation mistake is the "war"
ReplyDeletewowwwwww ı should admit that it is the most effective video ı have watched. your photos are perfect yes the video is a bit long however ı didn 't get bored while watching. your intonation and pronunciation are perfect. the only problem was the sound ıt may resut from your recorder. well done batuu :)) well donee ı want to see it immediately
ReplyDeleteHis voice is a little bit irritating. I dont know if its because of his recorder but not cool. And he mispronounced statue and byzantine.
ReplyDeleteThe voice is so irritating that I hardly watched until the end. The words 'archeology', 'again' were prononunced wrong and some words cannot be understood.
ReplyDeleteThe music,photos and voice are in harmony.The only pronounciation mistake is ‘war’. It was a good prepared video. Good job
ReplyDeleteI think you were a bit lower than your performance in the classroom. To be honest I was expecting more. But you really chose proper words and I liked the photos. All in all there are some mispronounced words like statue.
ReplyDeleteintonation is well used. photos are good and you explained them good. in generally it is a good project.
ReplyDeleteThe speech is so natural,that is why I always like your speeches. it wasn’t memorise.The fluency is great.War is said wrong. that is all I'll go there :)
ReplyDeleteYou are screaming some parts of the speech and it irritates me. because of this, I couldn't catch some words. the word war is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteThe music is fine. Suburb, again, statue is pronunced wrongly. Questions asked at the beginning of your speech is a good choice to get attention of people.
ReplyDeleteHis voice irritates me so I don't understand some verbs. He mispronounced area,archaeology, war, byzantine, period and again.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is wonderful,your speech is very fluent. ı liked it but there are some words mispronounced such as archaeology, war,again,according to... apart from these mistakes, your presentation is very good
ReplyDeleteThere are some pronunciation mistakes. For example; war and again I think he could have done it better.
ReplyDeletethere isnt any problem with your intonation but I cannot catch many sentences because your record isnt understandable.Also, mosaic and organize are pronounced incorrectly as I understand.
ReplyDeleteyour video is pleasent with the music you used. Also your voice and your fluency are enjoyable. But your record could be more audible. Anyway,you can persuade a lot of people to go there.
ReplyDeleteat the beninning of your video your voice is very high unnecessarily in my opinion..there are some pronunciation mistakes such as area,archaeology, war, byzantine, period and again.
ReplyDeleteYour music and photos are pretty influential but there are a few pronounciation mistakes such as'byzantine' and 'war' but you are speaking fluently.It is a well-prepared video :)
ReplyDeleteyour music and photos are nice but your voice recorder is irritating.also your voice is loud.but in general, it is good.
ReplyDeletethe word evil should be pronounced as /iːvəl/ and talk a bit slower. The rest is good. please share your sample persuasive speech outline with everybody.
ReplyDeleteI liked your pictures and music a lot and your intonation is really good. I can't catch any pronunciation error it is a good presentation I think he can makes me want to go there
ReplyDeletether is an irritating sound behind your voice.you must have been on the way while recordin or in a windy place.the intonations are good.artifact has been pronouncued wrongyl.
ReplyDeleteit sounds as if your voice is coming from somewhere under the ground, which makes your video look geniunely amateurish.. you have too many pronunciation mistakes to write. Here are some of them; artifact ['ɑ:rtə,fækt],evil /ˈiː.vəl, period etc... the music sounds like a requiem, actually..
ReplyDeleteHis voice is sometimes irritating.And he has some pronunciation mistakes like war and period. But music is good.
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ReplyDeleteFirstly, I didn't like the sentences ''As we learnt...'' you did not teach us something? It should be changed. In addition, there is a problem with recorder. On the other hand, your speech is very good. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is not understandable perhaps because of the recording,there are many pronunciation mistakes some of them are area,war,again and statue.Organizing is well,that is, the photos are compatible with your speech.Apart from these,it seems good.
ReplyDeleteintonations and the speech are good.but the voice is a bit hoarse.in general the video is not bad but there are some mispronounced words like: archaeology, war,again etc.
ReplyDeletethe music and intonation is good but his voice isn't good
ReplyDeletemusic is too high because of which it is harder to understand what you say but photos are charming
ReplyDeleteHe couldn't use his voice. It is very irritating.Also, there are some pronunciation mistakes like archaeology,again and war.
ReplyDeleteYou could have talked more slowly.Apart from that your pronounciation is well
ReplyDelete'War' is the most the most outstanding pronounciation mistake. And I don't think it is so persuasive.
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ReplyDeletethe pronouncation of war is really disturbing....your voice is also too loud...but you are fluent ı lıked it
ReplyDeletethere are some pronounciation mistakes but his pronounciation is good. his voice is audible.
ReplyDeleteI think he want to shout at us instead of persuading us to go there :) After description with the music, his unexpected access terrified me you should use fade in and fade out in music but pronounciation is good except war.
ReplyDeleteHe talks very fast. However, I couldn't understand some sentences. And the word 'war' is not pronunced correctly, but apart from this I liked his intonation.
ReplyDeletethe music is very suitable to this video. he used good intonation. it was interesting to listen to him.the word war is wrong pronounced.
ReplyDeletehe speaks fastly and loudly.music and photos good but I didnt find it persuasive.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is not understandable.your voice comes very different. your voice in class is better and softer here is very irritating maybe because of recorder.
ReplyDeleteFirstly,I want to say that his photos and his müsic were in harmony.And his intonation was perfect.If there hadn't been irritating sound under his voice,his video would have been more effective for us.thank you.
ReplyDeleteThe volume of the music was higher than your voice, so i couldnt understand and catch all of it...The words statue and war were not pronounced correctly..your intonation is good..
ReplyDeleteYour voice wasn’t understandable because of bad recording. Area,again,war,period,byzantine and archeology were not pronounced correctly. you didn't persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeleteI can’t understand it well as your voice record is bad. I could comment about your presentation if it was understandable.
ReplyDeleteı did like the music, the photos and the question u asked at the very beginning. you did persuade me to go and see there ! nothin more to say Batuhan..Congr. ! :)
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand many of the words because of the recorder and her speech isn't fluent.Furthermore,there are many pronounciation mistakes such as 'mozaic,archaelogical,again,surrounding,byzantine'.
ReplyDeleteintonation is good but ı can not understand all the sentences as far as ı understand war is mispronuonced
ReplyDeleteyour voice is too irritating to understand presentation.so sometimes I couldn't follow some sentences due to your speed.but intonation is suceesful
ReplyDeleteI can't understand what you say properly but your intonation can be said good.Not the speech but the great pictures can take people to Hatay Archaelogical Museum.ı wondered it
ReplyDeleteyou speak too fastly so I could not catch some words but in general your intonation is good.thanks
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ReplyDeletehis voice was high and his sayings weren't understood clearly. He didn't persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletegenerally your intonation is good . ı liked your video and pictures cong.
ReplyDeleteyour presentation is good but I think there is a problem with your recorder. Your photos are also good but you pronounced war wrongly.
ReplyDeleteyour speech isn't clear there are some pronouncation mistakes but the presentation is good
ReplyDeletesome times you chance your voice degree i fell someone else spoke.pictures are well chosen. it is a good work.
ReplyDeletevoice could be better and there are some pronunciation mistakes. Batuhan says the Hatay ... museum. the video is good.a museum is a good option to present.
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