your video is fantastic. your speech is fluent. just deliberately is mispronounced.your sppech is some different because of the recorder. the rest is ok. good job Aylin. congratulations :)
the video about turkey is perfect. it is very nice to think to add such a thing.ı liked yr video. ı think that there is a problem with deliberatly,too. the rest is ok. thanks:)
aylin your video really effected me a lot. ı liked it so much. your intonation and pronounciation is good, but at some parts you speak hoarsely maybe the reason is recorder. good job.
Dear Aylin, it was a good presentation like other projects in the class. The only bad thing was voice recorder. I liked your video very much. good Job!!!
hi maviş thanks 4 ur nice comments about my project.It is very kind.However u made only one mistake that this video was prepared only by me.I think u remembered the second project in which I mentioned about it at the end of the video,that is at the references.In fact, second video was also prepared by me but as u can understand,I could not find pictures of ecevit bay.In this sense,I used the video of Mavi Yapım .that is all.Anyway thank alot.
your intonation is good. in respect to pronounciation, there are a few pronounciation mistakes such as compose and ottoman. apart from these problems, your video is successful. but it could be better if you had added a music.
a well-prepared video aylinn ;)) and your speech is at least as much good as your video :) i didnt hear any clear mistakes
ReplyDeleteyour video is fantastic. your speech is fluent. just deliberately is mispronounced.your sppech is some different because of the recorder. the rest is ok. good job Aylin. congratulations :)
ReplyDeletethe video about turkey is perfect. it is very nice to think to add such a thing.ı liked yr video. ı think that there is a problem with deliberatly,too. the rest is ok. thanks:)
ReplyDeleteyou speak fluently and ı think there are no mispronounced words well-done
ReplyDeleteaylin your video really effected me a lot. ı liked it so much. your intonation and pronounciation is good, but at some parts you speak hoarsely maybe the reason is recorder. good job.
ReplyDeleteperfectt! ı lkied your video too much. you speak fluently well done aylin :)
ReplyDeletethe beggining of the video is very attractive, ı like your video but some parts of video ı think the pauses are unnecessary. cong:D
ReplyDeletethere is a problem with your recorder and I think there isn't any other problem. good job. cong.
ReplyDeleteDear Aylin, it was a good presentation like other projects in the class. The only bad thing was voice recorder. I liked your video very much. good Job!!!
ReplyDeletewhat a professinal video presentation is this :D your intonation and pronunction are also very effective. cong. my friend good job ;)
ReplyDeleteyour voice record could be better. Your intonation is good. you mispronounced 'height'
ReplyDeleteAylin, your video is one of the best in terms of intonation and pronunciation. Yet, you could use a background music. Cong. =))
ReplyDeleteYor intonation,pronunciation nad photoss all in harmonious.It is very nice video.
ReplyDeleteYour pronunciation and intonation is really good.
ReplyDeleteI think your pronunciation and intonation are very good. I liked your presentation.
ReplyDeletei couldn't hear a major mistake.i liked your speech,it is very fluent.good job aylin:)
ReplyDeleteThe video is super and I liked ur intonation and pronunciation,well done,cong. Aylin ... :)
ReplyDeleteyour intonation and pronunciation are good. it is well-prepared vide.
ReplyDeleteI liked your speech and video =)
ReplyDeleteThe beginning is very attractive although it was not prepared by you. But the rest is ok. Very good!
ReplyDeletehi maviş thanks 4 ur nice comments about my project.It is very kind.However u made only one mistake that this video was prepared only by me.I think u remembered the second project in which I mentioned about it at the end of the video,that is at the references.In fact, second video was also prepared by me but as u can understand,I could not find pictures of ecevit bay.In this sense,I used the video of Mavi Yapım .that is all.Anyway thank alot.
ReplyDeletehi dear, you are good at pronounciation and intonation :)well prepared project.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good. in respect to pronounciation, there are a few pronounciation mistakes such as compose and ottoman. apart from these problems, your video is successful. but it could be better if you had added a music.
ReplyDeleteI think it is too long but I am not bored.your voice can be a bit clear.I like your intonation
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