turistic, connected, repair, equipments, civilizations are some of the pronounciation mistakes. intonation is good in general. it persuaded me to go there.
there arent any pronunciation mistakes. photos and music is really attractive butsomestimes you are talking so slow. there are some unnecessary pauses between the words
you used intonation effectively and this is important in my opinion, it attracts us. i liked your photos and video.ı could not find any misspelled words.you speak fluently.
ı couldn t catch any pronouniation mistakes you use words well ı liked your presentation too much the photos are very good and the music is fantastic. congrulations
'' each other,materials,civilization'' are mispronounced and ''unfortunately'' sounds a little bit weird to me. She 's fluent but could be better. Good!!
the music is harmonies with your speech but you speak a bit fast. you should pay attention to this and there are some mispronounced words. I liked it :D
your clear voice and photos makes your vide charming.Also I couldn't catch a mispronounced word.However, I wish you hadn't written your school number. It is a very good job:))
her pronounciation is good eneough. her voice is audible and the music and the photos of her presentation are in harmonyy..ı admires your tone of voice:D:D
civizilation is only said wrongly I think. At the beginning of the video, you could add music because you started to talk about it immediately. I like it admittedly, it persuaded me to go there. :)
Your voice is very good and bacground music is vert well chosen one. Your information is enough and it is a very good presentation. I like it. Thank you Bahar!
she is audible and she use intonation in her sentences I think this is a good presentation and her pictures are clear.
ReplyDeleteI think her presentation is good. She uses her intonation.
ReplyDeletethe speech is good as there is nearly no pronunciation mistake. she speaks good.
ReplyDeleteturistic, connected, repair, equipments, civilizations are some of the pronounciation mistakes. intonation is good in general. it persuaded me to go there.
ReplyDeleteher pronounciation is good. her voice is audible and the music and the photos of her presentation is selected well.
ReplyDeleteyoour presentation ,intonation ,pronounciation are really good.your pictures are also very charming
ReplyDeleteher presentation is good. I couldn't find any pronunciation mistake.photos are really impressive.ıt persuaded me to go adana/stone bridge.
ReplyDeletethere arent any pronunciation mistakes. photos and music is really attractive butsomestimes you are talking so slow. there are some unnecessary pauses between the words
ReplyDeletethis video is very nice and your pronounciation is also very succesful I could not find any mistake while watching well done:)
ReplyDeleteIt is a nice video to get information about Stone Bridge. I’ve just heard some mispronunciations like built and building
ReplyDeletewith your pronouncation intonation and your effective and clear photos you had prepared a good presantation ı like it
ReplyDeleteI did not see any pronunciation and intonation mistakes. well prepared...
ReplyDeleteYour voice is very good.It is certain that you prepared well. A good speech...
ReplyDeleteit is really well prepared. youur video is good.
ReplyDeleteher pronunciation, intonation and photos were very nice.
ReplyDeleteGenerally,the video is a well prepared one. I liked your fluency and intonation. There is almost no mistake.Good job:)
ReplyDeleteShe is talking rapidly without stopping and she is pronouncing some words stressed even if it is not necessary.
ReplyDeleteyour video is very weel-prepared. Intonatiın and fluency are good. There are some pronunciation mistakes. Congrulations. ;)
ReplyDeletethis is a good video but there are a few mistakes like "11 meter...". and also the pronounciation of "ancient" is wrong.
ReplyDeleteyou used intonation effectively and this is important in my opinion, it attracts us. i liked your photos and video.ı could not find any misspelled words.you speak fluently.
ReplyDeleteApart from some mispronounced words,I didn’t hear any mistake in the video. It is a good one.
ReplyDeleteı couldn t catch any pronouniation mistakes you use words well ı liked your presentation too much the photos are very good and the music is fantastic. congrulations
ReplyDeleteI liked your video very much. Your speech was fluent, and your intonation was good. It was a well-prepared presentation..Well Done.
ReplyDelete'' each other,materials,civilization'' are mispronounced and ''unfortunately'' sounds a little bit weird to me. She 's fluent but could be better. Good!!
ReplyDeletethe music is harmonies with your speech but you speak a bit fast. you should pay attention to this and there are some mispronounced words. I liked it :D
ReplyDeleteyou are speaking so fluenthly that I understand each word very well. you have chosen suitable photos for your speech.the intonation is going well.
ReplyDeleteThis video was a good one because you use intonations well. I just heard one pronunciation mistake and it is the way you pronounce 'centimeter'.
ReplyDeleteyour clear voice and photos makes your vide charming.Also I couldn't catch a mispronounced word.However, I wish you hadn't written your school number. It is a very good job:))
ReplyDeleteIt is well prepared fluent and according to intonation rules. well done. :)
ReplyDeleteIntonation is perfect and your speech is fairly fluent.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any mistakes good work
ReplyDeleteyour speech is clear, music and photos are harmonious so it is a well organised video
ReplyDeleteit is well-preapred work.so I couldn't find lots of mistakes there.cong:)
ReplyDeleteYour speech is fluent.And I like your pronunciation and intonation.It is one of the videos that I like.
ReplyDeleteI cannot catch different pronounciation mistakes but in general your intonation is good.
ReplyDeleteIt was perfect. I didn’t find any mistake
ReplyDeleteI only cought one wordthat was pronounced wrong: edition. You spoke fluent and it is a good
ReplyDeletepresentation at all.
generally, your presentation is good... you speak fluently and you have chosen the suitable photos...but there are some words mispronounced...
ReplyDeleteher pronounciation is good eneough. her voice is audible and the music and the photos of her presentation are in harmonyy..ı admires your tone of voice:D:D
ReplyDeleteYour speech is effective and audible.ı liked your way of using intonation
ReplyDeleteYour speech is fluent and she uses the intonation well.History is mispronounced.I liked your speech.Best regards:)
ReplyDeletethe speech is good as there is hardly any pronunciation mistakes...
ReplyDeletespeech is well done.pronunciation and intonation also good. it is a good job.cong..
ReplyDeleteYour voice pitch is good,photos are enchanting and fluency is perfect.cong:)
ReplyDeleteyour voice pitch is really good.. it is evident that the video is well-prepared because there isnt almost a pronunciation mistake... good job!
ReplyDeletecivizilation is only said wrongly I think. At the beginning of the video, you could add music because you started to talk about it immediately. I like it admittedly, it persuaded me to go there. :)
ReplyDeleteI didn't catch any word mispronounced and her intonation is also good.
ReplyDeleteeverything is ok congr..;))
ReplyDeleteın general,pronounciation is good.The voice is audible and she speks fluently.But I didn't like the music:))
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is generally good. available/əˈveɪ.lə.bl ̩/ and connected were pronounced wrongly
ReplyDeleteyour photos and speech are great harmony with each other and your intonations are perfect. Congratulations!
ReplyDeletephotos and music really attract me I like your intonation.THANKS
ReplyDeleteYour voice is very good and bacground music is vert well chosen one. Your information is enough and it is a very good presentation. I like it. Thank you Bahar!
ReplyDeletethe intonation and her voice is really impressing.except some pauses in her speech,it is well done job.
ReplyDelete