You aren't telling a story. Your speech is a bit boring due to the your voice. Also, I couldn't understan why you started the speech too late. Pronunciation is good but intonation is unfortunately not good. It would be better.
it is too long. you can use a short enterance. your voice comes sleepy. complete, regulater, distrubuted pronounced wrongly. in class you are better than this. intonation is bad in general. you didnt speak fluently. unfortunately it didnt persuade me to go there.
the introduction and concluding parts may be shorter,and your speech faster.because of your slow speech the video is longer than normal. you pronounced during wrong. what it needs is fluency
The 1.55 second which makes the video longer and longer is too long for a video to start and the music and her voice are opposite like black and white:)And her pronounciation isn't bad but ''waterfall'' is mispronounced.
your speech is too slow you are talking as if you were bored. there is no intonation and ı think at the beginning, there is a long entrance and unnecesarry, boring music. ı think you could have started talking after a few seconds. there are a few pronunciation mistakes. these are waterfall and complete.
The music at the beginning is perfect for your video but you could have kept it shorter. You speak slowly. Words such as channel,and complete are pronounciated wrong.
it is too long duration for an entrance ı think.but what attracts me to your video is colourful photos and music is lively but it is not suitable with your topic in my opinion.and you should increase your voice pitch, you should improve your intonation.
the music in the entry ,s really makes me curious about the vidoe. it is good but the rest makes me kinda sleepy :) ı couldnt find an pronunciation mistake.good job Belma. (pay attention to getting it more lively ;) )
Your project is too long. Your speech was really slow and your voice tone was the same in all parts of the video. You could be more lively. However,the music was exciting and the photographs you used were good.
I wish you started to speak at the very beginning of the video rather than using music. your speech is too slow, you could speak more lively. but I liked the photos you used and I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake.
at first the music you used was very lively and enjoyable,a bit long however.ı supposed you would speak lively and abit faster like in the music.but you spoke rather slow and you should have paid attention to intonation.but the photos are colorful ı liked them
woww ı liked your music too much. ıt got me excited while listening to however it could be better if you had spoken a bit enthusiastically. the photos are very nice. ı couldn t find any pronounciation mistakes or ı missed them :)) well done
I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake, but your intonation and slowness made me sleep. you would be a good story teller but you couldn't persuade me to go there :)
ıt is too long and I think you have to start your speech earlier because we listen to the music until "1.17" except these I liked your voice pitch and and I couldn't find ronunciation erros it is a good one
you speak slow so I am bored while I am listening to you. why does music start late? it can begin earlier.although you ask question in your speech,it doesn't pay listeners' attention because of the fact that your conservation is slow.it might be better.
Firstly, I liked the music so much. But, I think I kept it long and so you got bored Also, my video became longer than ı thought. I spoke slowly. I could have spoken in a more fluent way. Next time I should pay attention to it.
The music and pictures are great in the beginning to draw attention but the mic sound after the music made you look amateurish.. you should be a bit lively in your speech..
She could have talk more enthusiastically. her speech got me bored, because She was very slow. However. generally her tone of voice was really good. Music and photos also attracted me.
it is a bit long presentation. she could have started her speech earlier. she speaks slowly. the photos and the music of her presentation are very good.
The music is interesting but too long. I am about to sleep due to your voice, you are talking so slowly so ı couldn't catch any pronounciation mistakes.Intonation should be improved.
I think the music was very nice but if the music had passed with her speech simıltaneously at the beginning of the video,it would have beenbetter.Also,she spoke slowly and didn't speak fluently.
l expected a gorgeous work when l opened the video and heard the music.it may not be gorgeous but it is good.you have spoken so slowly and intonations havent been used so effectively.l think the marveolus was pronounced wrongly.
the music is very nice. your voice clear. if you spoke faster, it would be better.anyway its good job. the words excursion/ɪkˈskɜː.ʃən/US /-ˈskɝː-/ surround /səˈraʊnd/ were wrongly pronounciated.
unnecessary duration in the beginnig of presentation waited me very long.I found few pronuncation faults but I wish you would use lively tone in your speech because sometimes it bored me:(.
If you started earlier to speak, I think it could be more effective but I like the pictures and music.I am sure that you will be more careful about intonation second time
You starts to taliking very late. It takes a 45 second... you should pay attantion not to make your audiences bored with your speech. anyway, the video is very good, thank you Belma!
Complete is wrogly pronounced. The speech is a little bit slow. The rest is ok.
ReplyDeleteyour presatatıon was too long and your speech was slow ı think.but your photos was very goodand colourful
ReplyDeleteI think the music at the beginning is unnecessary. Your speech is too slow for this reason I am bored a little. Waterfall was mispronounced
ReplyDeleteYou aren't telling a story. Your speech is a bit boring due to the your voice. Also, I couldn't understan why you started the speech too late. Pronunciation is good but intonation is unfortunately not good. It would be better.
ReplyDeleteher speech was too slow and she pronounced the word 'complete' wrong.Maybe,it could be shorter.
ReplyDeleteit is too long. you can use a short enterance. your voice comes sleepy. complete, regulater, distrubuted pronounced wrongly. in class you are better than this. intonation is bad in general. you didnt speak fluently. unfortunately it didnt persuade me to go there.
ReplyDeletethe introduction and concluding parts may be shorter,and your speech faster.because of your slow speech the video is longer than normal. you pronounced during wrong. what it needs is fluency
ReplyDeleteThe 1.55 second which makes the video longer and longer is too long for a video to start and the music and her voice are opposite like black and white:)And her pronounciation isn't bad but ''waterfall'' is mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteit is long video you could shortened the music which is at the beginning. your speec is slow and that makes it a bit boring.
ReplyDeleteIf only you spoke faster to complete this nice music and impresssing pictures...
ReplyDeleteit is a long entrance but her pictures are very attractive. Her pronounciation is not bad.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is too slow you are talking as if you were bored. there is no intonation and ı think at the beginning, there is a long entrance and unnecesarry, boring music. ı think you could have started talking after a few seconds. there are a few pronunciation mistakes. these are waterfall and complete.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures arevery good but her speech is a bit slow. It could be better.
ReplyDeleteThe music at the beginning is perfect for your video but you could have kept it shorter. You speak slowly. Words such as channel,and complete are pronounciated wrong.
ReplyDeleteit is too long duration for an entrance ı think.but what attracts me to your video is colourful photos and music is lively but it is not suitable with your topic in my opinion.and you should increase your voice pitch, you should improve your intonation.
ReplyDeletethe music in the entry ,s really makes me curious about the vidoe. it is good but the rest makes me kinda sleepy :) ı couldnt find an pronunciation mistake.good job Belma. (pay attention to getting it more lively ;) )
ReplyDeleteThe music you used in the beginning is a bit long and you speak very slowly,you could be faster i think and please try to be more lively :)
ReplyDeleteYour project is too long. Your speech was really slow and your voice tone was the same in all parts of the video. You could be more lively. However,the music was exciting and the photographs you used were good.
ReplyDeleteI wish you started to speak at the very beginning of the video rather than using music. your speech is too slow, you could speak more lively. but I liked the photos you used and I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake.
ReplyDeleteat first the music you used was very lively and enjoyable,a bit long however.ı supposed you would speak lively and abit faster like in the music.but you spoke rather slow and you should have paid attention to intonation.but the photos are colorful ı liked them
ReplyDeletewoww ı liked your music too much. ıt got me excited while listening to however it could be better if you had spoken a bit enthusiastically. the photos are very nice. ı couldn t find any pronounciation mistakes or ı missed them :)) well done
ReplyDeleteI couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake, but your intonation and slowness made me sleep. you would be a good story teller but you couldn't persuade me to go there :)
ReplyDeleteıt is too long and I think you have to start your speech earlier because we listen to the music until "1.17" except these I liked your voice pitch and and I couldn't find ronunciation erros it is a good one
ReplyDeleteyou speak slow so I am bored while I am listening to you. why does music start late? it can begin earlier.although you ask question in your speech,it doesn't pay listeners' attention because of the fact that your conservation is slow.it might be better.
ReplyDeletethe introduction and cıncluding parts could be a bit shorter.. you pronounce the words correctly..it is a good one..
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I liked the music so much. But, I think I kept it long and so you got bored Also, my video became longer than ı thought. I spoke slowly. I could have spoken in a more fluent way. Next time I should pay attention to it.
ReplyDeletespeech is slow and it would be better if you had kept it shorter.
ReplyDeleteyour presetation is a bit long but your pronounciation and intonation are good also your music and photos are wonderful
ReplyDeleteYour speech is too slow and so I got bored. But your intonation is good.It could be better.
ReplyDeletethe speech was too slow and the pronounciation of the word 'complete' wrong.
ReplyDeleteThe music and pictures are great in the beginning to draw attention but the mic sound after the music made you look amateurish.. you should be a bit lively in your speech..
ReplyDeletebelma your music is a bit different but really enjoyable:) But you are speaking so slowly.If you pay attention this, it would be a better video :)
ReplyDeleteYou should speak a bit swiftly.It can be much better.Your pictures and music really attracts me.
ReplyDeleteShe could have talk more enthusiastically. her speech got me bored, because She was very slow. However. generally her tone of voice was really good. Music and photos also attracted me.
ReplyDeletethe music is exaggerated ıtink..but why did you speak so slowly..I dıdnt understand
ReplyDeleteit is a bit long presentation. she could have started her speech earlier. she speaks slowly. the photos and the music of her presentation are very good.
ReplyDeleteThe music is interesting but too long. I am about to sleep due to your voice, you are talking so slowly so ı couldn't catch any pronounciation mistakes.Intonation should be improved.
ReplyDeletethe music at the beginning was lively but you started to speak as if you were sad. But it was easy to understand
ReplyDeleteThe music in the beginning is too long and irritating. Why did you speak like you were tired? You could have been lively.
ReplyDeletethe pictures and other insturments not bad.but the speaker speaks slowly.the intro is too long.generally boring and hard to follow.
ReplyDeleteyou have played the music very long.. you should start earlier.....I couldn't catch any pronunciation mistake. In genrall, it was good for me...
ReplyDeleteI think the music was very nice but if the music had passed with her speech simıltaneously at the beginning of the video,it would have beenbetter.Also,she spoke slowly and didn't speak fluently.
ReplyDeletel expected a gorgeous work when l opened the video and heard the music.it may not be gorgeous but it is good.you have spoken so slowly and intonations havent been used so effectively.l think the marveolus was pronounced wrongly.
ReplyDeletethe music is very nice. your voice clear. if you spoke faster, it would be better.anyway its good job. the words excursion/ɪkˈskɜː.ʃən/US /-ˈskɝː-/ surround /səˈraʊnd/ were wrongly pronounciated.
ReplyDeletespeech is slow,it can be more lively and except some words there aren't mistakes.
ReplyDeleteI liked photos and music.However, she spoke too slow. Also some words were mispronounced.
ReplyDeleteYou should have spoken more lively by paying attention to the tonation and your video is too long,I think.It bores the listeners.
ReplyDeleteunnecessary duration in the beginnig of presentation waited me very long.I found few pronuncation faults but I wish you would use lively tone in your speech because sometimes it bored me:(.
ReplyDeleteI thought you will never start to spek. you are speaking like a grandma telling folktales to her grandchilds. ı wanted to sleeppppppppppppp.
ReplyDeleteIf you started earlier to speak, I think it could be more effective but I like the pictures and music.I am sure that you will be more careful about intonation second time
ReplyDeleteexcept for channel, pronounciation is good, the speech is a bit long and slow,but intonation is not bad,the speech is clear to understand
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ReplyDeleteyou speak very slowly but your pictures are fascinating cong:)
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately,I am bored.There is no intonation and fluency.You are speaking very slowly.Still,You are prepared well.Best regards!!
ReplyDeleteYour music at the beginning is too long and you are speaking very slowly. However your presentation and photos are good.
ReplyDeleteyour pictures are very fascinating. the presentation is well-prepared. however, your voice a bit slow.
ReplyDeleteher speech is too slow and I think it is too long:(
ReplyDeleteYou starts to taliking very late. It takes a 45 second... you should pay attantion not to make your audiences bored with your speech. anyway, the video is very good, thank you Belma!
ReplyDeletecan we play şemmamme. the music is too long and not suitable for a introduction Are you ill. you can spoke more loudly and fell confidence
ReplyDeletevoice is low but video is good and could be better. music is good.successes.
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